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Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #60 on: March 08, 2017, 04:32:15 AM »
Daiko:

>Have we seen Kogasa before?
>If so, IkoVision her.

White:

>Look over.

> "H-Hey! Sanae! Calm down!" Sakura follows, and so do the three tengu.
> It was one of the first notable faces you met the day Sakura requested you those things.
> You IkoVision Kogasa.
> "Eh? Uh? What? Nani?" She looks around.

> You look there...
> ...

Sanae?

> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #61 on: March 08, 2017, 04:35:01 AM »
//Looks like waiting for Raf would make this better...
Daiko:

>IkoVision Sanae as well.
>"Sanae? I've got Kogasa contacted right now. What is this all about?"

Blue + Bastet:

> Follow Sanae and our group!

Tsuru:

>Look around.
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #62 on: March 08, 2017, 09:25:25 AM »
Niji White:

>"M-Miss S-Sanae ?! But how can you be here ?!"
>Turn into light.

Niji Blue:

>Turn into light, spread out and follow Sanae.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #63 on: March 08, 2017, 04:39:18 PM »
//Looks like waiting for Raf would make this better...
Daiko:

>IkoVision Sanae as well.
>"Sanae? I've got Kogasa contacted right now. What is this all about?"

> You IkoVision Sanae. This one is as nervous as the real one...
> "W-Wha...?" She asks nervously. "T-Two Kogasa's... o-one of them is dead... I-I gotta find her!"
> It doesn't seem she paid much attention to what you said...

Blue + Bastet:

> Follow Sanae and our group!

Tsuru:

>Look around.

> The two of you start following the others as well.

> You are in the infirmary... and a very large one. It seems it has every possible treatment for anything that can happen... it's a bit silly, however, since it has so many stretches and curtains separating them for nothing. It's not like a great amount of people can end injured... ... Right?
> Gray? She hasn't returned yet. She followed Rin.
> Chloe, Charlotte and Corin are here, the latter being in a stretcher.
> "Are you going to check on KyuuKyuu?" Asks Corin.
> "That's a weird name, by the way..." Charlotte says.

Niji Blue:

>Turn into light, spread out and follow Sanae.

> You turn into light, spreading yourself up and you continue following the group.

Niji White:

>"M-Miss S-Sanae ?! But how can you be here ?!"
>Turn into light.

> You turn into light. Marry backs off.
> This person... isn't Sanae. You can feel it.
> It's so dark here that you think this person is Sanae... but it just looks a bit like her... It's almost like-
> Suddenly, you are in the snow. No shrine. No Kogasa's dead body. No threatening Sanae. Just... the Youkai Mountain like always...
> "W-What...?" Marry look around.
> _
ALL HAIL PROPOSALING-SAMA. SURPRISE FOR HIM.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #64 on: March 08, 2017, 04:42:11 PM »
Sanae-V!Daiko:

>"Sanae! I'm talking to her right now. I'm about to ask where she is, if she knows."

Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>"Kogasa, where are you right now? What do your surroundings look like?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #65 on: March 08, 2017, 04:49:59 PM »
Sanae-V!Daiko:

>"Sanae! I'm talking to her right now. I'm about to ask where she is, if she knows."

Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>"Kogasa, where are you right now? What do your surroundings look like?"

> "W-What?! D-Do it! PLEASE!" Sanae pleads.

> "Uuuh..." Kogasa seems confused. "I'm at the Misty Lake..."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #66 on: March 08, 2017, 04:52:18 PM »
Niji Blue:

>"Miss Sanae, there was some person there too... she looked like you, but... she felt different... threatening even... and the dead Kogasa is gone too..."


Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #67 on: March 08, 2017, 04:59:17 PM »
Niji Blue:

>"Miss Sanae, there was some person there too... she looked like you, but... she felt different... threatening even... and the dead Kogasa is gone too..."

> Sanae stops immediately. "Just tell me where is Kogasa! I can't let anything happen to her!"
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #68 on: March 08, 2017, 05:06:41 PM »
Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>Examine her.
>"Where? Which side is the water to you? Describe it more please."
>Try to vision it as she describes it.

Sanae-V!Daiko:

>"I'm getting the details right now to see where she is and what's around her. So far, she's said she's at Misty Lake."
>Give Sanae details on how Kogasa looks. Even down to posture and expression.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #69 on: March 08, 2017, 05:16:09 PM »
Niji Blue:

>Follow Sanae !

NIji White:

>Uh...

Niji Gray:

>"Miss Rin... please be okay... you are my friend..."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #70 on: March 08, 2017, 05:46:25 PM »
Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>Examine her.
>"Where? Which side is the water to you? Describe it more please."
>Try to vision it as she describes it.

Sanae-V!Daiko:

>"I'm getting the details right now to see where she is and what's around her. So far, she's said she's at Misty Lake."
>Give Sanae details on how Kogasa looks. Even down to posture and expression.

> Kogasa is... like her usual self. Same umbrella. Same heterochromia. Same clothes, but with a blue coat added to them.
> "Uhm... In the far side of it. The contrary side of the mansion. Er... the water is right in front of me..."
> You imagine the place...
> You are now at the Misty Lake in the vision. Kogasa is sitting down and having her back resting in a tree.
> Due to the perspective, and Kogasa flexing her legs a bit, you can see her... uh... white underwear...
> The real Kogasa has a relaxed expression.
> "H-How are you able to do this, though? And why are you asking where am I?"

> As soon as you tell her where the Karakasa is, she goes in that direction. You keep telling her details...
> You wonder if you should tell the underwear part...

Niji Blue:

>Follow Sanae !

> You and the others, some of them mildly confused, follow too.

NIji White:

>Uh...

> "L-Let's get out of here, Niji-chan..."
> You realize that Marry still has the book...

Niji Gray:

>"Miss Rin... please be okay... you are my friend..."

> "P-PLEASE... G-GO AWAY..." Rin says in a broken tone.
> _
ALL HAIL PROPOSALING-SAMA. SURPRISE FOR HIM.

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #71 on: March 08, 2017, 06:03:07 PM »
Niji Gray:

>"But i don't wanna leave you alone... i heard about you from Miss Corin."
>Step closer.
>"I wanna make you happier..."

Niji White:

>"The book... what is in there ?"

Niji-chan:

>C-Can we ?

Niji Scarlet:

>"Ugh... where was i again ?"


Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #72 on: March 08, 2017, 06:31:31 PM »
Niji Gray:

>"But i don't wanna leave you alone... i heard about you from Miss Corin."
>Step closer.
>"I wanna make you happier..."

> You step closer, and Rin curls into a ball. She starts to shift slowly.
> "No... No... No..."

Niji White:

>"The book... what is in there ?"

Niji-chan:

>C-Can we ?

Niji Scarlet:

>"Ugh... where was i again ?"

> "I-I don't know..." Marry looks at it. "It looks... really old..."

> You can.
> "Niji?" Alic snaps with her fingers in an attempt to draw your attention. "Everything alright?"
> "Yuu?" Yuudachi looks at you worriedly.

> "You seemed blocked..." Flandre says.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #73 on: March 08, 2017, 06:38:16 PM »
Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>Er, try to envision/move ourself to her side a bit, but not too close, so we avoid seeing that.
>"Sanae seems incredibly worried about you. Doing this sort of thing is one of my abilities."
>Do we see Sanae approaching yet?

Tsuru:

>KyuuKyuu? Does she mean Kiku?
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #74 on: March 08, 2017, 06:56:48 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"I'm okay, just something that took my attention for a moment, and yes i can..."

Niji Gray:

>Gently embrace her.

Niji White:

>"Let's open it."

Niji Scarlet:

>"Yeah... what were we doing again ?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #75 on: March 08, 2017, 10:10:16 PM »
Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>Er, try to envision/move ourself to her side a bit, but not too close, so we avoid seeing that.
>"Sanae seems incredibly worried about you. Doing this sort of thing is one of my abilities."
>Do we see Sanae approaching yet?

> You move your vision-self to her side so you don't have to see anything.
> "S-SANAE?!" The Kogasa's jump alike.
> Not yet. You think it'll be soon, though.

Tsuru:

>KyuuKyuu? Does she mean Kiku?

> KyuuKyuu-kun is the "great door" where the kids were in that "Human Village" of sorts. Supposedly, he's an entity with it's own mind and that it can be different things. When you, Charlotte and Chloe were looking for Jessica and Ray, KyuuKyuu-kun was upset about you three... Corin already said it's hard to understand him.

Niji-chan:

>"I'm okay, just something that took my attention for a moment, and yes i can..."

> "Uh... Alright." Alice dubiously nod. "Would you like to proceed?"
> "You sure you are okay, Nii-san?" The nice fairy asks.

Niji Gray:

>Gently embrace her.

> You dare to approach and embrace Rin.
> You no longer feel this dubious feeling... Rin stopped shifting and remains silent.
> You don't feel, however... anything else in her... as if... completely empty.

Niji White:

>"Let's open it."

> Marry nods dubiously and slowly opens a random page of the book.
> ... None of you seem to understand what lenguage this is... neither what these images represent...

Niji Scarlet:

>"Yeah... what were we doing again ?"

> "We were playing the Spell Card game!"
> _
ALL HAIL PROPOSALING-SAMA. SURPRISE FOR HIM.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #76 on: March 08, 2017, 10:22:38 PM »
Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>"Yea."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #77 on: March 08, 2017, 10:25:59 PM »
Kogasa-V!Daiko:

>"Yea."

> The real Kogasa starts to stand up.
> Nor the real or the vision one say something.
> You think you can see Sanae...
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #78 on: March 08, 2017, 10:27:56 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Kogasa?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #79 on: March 08, 2017, 10:29:34 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Kogasa?"

> "What?" She sounds more serious... which is strange coming from her.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #80 on: March 08, 2017, 10:30:40 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Something wrong?"

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #81 on: March 08, 2017, 10:32:30 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>How are we ?

NIji White:

>"What is this ?"

Niji Gray:

>"Miss Rin... do you wanna tell me your story ?"

Niji-chan:

>"Yeah..."
>Slowly have the tiny light sphere fly down to Yuudachi's mouth.

NIji Scarlet:

>"Oh... uhm... what were the other cards i had again ?"


Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #82 on: March 08, 2017, 10:58:43 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Something wrong?"

> "Nothing." She replies, looking away.

Bastet-chan:

>How are we ?

> You are concerned about the current situation... You are following Sanae and the others. You are near the Misty Lake.

NIji White:

>"What is this ?"

> "I-I never saw something like this..." Marry turns the page.
> They look like those ancient lenguages or something... The drawings also look ancient, compared to ones you can find in other books.

Niji-chan:

>"Yeah..."
>Slowly have the tiny light sphere fly down to Yuudachi's mouth.

> As you slowly let the diminute light sphere get closer to Yuudachi, everyone start to get closer too and look more.
> Yuudachi start to get nervous as they do it.

NIji Scarlet:

>"Oh... uhm... what were the other cards i had again ?"

> Flandre pouts. "I gave you Forbidden Barrage "Starbow Break" and Forbidden Barrage "Catadioptric" aside of Cranberry Trap..." She reminds you.

Niji Gray:

>"Miss Rin... do you wanna tell me your story ?"

> Rin doesn't answer.
> _
ALL HAIL PROPOSALING-SAMA. SURPRISE FOR HIM.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #83 on: March 08, 2017, 11:00:19 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Hey. If someone has a problem, I wanna be able to help.."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #84 on: March 08, 2017, 11:02:55 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Hey. If someone has a problem, I wanna be able to help.."

> "I don't want help." She frowns.

> "KOGASAAA!" Sanae shouts from the distance.

> "...!" Both Kogasa's jump and the real one looks to where she's coming from.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #85 on: March 08, 2017, 11:05:41 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Why? ...Are you trying to be alone...?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #86 on: March 08, 2017, 11:13:11 PM »
V!Daiko:

>"Why? ...Are you trying to be alone...?"

> "I-It's nothing of your concern!" She frowns even more.

> Sanae and the group approaches.
> Kogasa takes flight and starts to go away.
> "Kogasa!" Sanae calls in vain.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #87 on: March 08, 2017, 11:14:07 PM »
Niji Gray:

>"I won't tell anyone else about it..."

Niji-chan:

>"Please give her a bit more space... okay..."
>Slowly have the tiny sphere head inside Yuudachi.

NIji Scarlet:

>"Oh... um... Forbidden Barrage Starbow Break ?"


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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #88 on: March 08, 2017, 11:17:52 PM »
V!Daiko:

>Continue to follow her.

Daiko:

>Regroup with the other three.
>"Kogasa looks like she's having some problems... I'm not sure if she just wants to be alone, or it was something I said about Sanae... We can't just stop looking for Orino's children though."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 10
« Reply #89 on: March 08, 2017, 11:56:25 PM »
//And suddenly, Charismatic Remi disappears from my signature... again :colonveeplusalpha:

Niji Gray:

>"I won't tell anyone else about it..."

> Rin doesn't answer...
> ...
> In fact, you don't feel that she's moving. Not even breathing.

Niji-chan:

>"Please give her a bit more space... okay..."
>Slowly have the tiny sphere head inside Yuudachi.

> "S-Sorry." Almost everyone say before they back off.
> "Yuu..." Yuudachi opens her mouth and you let the tiny sphere go inside it.

NIji Scarlet:

>"Oh... um... Forbidden Barrage Starbow Break ?"

> Suddenly, when you declare it, the sides of the room start to create "wings" of colorful danmaku that slowly descend and disappear when they touch the floor. It's like a rain of different lights of diverse colors.
> "Hehe!" Flandre giggles.

V!Daiko:

>Continue to follow her.

Daiko:

>Regroup with the other three.
>"Kogasa looks like she's having some problems... I'm not sure if she just wants to be alone, or it was something I said about Sanae... We can't just stop looking for Orino's children though."

> You try to follow the real Kogasa, but as soon as you fly away of the part of the lake you visioned, everything around you disappears, leaving V!Kogasa and you alone again.
> "Where were you going?" Asks the now a bit upset V!Kogasa.

> You approach to Kokoro, Mystia and Kyouko.
> "True. There's already a bunch of people pursuing her." Kyouko points out.
> "But... where do we start? We are already at the Misty Lake and I don't see them..." Mystia says.
> _
ALL HAIL PROPOSALING-SAMA. SURPRISE FOR HIM.