Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)

[Tengukami]

[nsfw]http://tengukami.blogspot.com/2010/02/permission.html[/nsfw]

[Alfred F. Jones]

This is the first erotica Touhou fic that I've read and unequivocally enjoyed, much less respected for staying true to the characters. Said it before as a proofer, saying it now as a reader: Well done.

[Bias Bus]

Put my rage in a backseat and gave this a read...

T'was a good read, and surely worth my time of looking into. I still deeply dislike yuri, but I enjoyed what you did with this. If I ever go about writing some Touhou erotica of my own, I'll be sure to keep yours in mind.

[PMiller1]

Nice Work.

[Solais]

I already said it, but this was the first erotic fiction I've read, enjoyed and considered to be art. Also what Ruro said.

[Silent Harmony]

Possible hyperbole ahead. Oh well.


Surprised I really shouldn't be by this point. And yet here I am, pleasantly so.

I can't think of anything to say that hasn't been said. Really, I can't describe how I felt reading without sounding extremely cheesy.

You.... what you've done is beyond words. Beauty and sophistication unmatched by any erotic story I've read previously, to the point I feel bad calling it that.

Bravo. Just....bravo.

[Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin]

It was splendid~

even if I did completely skim over the actual sex scene

[The ⑨th Zentillion]

To describe this story, hmm...

"Pretty" does a good enough job, I suppose... nice and light, very well-done. Twangs at the heartstrings, not at the erective tissues.

Great work.

[Rheeve]

Real nice work. Good job.

[Dorian White]

That was amazing, I really enjoyed it especially the swimming scene.

[AdamTheHedgehog]

A bit of Post Necromancy, but I feel I have to give this one a personal review. When I read this Yuri, it reminded me of a 4koma Futa involving Reimu and Cirno. I won't go into much detail, but it was a sad Lolicon.

This, however, was different. I don't know why, but the way you managed to word it made it feel like Kaguya was more like a Mother to Cirno, and that what she was doing was educating CIrno about something she'd have to decide for herself later...

*slow clap* Absolutely beautiful. I'd give it...5/5.

[Tengukami]

Thank you. This was my first attempt at Touhou erotica, and I'm pretty happy with the result, too. Even if the catalyst was trying - and failing - to explain the difference between "porn" and "erotica" to my pals in CPMC. Thought it best, in the end, to demonstrate it. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it.