As always, please comment and mention typos in this thread.
You misspelled Houston!
"The best of alchemists, perhaps a few of my teachers, would recognize the purpose it all."I think 'of it all' or 'Only the best...at all' would work better. Other than that, I don't really have much to say - I don't get very involved in romance stories, although it was well done.
That should be "at all" right?
Canon canon canon canon canon
If these stories weren't so completely different from the canon I probably wouldn't read them. I'm just different like that. :VProbably living up to a misspelling of your name, then. |3