Maidens of the Kaleidoscope

~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: flipflopity on February 03, 2016, 03:48:31 AM

Title: [Art] Flip?s art dump
Post by: flipflopity on February 03, 2016, 03:48:31 AM
So this lurker decided to start his own art thread. I think this?ll be the place where I'll post a few WIPs or sketches along with a finished piece once in awhile considering how I draw at a snail?s pace for now. I?d greatly appreciate any criticism ?n pointers.

Anyways I guess to start off here's a WIP of a Mokou-tan I've been working on for the past week:
(http://i.imgur.com/X7ySNqkm.png) (http://imgur.com/X7ySNqk)
Title: Re: [Art] Flip?s art dump
Post by: Mеа on February 03, 2016, 08:55:07 AM
Hey welcome! AAA is ever in need of any fresh breeze to clear out the dust that settles. Don't have much to say, you're not done yet anyway. I do appreciate that sense of depth in the area by the armpits/side of the ribcage, something I'm working on.
Title: Re: [Art] Flip?s art dump
Post by: flipflopity on February 13, 2016, 06:12:08 AM
(http://i.imgur.com/FXCD2oMt.png) (http://imgur.com/FXCD2oM)
Found a few days to chip away at this but I think this is almost done save for fixing some of the shading and adding a few details. Might ditch two-tone shading for a few things like the shoes or hair.
Other than that a few things I noticed is that I've had difficulty with clothing and hair in that they look too stiff  :V?
Title: Re: [Art] Flip?s art dump
Post by: Mеа on February 13, 2016, 09:43:09 AM
That uh, right hand looks very uncomfortable to tuck your hand inwards at that much of an angle against your hip.