OMG must buy doujinshi on my list
it would be fun if we can trade our doujinshi in a convention~
i like the way how u color ur background, so awesome :3
I wonder what makes Youmu quit her job
Handwriting is always, always better than computer lettering. Provided it's legible, of course.
I half-agreed what Kinoko said
handwriting might not always be better than computer lettering depending on the situation
but in your title page
mechanical text doesn't rly fit the atmosphere of ur title page
the text seem to be too bold and hard corner
It feels like the text is trying command the viewer
and the composition of the text kinda framed the whole image
the whole title feels like a uncle sam poster in my point of view
I could be wrong but I suggest to find some font that is more humanist
I kinda went ahead of myself and made quick adjustment as an example
the text still seem to be a bit mechanic but it has a different feeling compare to the bold hard corner text
again this is just an example for suggestion, and I apologize that I used ur work |OAO>
would like to see it complete and we can trade doujinshi |OwO>