Hi.
It's not all good, I have several complaints for each piece, but I'd say you've got a pretty good taste for what sounds nice, which I think is really important for an arranger (do you consider yourself one?)
U.N. Owen: it's not that much different from ZUN's original, but since you really played the guitar, that would be cool to watch rather than just listen. Like, a cover version or something... As for the complaints, I think some of the notes are wrong, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, as long as you know what you're doing.
Night of Nights: not bad, but I'd like some more completeness to the sound. Seems a bit empty-ish.
Wind God Girl: seems like the frequencies of certain instruments overlap a lot, that's not good, as the sound gets somewhat messy.
Sleeping Terror: not a fan of the original, but I like the sound very much.
@Silent Sinner in Scarlet: could you please comment on
my stuff as well and tell if any of it is worth showing at the event you mentioned? Thanks!