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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #30 on: November 22, 2013, 10:57:46 PM »
Entry Deadline: Sat, Nov 23
We do have an extra day! Pause the vote!
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #31 on: November 22, 2013, 10:59:36 PM »
We do have an extra day! Pause the vote!

wow
I was writing my vote right now, gimme back my precious time :V
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #32 on: November 23, 2013, 12:49:58 AM »
aaaAAAAAAh!

I'll keep the entry list there, but I guess votes start tomorrow. <:U

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #33 on: November 24, 2013, 12:47:33 AM »
One day at Kourindou

Feminine Marisa.
Second time entering! I only started yesterday and given time constraints I had no time to shade or anything. But anyways, hope you guys like it.

Bonus points for anyone who recognizes the three reaction faces'/styles' artists for Reimu, Sanae, and Kourin. ;) (had so much trouble drawing this part)

Spoiler:
Pageratta, Warugaki, and Hidefu Kitayan respectively

EDIT: Marisa: "Danmaku is power desu wa."
Others: "WHO ARE YOU?!"
« Last Edit: November 25, 2013, 03:29:00 AM by Genso »

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #34 on: November 24, 2013, 04:39:41 AM »
I'm still stymied how this incomplete and uninspired draft turned into this. :getdown: :flowerpower: :flamingv:
Sanity disclaimer: No mind-affecting substances were consumed prior to illustration, though a fair bit of gaming today, including some SMW2, was

In case of confusion as to theme, it's meant to show Kanako as the now-Extra boss and smaller (and presumably less mature) of the two Moriya gods. Review the second link.
« Last Edit: November 24, 2013, 04:49:34 AM by Dr. Steve-O "Evil" Ballmer »
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #35 on: November 24, 2013, 07:55:28 AM »
I'm not really sure if i got the theme right but i'll post it anyway. here's a half-ass drawing of Rinnosuke with his sword of kusanagi. http://i.imgur.com/Ztd0aoO.png:derp:

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #36 on: November 24, 2013, 03:18:36 PM »
Oh God. I forgot to finish this. Been busy on my research about Non-Destructive Testing...
Oh well, I'm too lazy to do this now.



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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #37 on: November 24, 2013, 06:24:21 PM »

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #38 on: November 24, 2013, 06:49:26 PM »
delicious

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #39 on: November 24, 2013, 07:41:35 PM »
+2 Delfigamer

I always feel like a doodling thirdgrader when looking at some of the stuff others create. :V

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #40 on: November 24, 2013, 10:05:23 PM »
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HakureiSM

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #41 on: November 24, 2013, 10:07:04 PM »
+2 Zil Brilliant idea, really
+1 The_EP Creative
+0 Genso So cute, but misses the point entirely. But so cute
+vento vento vento
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #42 on: November 24, 2013, 10:21:14 PM »
+0 Genso So cute, but misses the point entirely. But so cute

How so?

Wasn't the theme to draw a character acting opposite of their canon/fanon portrayal? I mean, I don't really see Marisa acting haughty or ladylike really. Unless I got confused with the the name and the description of the theme.
Spoiler:
the theme name implies something different from the description in the original post, so I was a bit confused and just followed the description instead.

HakureiSM

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #43 on: November 24, 2013, 10:34:05 PM »
Eh, I hardly ever see Marisa depicted as being particularly masculine or unlady-like. [booru links]
Really doesn't seem like a defining trait for her. Maybe if it had been Yuugi, that seems to have been picked by the fans as ManlyTouhou?, would've worked a lot better(though the Lady Yuugi thing is a bit overused already as well).

But hey like I said, great artwork
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #44 on: November 24, 2013, 10:44:17 PM »
Eh, I hardly ever see Marisa depicted as being particularly masculine or unlady-like. [booru links]
Really doesn't seem like a defining trait for her. Maybe if it had been Yuugi, that seems to have been picked by the fans as ManlyTouhou?, would've worked a lot better(though the Lady Yuugi thing is a bit overused already as well).

But hey like I said, great artwork

I guess I see your point. Though I guess it doesn't help when only a few people can tell the fact that I switched her "da ze" with "desu wa" since I wrote in Japanese because my handwriting is horrible.

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #45 on: November 24, 2013, 10:54:56 PM »
Oh I did read that, but I guess it didn't come off as strongly as you expected :V
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
                                                                                   .

Zil

Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #46 on: November 25, 2013, 12:18:43 AM »
+2 Delfigamer
+1 EP


I think both are inventive and fit the theme nicely.

Gensou: I more or less agree with HakureiSM.
Kaze, Vento, Yookie: Admittedly not how you'd see the character acting normally, but they don't strike me as really being "reversals" of the characters' defining traits. That and changing the morality of the character seems kind of too simple, when you could do something funky instead.

Also Kracko I think you left EP out of the list?

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #47 on: November 25, 2013, 12:45:12 AM »
Friendly reminder for voters, I said role reversal not trait reversal.

I specified morality change in my example also:
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so say an evil character would be portrayed as doing something extremely kind or an obnoxious 2hu presented as sweet and demure

Sorry if that was not clear enough.
« Last Edit: November 25, 2013, 12:58:34 AM by Vyrien »
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #48 on: November 25, 2013, 03:13:22 AM »
Also Kracko I think you left EP out of the list?
Thanks for the heads-up.

+2 Delfigamer You pulled off the facial expressions and dialogue really well!

Invisible: Would've gotten my +1, but I'm hesitating because I don't know how well this fits the theme.
Zil: Fits the theme well. Some color could've brought a lot more life into this picture.
Genso: It would be nice if you had a translation :V
Crimson: Welcome to GA! Your drawing's off to a good start.
Vento: Your drawings are awesome as ever... I don't see how this is ooc though. Feels kind of like her HM portrayal?

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #49 on: November 25, 2013, 03:25:58 AM »
+2 Zil
A role reversal and good reference in one!

+1 Delfigamer
It definitely weighs more towards the words to get the idea across. Neverthess it adheres well to the theme.

Yookie, KazeSenshi, Genso, Vento: See Haku, Zil, and Vyrien's responses.
Invisible: Makes a good attempt towards the theme. Technique is decent too, keep at it!
Genso: This requires a knowledge of Japanese, which wasn't an issue here but definitely was for others. Other than the switching of the sentence ending, though, she seemed very much standard.
Vento: Good colour work!
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #50 on: November 25, 2013, 03:44:37 AM »
Guess this is one of those times having a shelf of doujin across the room to read doesn't help. Kinda wondering what you guys view as standard Marisa now since she seems like a tomboy to me. Anyways, edited my original post for the translation (Though I only just noticed I posted the wrong version of the drawing, but doubt it would change opinion much since it's just more words and detail errors). Sorry for any inconvenience I caused without the translation.

HakureiSM

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #51 on: November 25, 2013, 03:45:39 AM »
Guys, guys

That's Marisa's staple sentence

Even if it's in Japanese it's kind of really basic Touhou knowledge so
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #52 on: November 25, 2013, 03:58:50 AM »
+2 Zil this is really clever and funny and hehehe
+1 Genso
Spoiler:
is this a golden time reference; can't believe i missed the desu wa first time i read it, i only read the 'danmaku is power' and assumed the rest of it was da ze sorry ;-:



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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #53 on: November 25, 2013, 04:08:13 AM »
+1 Genso[/b]
Spoiler:
is this a golden time reference; can't believe i missed the desu wa first time i read it, i only read the 'danmaku is power' and assumed the rest of it was da ze sorry ;-:


Wow, surprised someone actually got the reference. Was thinking that it would be overlooked so I didn't mention it. :derp:

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #54 on: November 25, 2013, 04:32:58 AM »
+1 genso
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #55 on: November 25, 2013, 07:04:20 AM »
+1 Zil: This is so unlike Komachi I almost spit my drink when I saw it :\) Props! Rosie the riveter is 2cool
+1 Genso: I tend to think canon (and most fanon at least in doujinshi) like to portray Marisa a little rough around the edges so there you go! Bonus points for desu wa and the look on everyone's faces xD

Delfi: I cracked up their expressions
EP: Really liked this one as well. Cute and childish, and convincing dialogue!
Vento: aw yiss badass as always but headcanon says miko is always a huge bamf btw i love the drippy blood

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #56 on: November 25, 2013, 09:39:43 AM »
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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #57 on: November 25, 2013, 02:55:02 PM »
+2 Zil
+1 Vento

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Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 - Role Reversal
« Reply #58 on: November 27, 2013, 06:40:57 PM »
R15 Results!

The winner is...
Zil!

With Delfigamer in second place!

Congrats, Zil! You have 3 days to decide on the next theme.

Zil

Re: Guilty Alice II : R15 RESULTS
« Reply #59 on: November 28, 2013, 05:24:46 AM »
(*?∀`*)

Well that was unexpected. I'm thinking cyborgs/robotics as a theme but pls post thoughts, suggestions, etc.