Post Your Artwork Thread V5

[pineyappled]

@kinoko that's a cute nue! though i think her hips can be thinner (since her shoulders aren't that wide) and her sleeves more poofy and not clinging onto her arm

That's from nearly a year ago.  :V

[pasu]

....is that a 2013 pun :'v

[pineyappled]

February '12.

[Vento]

That nue looks kinda stiff

(her) Right leg in need of some foreshortening?

[Formless God]

Gengetsu

[pasu]

Gengetsu

you mean rin satsuki

[HakureiSM]

A Formless

[Kaze_Senshi]

Hmmmm I think that I'll try this 33 days exercise to draw better faces.
http://artists.pixelovely.com/focused-practice-an-exercise-for-real-improvement-in-33-days/

Step 3: Commit to practicing that aspect of drawing 100 times. Each practice should take a minimum of 5 minutes.

So I'll upload 100 faces here some of my drawings here



Bonus:
http://imageshack.us/a/img825/4879/lyrica.jpg
http://imageshack.us/a/img717/480/eikikiki.jpg

[pineyappled]

quick marker sketches during class are fun

also caught up with gltas because dcn hiatus is over
why is it so much less shitty than korra

e- Fixed the link.

[Kaze_Senshi]

I have 90 tries yet :V

[Skyler]

I doodled a Yumemi
Also I never noticed that she had a plait until now..

[HakureiSM]

That's some cool shading

[Piranha]

First time I'm posting here, finally!

Yamame

Something I made with an oekaki tool on another site

[pineyappled]

I doodled a Yumemi
Also I never noticed that she had a plait until now..

Nice.

[pasu]

First time I'm posting here, finally!

Yamame

Something I made with an oekaki tool on another site

Yamame's round head is adorable ufufu

[Piranha]

Yamame's round head is adorable ufufu

Thanks!

I prefer to draw with normal proportions, but sometimes chibis are nice too.

[KrackoCloud]

blargh

[Teewee]

Pictures~

The faces look good! If you're looking for improvement, maybe this advice might help. Though from looking at that Sanae pic, you seem to have already learned from those mistakes, so I'll spoiler it.

Spoiler:

Byakuren's chin has some wiggliness(?) that it would do better without. Also, the point of the chin seems to not be there.
The right side of eiki's chin (from her perspective) is slightly disconnected from the part that rises up to the forehead (dunno the exact term, hehe). Also, has what looks like a sticker on her left. Erasing that would make it look better. Redline's at the bottom of the post.
As for lunasa's the part that rises up to the forehead (as you see here) seems rather nonexistant. Darkening it to make it notiveable as the rest of the face contours is a good idea.

There you go. I was assuming you were only concerned with the face contours, so if there's anything else of the faces that bothers you (or you'd understand better with more redlines), I can take a look at /do more of those, too.

I doodled a Yumemi
Also I never noticed that she had a plait until now..

Looks great!

[Kaze_Senshi]

* Feedback*
There you go. I was assuming you were only concerned with the face contours, so if there's anything else of the faces that bothers you (or you'd understand better with more redlines), I can take a look at /do more of those, too.

Oh thanks for the feedbacks, so please take a look on this one too:

_{I drew the music note wrong ;(}

[Halca]

Oh hey I haven't posted here in forever.

Have sum kawaii mariari

[fondue]

:*  so moe

[Delfigamer]

_{I drew the music note wrong ;(}

Yeah, a flag must be on right side.
And, if you watch carefully, you'll notice that her left eye is a bit larger than right, that gives her an... interesting expression. :3
Though you advance, that's for sure. So, I can see some bones in her arm.

Hm... if you watched from Suwako's side, the note would be perfectly on right side.

[Pirate]

<Kogasa_Tatara> The mountains here are nice, No tengu running after you when you're skiing down 
<Pirate> Kogasa...skiing on her umbrella
<Pirate> ...Eh?
* Kaze_Senshi has quit (Ping timeout)
<Kogasa_Tatara> Tongue rather! I bend the tongue down and use the handle as the other ski!
<Pirate> daym, that's awesome
<Pirate> actually, I can't even begin to imagine how that works

http://imgur.com/M9IKyi7

I probably got it wrong, but it's funny all the same

[pineyappled]

Oh hey I haven't posted here in forever.

Have sum kawaii mariari

Wait, were you halca-ruru on dA?

[Delfigamer]

<Kogasa_Tatara> Tongue rather! I bend the tongue down and use the handle as the other ski!
http://imgur.com/M9IKyi7

So cute. I wonder if you've put your love into this.
I surely remember you have your own thread. What's with it, though?

[Pirate]

So cute. I wonder if you've put your love into this.
I surely remember you have your own thread. What's with it, though?

Thanks, Kogasa's one of my favourites. So moe.

Also, what do you mean, what's with my thread?

[Delfigamer]

I'm just wondering why you didn't post it here.

[Teewee]

@Kaze_Senshi: Adding to what's been said about the eyes, you can make her right eye (from her perspective) the same height as the other one to make the expression seem more "normal", unless that expression is what you were going for. It's like it's saying "you think this looks novel, don't you?" lol Also, I like the way you drew the frog!

@Halca: That's adorable~ Looks like what you'd see in a mariari animation vid. Intimacy in a starry sky, and all.

@Notapirate: That looks wonderful! Somehow, that smile on her seems so familiar.

[Pirate]

I'm just wondering why you didn't post it here.

Oh, I just thought that since it's a sketch I had no reason to post it there, that's all.

@Notapirate: That looks wonderful! Somehow, that smile on her seems so familiar.

Thanks. Took me a few tries to get that mouth right. I'm terrible at mouths.

[Halca]

Wait, were you halca-ruru on dA?

Why yes, indeed I was.