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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #930 on: August 23, 2011, 01:24:43 AM »
>... Pocket the phone and walk up to her.

>Hold her... Hug her. Give her that shoulder to cry on... She needs this.

>"I will. We will. I promise you that. We won't stop until she is back with us... With you."

>"And I'm sorry... I truly am sorry."
>You place your phone back into a pocket and walk up to the satori.
>You hug the satori, letting her cry into her shoulder.
>"I miss her. I miss her so much. I hate seeing Rin the way she is."
>"Bring her back... Please bring her back..."
>The satori cries, and cries, and cries.

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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #931 on: August 23, 2011, 01:32:59 AM »
>Stroke her hair gently; let her cry it out.
>"I know Satori... I know... I promise we will."

>Motion for Nitori to come over.

>Say calmly...
>"I have a feeling... we may need a couple more rooms."

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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #932 on: August 23, 2011, 02:00:41 AM »
>Stroke her hair gently; let her cry it out.
>"I know Satori... I know... I promise we will."

>Motion for Nitori to come over.

>Say calmly...
>"I have a feeling... we may need a couple more rooms."
>"I want to believe..."
>"I want to see Rin and Utsuho smiling again..."
>The satori continues to cry into your shoulder while you call over Nitori.
>Nitori nods.
>"Yeah, we have plenty of space, at least."

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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #933 on: August 23, 2011, 02:09:02 AM »
> Allow ourselves another smile.  Seems like things are going to get a bit better.
> Continue holding Satori until she's let it all out.

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #934 on: August 23, 2011, 02:20:18 AM »
>"In which case..."

>Back to Satori.

>"You can stay with us here if you want. I understand if you want to bring things from your place; in which case, I'd be willing to help you bring them over here. What do you say?"

>If she says yes, tell Nitori to make whatever preparations she needs.

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« Reply #935 on: August 23, 2011, 02:31:48 AM »
> Allow ourselves another smile.  Seems like things are going to get a bit better.
> Continue holding Satori until she's let it all out.
>You smile to yourself, things are definitely going to get better.
>You continue to hold the satori until she calms down enough to stop crying.
>"Ah... I haven't felt this way in a while..."

>"In which case..."

>Back to Satori.

>"You can stay with us here if you want. I understand if you want to bring things from your place; in which case, I'd be willing to help you bring them over here. What do you say?"

>If she says yes, tell Nitori to make whatever preparations she needs.
>"I suppose I shall stay here."
>"There are a few mementos that I want to retrieve."
>You tell Nitori to make whatever preparations are necessary, to which she responds: "Just take another room around the one that you put Aya in."

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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #936 on: August 23, 2011, 02:37:25 AM »
>To Nitori: "Hmm, that does sound pretty convenient."

>To Satori: "Whenever you feel ready, we'll head off and get what you need."

>Together, we can work through this.
>We will bring her back.

>"After all... We have to fix what should have never happened!"

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Re: Hatate Quest!
« Reply #937 on: August 23, 2011, 02:51:36 AM »
>To Nitori: "Hmm, that does sound pretty convenient."

>To Satori: "Whenever you feel ready, we'll head off and get what you need."

>Together, we can work through this.
>We will bring her back.

>"After all... We have to fix what should have never happened!"
>"I never bothered touching the living area when it became obsolete. It's coming in handy now, though."
>"Then, let us go."
>Things are looking up.
>You're going to help Nitori fix everything.
>You have several people to trust with you now.
>Everything is going to work out, somehow.
>Gensokyo will go back to being the paradise it once was.
>You head out with the Satori to collect her belongings...
>There may still be a lot of issues with the world, but things will definitely get better from here on out.

HATATE QUEST -END-

Three is the magic number, right?
Please wait warmly.

-Bonus scenes (?!?!?!)

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #938 on: August 23, 2011, 03:03:59 AM »
Sorry Dormio...

>BGM Request!

>>Depressed Beginning: Aya's State.
>>Trip to Former Hell
>>Meeting with Satori
>>The Puzzle of the Base
>>Desperation: Utsuho's State.
>>Fight for Life: Satori's Plan vs Nitori's Life
>>Finding the Kappa.
>>The Hakurei Shrine
>>Encounter with Momiji: Tears of a Friend
>>Orin's Decision
>>Orin's Fight
>>The Aftermath: What Have we Done?
>>Satori's Stand
>>Satori's Break-Down
>>The Look to the Future

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #939 on: August 23, 2011, 06:59:00 AM »
>Bonus scenes
>Feedback + Analysis on Hatate's behaviour
>Is there actually any hope of reviving Okuu, or is that part of the next quest?

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #940 on: August 23, 2011, 07:22:35 AM »
Sorry Dormio...

>BGM Request!
I. Hate. You.

>Is there actually any hope of reviving Okuu, or is that part of the next quest?
Nyoro~n

>Feedback + Analysis on Hatate's behaviour
Overall, I think you handled most things pretty well. Violence solves everything.
Ask about the specific things you want answered please. :)

Honestly, I didn't really want people to go down to the underground so early.
But it was to be expected with what had happened to Utsuho in Nitorin Quest.

There were several methods of obtaining the money needed, one was to simply borrow more from Momiji. Though who knows what strings might have been attached...

Talking with Rin was a bastardized speech test. There was only a few specific answers that people wouldn't normally go for that would result in her wanting to live on.

Momiji could have also been talked down, depending on what you said to her.

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #941 on: August 23, 2011, 07:33:08 AM »
Violence solves everything

 8) Yer damn right it does

>That was pretty much what I was looking for, actually.
>Correct answers to the Rin speech
>Would there have been any way to kill Reimu?
>Bgm request :trollface:

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #942 on: August 23, 2011, 10:33:03 AM »
>Bonus scenes



>You walk with the satori through her home.
>You watch her as she picks up a few items, such as a small bag of marbles.
>"Utsuho gathered these and gave them to me as a gift, you know."
>"She loved things like these, yet she collected all these to give them to me."
>After the satori is done, the two of you make your way back to the lab where the satori makes a quick detour to where Utsuho's body is being kept.
>"Utsuho... I don't know if they can bring you back or not, but I'm going to believe."
>"I'll be waiting with your favorite things, so come back quickly..."



>"It's done, finally."
>Nitori kicks back in her chair and stretches.
>Fuuko and Yuuko are fast asleep at another desk, both surrounded by papers.
>Nitori decides to let the two have their rest.
>On her table sits a small tube, filled with a blue liquid.
>Nitori caps the tube before running to Hatate's garden.
>Nitori bursts through the door and quickly scans the greenery to find Hatate watering some plants.
>Hatate begins to turn as she hears Nitori coming through the door.
>"What's up?"
>Nitori takes in a moment to look at what Hatate has managed  to do here, she converted one of the unused lab rooms into a giant terrarium.
>"Hey, Hatate. We're waking up Aya."
>Hatate's eyes widen.
>"We're... we're..."
>"That's right. I've found it. We're going to wake Aya up."
>Hatate tries to keep her emotions in check, but can't stop the tears from welling in her eyes.
>"Come on, let's not waste our time here. And cheer up, you can't have the first thing she sees be your crying face."
>"I know, I know..."
>Hatate wipes away her tears with her hands.
>"Aya, let's fix this world together..."



>"I am only here to visit a friend. Let me stay just a little longer, please."
>"If you aren't here to make a donation, stop wasting my time and get out, you filthy youkai."
>"Please. Just let me see her, talk to her."
>"You know, you're really pushing your luck here. I'm in a good mood, so if you leave right now, I'll let you go."
>Reimu stands in front of the gate to the shrine, counting the notes in the wad of cash she's carrying.
>"At least me see her. Please, just let me see her."
>Reimu clicks her tongue in annoyance and puts away the cash in her pocket.
>"Your type just doesn't learn, does it? I even gave you the offer of a lifetime."
>...



>She was absolutely filthy, her white clothes were stained various colors, and she had gone without washing for over a week.
>She simply sat there, slumped against a wall, surrounded by empty glasses and bottles.
>Her head was pounding, but that was infinitely preferable compared to hearing those voices.
>What she couldn't block out, however, was that memory. The scene playing itself over and over again in her head.
>She would reach out to Hatate, only to have her reject her.
>Hatate would simply  walk away, and no matter how hard she chased her, she could never catch up.
>Why hadn't she noticed it sooner?
>She could have prevented it.
>It was her fault.
>She should have done something before it was too late.
>"Damn it..."
>"Damn it damn it DAMN IT!"
>She grabbed the nearest object, an empty bottle, and threw it at the wall.
>She picked up the picture lying next to her. One featuring herself with Hatate with large smiles with blue skies above them. It was her favorite.
>"Why Hatate... Why did you have to leave...?"
>"All I needed was to be near you..."
« Last Edit: August 26, 2011, 07:50:38 AM by Dormoe Mami »

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #943 on: August 23, 2011, 11:20:01 AM »
> What would have happened if we did borrow money from Tewi?

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« Reply #944 on: August 23, 2011, 01:26:30 PM »
>... Oh snap. I forgot about Yamame.
>What will be Yamame's fate then? Does she actually see Kisume in the end?

>YAY! We get an Aya back! After all that hard-work, Hatate gets a good end.
>Satori friendship is good too!

>Where's Rin in all this?
>A scene with Rin and a changed Satori would be nice, if that's the case. Bet that would be a shock for her.

>Oh, and because you hate me sooooooooo much...  :derp:
>>Rummaging Around: Okuu's Collection
>>Good End: The Emotional Awakening

>And one more thing...
>Were there any moments in this Quest where Hatate could have died?
>If so, when, where and how?

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #945 on: August 23, 2011, 01:36:28 PM »
>And one more thing...
>Were there any moments in this Quest where Hatate could have died?
>If so, when, where and how?

The only three I can think of are the three tengu, momiji and Yamane, so I'd be interested to hear the answer to this one.

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« Reply #946 on: August 23, 2011, 01:46:08 PM »
Well, to add on to that then...

>Could any character we interacted with have died as well?
>Names would be nice; again, how would said deaths have happened?

This just to confirm a LOT of things I possibly saw. (And thankfully were avoided.)

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #947 on: August 23, 2011, 02:04:46 PM »
>Correct answers to the Rin speech
>"If she were to move again, if her heart were to start beating again, do you think that she would be alive?"
Nope.
>"Would you go to any lengths to be with someone you loved?"
The response you guys gave was pretty good. Basically, yes but with some limitations.
>"And if you had no way to look at what was ahead? Would you still take the leap?"
Yes, if you had to make the decision then and there. Different paths can open up with time, you know.
Mentioning what Okuu wanted at any point would autofail you since, to Rin, Okuu wants what she wants: to be together at any cost.

>Would there have been any way to kill Reimu?
Good luck trying.

> What would have happened if we did borrow money from Tewi?
Have fun paying that particular loan off.

>... Oh snap. I forgot about Yamame.
>What will be Yamame's fate then? Does she actually see Kisume in the end?
Isn't it sad, Yamame?
Reimu adheres to the Hatate SpecialTM philosophy of solving problems, and applies it to anything else she feels like.

>YAY! We get an Aya back! After all that hard-work, Hatate gets a good end.
>Satori friendship is good too!
Ayayayayayayayayaya.
Things are looking up!

>Where's Rin in all this?
>A scene with Rin and a changed Satori would be nice, if that's the case. Bet that would be a shock for her.
Rin is helping Nitori investigate methods of resurrection.

>And one more thing...
>Were there any moments in this Quest where Hatate could have died?
>If so, when, where and how?
Hatate dying?
Let's see...
Confront Reimu.
Don't get any antivenom from Yamame.
The tengu and Momiji would not have actually killed you.
Satori.

>Could any character we interacted with have died as well?
>Names would be nice; again, how would said deaths have happened?
Nitori, Fuuko, Rin, Satori, Yamame, Momiji were all potential candidates for death. Yuuko can't die. :(
Nitori committing suicide under Satori's influence.
Nitori/Fuuko being messed with by the Satori.
Rin committing suicide to be with Okuu.
Satori having nothing to live for after everyone in the lab is dead, not that she had much to begin with.
Yamame from Reimu.
And you could flip out at any time and try to kill whoever if you felt like it.
« Last Edit: August 23, 2011, 02:06:34 PM by Dormoe Mami »

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #948 on: August 23, 2011, 02:59:08 PM »
>Momiji... I'm so sorry for leaving you in that state...
>Is there any chance of being able to fix things with Momiji? With Aya back, it sounds possible... right?  :ohdear:

>Wait... Yamame from Reimu?
>Does this mean... Yamame is DEAD right NOW?!  :ohdear:

>Out of curiosity, how would Satori have killed us?
>>Actually... I'm going to request something I really shouldn't...
>>Request Bad End Scene: Hatate's Suicide. (Satori's Mind-Manipulation, same thing she did to Nitori.)
[I'm wanting the whole thing too; from Hatate talking to Satori, to Satori doing whatever she did to Nitori to Hatate, and then whatever happens next. All of it HAS to be in the view point of Hatate; as in, it has to be in the same style as the game. Oh gosh... What have I requested?)

>Also, where's my BGM? I've given you enough.  :derp: (You didn't disappoint with Nitori Quest, so don't disappoint me here.)

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #949 on: August 23, 2011, 03:12:19 PM »
So we failed because we brought Okuu up. I sees now.

Hatate SpecialTM

Oh god that's going to haunt us, isn't it.

>Requesting Scene: First meeting (Evil Nitori)
>Requesting Scene: Payment time is up

god, I feel evil now :ohdear:

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #950 on: August 23, 2011, 09:06:42 PM »
Also~

> BGM:  Hatate Quest

> Did we deviate extremely far from any of your original plans?

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« Reply #951 on: August 23, 2011, 10:15:24 PM »
>Momiji... I'm so sorry for leaving you in that state...
>Is there any chance of being able to fix things with Momiji? With Aya back, it sounds possible... right?  :ohdear:
I dunno, probably?

>Wait... Yamame from Reimu?
>Does this mean... Yamame is DEAD right NOW?!  :ohdear:
Who knows, man?

>Out of curiosity, how would Satori have killed us?
Similar thing she did to Nitori.

>>Actually... I'm going to request something I really shouldn't...
>>Request Bad End Scene: Hatate's Suicide. (Satori's Mind-Manipulation, same thing she did to Nitori.)
[I'm wanting the whole thing too; from Hatate talking to Satori, to Satori doing whatever she did to Nitori to Hatate, and then whatever happens next. All of it HAS to be in the view point of Hatate; as in, it has to be in the same style as the game. Oh gosh... What have I requested?)
>Requesting Scene: First meeting (Evil Nitori)
>Requesting Scene: Payment time is up
Psh, unlock your damn bonus scenes.
(I'll get around to it)

>Also, where's my BGM? I've given you enough.  :derp: (You didn't disappoint with Nitori Quest, so don't disappoint me here.)
> BGM:  Hatate Quest
I'm working on it, be patient. >:(

> Did we deviate extremely far from any of your original plans?
Not too far. Most things went as I planned them.

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #952 on: August 24, 2011, 12:51:21 PM »
>>Depressed Beginning: Aya's State.
>>Trip to Former Hell
>>Meeting with Satori
>>The Puzzle of the Base
>>Desperation: Utsuho's State.
>>Fight for Life: Satori's Plan vs Nitori's Life
>>Finding the Kappa.
>>The Hakurei Shrine
>>Encounter with Momiji: Tears of a Friend
>>Orin's Decision
>>Orin's Fight
>>The Aftermath: What Have we Done?
>>Satori's Stand
>>Satori's Break-Down
>>The Look to the Future
>>Depression: Momiji's Regret
>>Rummaging Around: Okuu's Collection
>>Good End: The Emotional Awakening

The song I want for the second one isn't on Youtube, so I tried to upload it myself.
Unfortunately, I've spent an hour having Youtube basically say "No. GTFO." to me,  so I'll edit that one in when I manage to get it to actually work.

So my computer really hates Youtube or something. Fortunately, I sent everything over to Dorakyura and he uploaded for me so yay!
« Last Edit: August 26, 2011, 08:42:07 AM by Dormoe Mami »

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« Reply #953 on: August 24, 2011, 03:04:46 PM »
Awesome list there; some of them really punch through to you.

Major shout out to Meeting with Satori; that really matched the atmosphere of that whole scene. The Hakurei Shrine was exactly as I imagined it, and What Have we Done was a true gut punch; more fitting when you think of how quickly Hatate went to get Nitori after that whole scene.

And damn you for putting TAM into this whole thing. Are you trying to make me love you more then I all ready do? The last two tracks were also tear-jerkers in their own right; more so when picturing Aya waking up and Hatate seeing her... Yeah...

Eagerly waiting for Trip to Former Hell. And wow, no actual Touhou arranges in there. To be fair, the one you included in Nitori Quest (Utsuho going Insane) was damn right awesome; so it would have been hard to top that.  :3

All in all, awesome list. Now to start taking notes for Yukari Quest.  :derp:

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« Reply #954 on: August 24, 2011, 08:58:11 PM »
I nearly forgot!  This has been nagging at me for awhile but...

Did you get the whole "lab-panel maze" idea from Portal 2? :3

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

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« Reply #955 on: August 24, 2011, 09:18:50 PM »
Awesome list there; some of them really punch through to you.

Major shout out to Meeting with Satori; that really matched the atmosphere of that whole scene. The Hakurei Shrine was exactly as I imagined it, and What Have we Done was a true gut punch; more fitting when you think of how quickly Hatate went to get Nitori after that whole scene.

And damn you for putting TAM into this whole thing. Are you trying to make me love you more then I all ready do? The last two tracks were also tear-jerkers in their own right; more so when picturing Aya waking up and Hatate seeing her... Yeah...

Eagerly waiting for Trip to Former Hell. And wow, no actual Touhou arranges in there. To be fair, the one you included in Nitori Quest (Utsuho going Insane) was damn right awesome; so it would have been hard to top that.  :3
\o/ Youtube link is up for the trip to hell thing.
I love music boxes!
And thanki-

All in all, awesome list. Now to start taking notes for Yukari Quest.  :derp:
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

I nearly forgot!  This has been nagging at me for awhile but...

Did you get the whole "lab-panel maze" idea from Portal 2? :3
It probably influenced me.

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #956 on: August 26, 2011, 09:10:43 AM »
Another bonus scene that I completely forgot about when writing the other ones has been added as well as a BGM to go with it.

And do I have to write bad ends?
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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #957 on: August 26, 2011, 11:07:41 AM »
The hakurei shrine theme  :o

But naw, if it's too much trouble, you don't have to write the bad ends.

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #958 on: August 28, 2011, 12:20:02 PM »
>Requesting Scene: First meeting (Evil Nitori)
>You step inside the laboratory, satori and kasha in tow.
>As you enter, your instincts tell you that something is wrong. Very wrong.
>Still, you came here to find a raven, and that is exactly what you're going to do.
>The three of you press on into the lab, checking all the doors you come across.
>You're about to open another door when the satori reaches for your hand.
>You look back at the satori, she appears to be wearing a worried expression on her face.
>You ask her what's wrong.
>"She isn't in this room, let us search elsewhere."
>You wonder what sets this room apart from the ones that you've already checked.
>The fact that the satori doesn't want to go in means that there must be someone in there, right?
>"No. Let us move on."
>You disregard the satori's warnings and decide to open the door, curiosity getting the better of you.
>As soon as you do, you immediately regret your action.
>The kasha covers her mouth and looks into the room with horror, the satori simply grimaces.
>Inside, you see Nitori sitting next to an operating table, talking to the person on the table.
>On the table, you can see a kappa with her body torn open.
>You can see her heart beating irregularly between the lungs, which inflate and deflate rapidly.
>As you stand there, silent, the dissected kappa's head turns towards you.
>"H  p   ..."
>"  l   e..."
>Nitori looks up at you at around the same time.

>_


>Requesting Scene: Payment time is up
>You simply don't have the money.
>There's nothing you can do.
>You sit there head in your hands.
>You take a look at Aya and her never-waking frame.
>Is that how you're going to end up?
>No...
>Who will look after Aya? Who's going to look after you?
>As you wonder about these things, the deadline passes...
>You simply sit beside Aya and pray. What else can you do?
>You feel something tapping your shoulder.
>"Time's up, where's the cash?"
>You turn to see the Hakurei Maiden standing there.
>How did she even get into your home?
>You see her looking at Aya.
>"Well, isn't that cute?"
>You tell her that  if she touches Aya, you'll...
>"You'll... what, exactly?"
>"Here I am, keeping the border intact for all of you, and this is the thanks I get?"
>"Well, I have no use for people that can't pay up."
>...


Will get around to that other one when I'm not sick.

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Re: Hatate Quest! [Complete]
« Reply #959 on: September 03, 2011, 05:34:43 AM »
>>Request Bad End Scene: Hatate's Suicide. (Satori's Mind-Manipulation, same thing she did to Nitori.)
>You tense, and prepare to slap some sense into the satori.
>You tell the satori that her advice is useless as you swing your arm towards her.
>Unfortunately, the satori is already prepared and she catches your arm before it reaches her.
>You try to pull your arm back, but the satori doesn't let go.
>"I told you before we left about what I would do if you were to fail."
>"Do you even understand what you are forcing us to go through?"
>"Do you realize what you've done to Rin?"
>"You know so little, you understand nothing about the feelings of others, yet you toy with their emotions."
>"You are a monster."
>You continue to try to pull yourself away from her, but find that the satori is surprisingly strong, given her small frame.
>"I will have you feel her pain."
>You continue to struggle, but the satori always manages to stop your next attempt at getting free.
>During all this, you feel... strange.
>Everything but the satori seems to be fading into darkness.
>Soon, you find yourself standing with the satori on nothing.
>You turn to check your surroundings, it's pitch black.
>You turn to face the satori again, shouting "What did you d-"
>The satori is gone. In her stead, you see Aya in a wedding gown.
>She simply stands there, smiling at you. Many other tengu are there, congratulating the two of you.
>You rub your eyes in disbelief, you feel your hands getting wet. Are you crying?
>You open your eyes and the first thing you see are your hands, painted red.
>Aya lies on the floor, a small pool of blood growing beneath her.
>You see her look up at you, tears in her eyes as she mouths a single word to you.
>"Why?"
>You close your eyes and scream.
>You need to get away from that. You run, and keep running.
>You spend what seems like an eternity running, still you need to come to a stop eventually.
>You double over to catch your breath.
>"What have you done?!"
>You freeze and slowly turn around.
>Nitori and Momiji are standing over Aya's body, terrified looks on their faces.
>This is wrong. Everything is wrong. None of this could possibly be real.
>Nitori steps back, asking "W-who are you?". The fear in her voice is rather apparent.
>Momiji stands there, seemingly unable to comprehend what's going on.
>You have no idea either, just like Momiji. This can't be real, it's strange. Far too strange.
>There has to be a way out, some way to get away from this ridiculous situation.
>In your hand is a knife.
>You laugh dryly. This is a rather sick joke.
>Still, this isn't real, and it doesn't look like there's any other way out.
>You take a deep breath before you thrust the knife into your chest.
>It hurts, and you feel your legs give way. You can't see anything but the image of the broken Aya.
>Suddenly, the entire scene shatters and you are, once again, standing in nothing.
>You feel rather uncomfortable, you try to move, only to realize that your feet and hands have been bound together.
>You come close to losing your balance but manage to stay upright, that is until something hits you from behind.
>You fall forward into the dirt.
>You quickly take stock of your surroundings, you appear to be in the human village.
>You're surrounded by humans. Do they realize what they're doing?
>You tell them that you're going to rip them apart with your bare hands if they don't let you go.
>"Look at this bitch, trying to act tough."
>"I wonder how long she'll manage to keep that act up?"
>Your body stiffens as you feel something moving around your skirt.
>You shout "What the hell do you think you're doing?!" and get kicked in response.
>"Someone shut her up. She's annoying"
>"Don't worry, I'm on it."
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>Who are you...? You don't know anymore. You think something inside you just died.
>How long have you been here...? Too long.
>Your entire body is numb. You feel sick. You wish you were dead...
>The humans left a while ago, but you've been unable to find the energy to bother even searching for your clothes again.
>You simply lie there in the dirt.
>You wonder what Aya would think if she saw you like this.
>You shift slightly, and you see a knife sticking out of the ground. Perhaps one of the humans dropped it.
>You reach out to grab the knife and run it through yourself.
>The scene shatters around you and, again, you find yourself standing in nothing.
>...