Maidens of the Kaleidoscope

~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: ItsRagtime on June 03, 2011, 08:17:46 PM

Title: Raegtime's Art
Post by: ItsRagtime on June 03, 2011, 08:17:46 PM

Ran Yakumo (http://itsragtime.deviantart.com/art/TOUHOU-IS-MY-HERO-211544007)
Miyako Yoshika (http://itsragtime.deviantart.com/art/Rigid-Paradise-210700435?q=gallery%3AItsRagtime&qo=1)

Tell me what you think~

Title: Re: Raegtime's Art
Post by: DX7.EP on June 04, 2011, 08:02:04 AM

Quote from: ItsRagtime on June 03, 2011, 08:17:46 PM

Ran Yakumo (http://itsragtime.deviantart.com/art/TOUHOU-IS-MY-HERO-211544007)
Miyako Yoshika (http://itsragtime.deviantart.com/art/Rigid-Paradise-210700435?q=gallery%3AItsRagtime&qo=1)

Tell me what you think~

Pretty haughty Ran, and creepy zombie Yoshika is great!

I think the eyes are a bit too high up to be presented like that. I'm aware it's stylistic, but it'd make more sense to put them a bit lower or to cover a few bits with hair IMO.

Yoshika's hands also look a bit deformed. Hands are a bitch to draw, I know, but this is quite off.