Author Topic: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8  (Read 60616 times)

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #480 on: February 08, 2017, 01:00:09 AM »
Niji-chan:

>"I don't really like her way either..."

Niji Golden:

>"I feel uneasy..."

Niji Green:

>Phew...

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #481 on: February 08, 2017, 01:00:41 AM »
Daiko:

>Patiently give Kyouko a bit...
>"So..."
>Look over to Kokoro, then Kyouko.

Kiku:

>"I look forward to it again after a long day. But it seems like Tsuru will need to fill the pool if we want to try that."
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Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #482 on: February 08, 2017, 03:02:22 AM »
Niji-chan:

>"I don't really like her way either..."

Niji Golden:

>"I feel uneasy..."

> "Hehehe... Trust me, if I really wanted to do any harm, I would have started long time ago..." Megumi says at your concern. "... But that would make Master angry, so you don't need to worry. Disloyalty is not a word for me..."
> Clownpiece frowns slightly.

Niji Green:

>Phew...

> Yuudachi looks at you. "Yuu yu! Yuu yu!" She moves her arms up and down. You think she is saying something like "I did it, I did it!"."

Daiko:

>Patiently give Kyouko a bit...
>"So..."
>Look over to Kokoro, then Kyouko.

> You wait for Kyouko to recover herself.
> "Aah..." She sighs. "... ... You will need to get rid of this dirty water, Daiko..." Kyouko grins.

Kiku:

>"I look forward to it again after a long day. But it seems like Tsuru will need to fill the pool if we want to try that."

> "Sorry for not being able to do it myself... I think... but I don't think I can reach the levels of Lady Patchouli." Koakuma says as she places the book at her side.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #483 on: February 08, 2017, 03:05:00 AM »
Kiku:

>"It's fine. You'll be great at what you can do."

Daiko:

>"You're the pervert who volunteered every time..."

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #484 on: February 08, 2017, 03:08:05 AM »
Kiku:

>"It's fine. You'll be great at what you can do."

> "And what I want to do is write, hehe..." She smiles.

Daiko:

>"You're the pervert who volunteered every time..."

> "Hmm... That's true... What do you say? Want to be the volunteer now?"
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #485 on: February 08, 2017, 03:11:36 AM »
Daiko:

>Nod.

Kiku:

>Sit next to her.
>"Yup."

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #486 on: February 08, 2017, 03:16:51 AM »
Daiko:

>Nod.

> Kyouko gets into the pool. "Sit down there, then."

Kiku:

>Sit next to her.
>"Yup."

> You sit next to Koakuma. She places the book in her lap.
> "Let's see..." Koa opens the book in a random advanced part, takes a peek at the content, and she quickly closes it, blushing furiously. "..." She slowly looks at you. "... Ms. Kochiya really likes to... show what she means in images..."
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #487 on: February 08, 2017, 03:19:13 AM »
Daiko:

>Climb out of the pool and sit where Kyouko sat.

Kiku:

>"Is she as good an artist as she is a writer?"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #488 on: February 08, 2017, 03:23:32 AM »
Daiko:

>Climb out of the pool and sit where Kyouko sat.

Kiku:

>"Is she as good an artist as she is a writer?"

> You get out of the water and you sit down.
> "Okaaay..." Kyouko approaches. "... Woah..."
> "Are you going to do it?" Kokoro asks.
> "I'll start slooowly... hehe...." Kyouko starts with her hand.

> Koakuma doesn't respond anything and just offers you the book.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #489 on: February 08, 2017, 03:30:54 AM »
Daiko:

>Relax.

Kiku:

>Open to a page.

Bastet:

>"Good job."
>Smile.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #490 on: February 08, 2017, 03:41:01 AM »
Niji-chan:

>"Yet you abandoned your former leader for a new one... i don't see much logic on that... you should work on that."

Niji Green:

>"Hehehe."
>Smile.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #491 on: February 08, 2017, 04:00:02 AM »
Daiko:

>Relax.

> You relax as Kyouko continues.
> She starts to use her mouth.

Kiku:

>Open to a page.

> You open the book in a random-
> H-Holy crackers... That's some serious detail there!
> You can feel how Koakuma shifts a bit.

Bastet:

>"Good job."
>Smile.

Niji Green:

>"Hehehe."
>Smile.

> "Yuu!" She extends her arms towards Bastet. "Yuu yu!"

Niji-chan:

>"Yet you abandoned your former leader for a new one... i don't see much logic on that... you should work on that."

> "Abandoned? Oh, I think you misundertood."
> "I don't think so. You suddenly disappe-"
> "Hecatia knows this very well."
> "Eh?!" Clownpiece jumps.
> "... Did you really are Hecatia's right hand? Heh... because if that was true, she should have told you about my talk with her..."
> The clown fairy slowly looks down. She seems angry.
> "What a shame, isn't it?"
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #492 on: February 08, 2017, 04:06:10 AM »
>Let the group continue this until something noteworthy occurs.

Kiku:

>"Whoa..."
>Try another page.

Bastet:

>"Hm?"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #493 on: February 08, 2017, 04:16:12 AM »
>Let the group continue this until something noteworthy occurs.

Kiku:

>"Whoa..."
>Try another page.

> You keep enjoying.

> You flip to another page.
> Yup, so explicitly detailed.
> "G-Gosh..." Koa mumbles as she watches.

Bastet:

>"Hm?"

> Yuudachi makes a motion with her arms, as if she is carrying someone in her hands.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #494 on: February 08, 2017, 04:17:18 AM »
Niji-chan:

>"Clowny..."


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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #495 on: February 08, 2017, 04:19:29 AM »
Kiku:

>"Yea... this is a lot..."
>A-Another page.

Bastet:

>You want me to hold you again?"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #496 on: February 08, 2017, 04:28:51 AM »
Kiku:

>"Yea... this is a lot..."
>A-Another page.

> You go to another page.
> ... Uh... Is this part talking about different fetish...?

Bastet:

>You want me to hold you again?"

> "Yuu!" She nods.

Niji-chan:

>"Clowny..."

> She's sobbing.
> "... Really? Are you going to cry for that?"
> Clownpiece quickly start to return to the Hakurei Shrine.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #497 on: February 08, 2017, 04:36:10 AM »
Kiku:

>Educate ourselves.
>"This person sure knows a lot... I don't know if we can quote something from here in front of Sanae..."

Bastet:

>"May I, Niji?"
>Hold our hands ready for Yuudachi.


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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #498 on: February 08, 2017, 04:46:47 AM »
Niji Green:

>Nod.

Niji-chan:

>"You aren't capable of understanding, you don't sound like a person that seem to be at least."
>Follow Clowny.

Niji Golden:

>"Poor Clowny..."

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #499 on: February 08, 2017, 05:00:18 AM »
Kiku:

>Educate ourselves.
>"This person sure knows a lot... I don't know if we can quote something from here in front of Sanae..."

> You start to get knowledge.
> "Isn't Sanae a shrine maiden? W-Why any relative would be this... uh... daring?" Koa looks at the next page. "... That looks good..."

Bastet:

>"May I, Niji?"
>Hold our hands ready for Yuudachi.

Niji Green:

>Nod.

> You take Yuudachi from Green's hands.
> "Yuu!" She smiles.

Niji-chan:

>"You aren't capable of understanding, you don't sound like a person that seem to be at least."
>Follow Clowny.

> "Think whatever you want, fairy." Megumi replies to you.
> You follow Clownpiece.
> At the speed she's flying she arrives at the Hakurei Shrine. Reimu and Suika are still out there.
> Clownpiece doesn't seem to say nothing to Reimu and just enters the shrine.

Niji Golden:

>"Poor Clowny..."

> "... Will you go now?" Eirin asks.
> "... Heh. Fine. Have a good night, everyone~."
> And then, you don't feel anymore that someone else is with you.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #500 on: February 08, 2017, 05:02:23 AM »
Daiko:

>How are we?

Kiku:

>"Well, it's not like they all had to be shrine maidens if they are related..."
>Read on.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #501 on: February 08, 2017, 05:03:26 AM »
Niji Golden:

>"I really don't like that lady..."

Niji-chan:

>Enter too, poke Suika playfully before doing so.

Bastet-chan:

>"Ehehe."
>Hug her.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #502 on: February 08, 2017, 05:15:08 AM »
Daiko:

>How are we?

> You don't think you are capable of resisting any longer...

Kiku:

>"Well, it's not like they all had to be shrine maidens if they are related..."
>Read on.

> You keep reading.
> "I mean... they were educated in a way, right? I guess this Ms. Kochiya wanted to go to other direction... ..." Koa blushes. "A-And she did a really good job..."

Niji Golden:

>"I really don't like that lady..."

> "Me neither." Sakura sighs.
> "... Welp. That was all, I guess." Kaguya yawns. "She was already touching a sensitive fiber in my nerves..."

Niji-chan:

>Enter too, poke Suika playfully before doing so.

> You land near where Suika is making a snow angel and you poke her.
> "Hehe! Stop!" Suika tries to stop you in a playful way, laughing.
> You stop and you keep following Clownpiece. Reimu follows you with her look until you enter.
> Clownpiece takes off her hat and throws it somewhere. She grabs a pillow and sinks her face in it while lying in her front in the floor.

Bastet-chan:

>"Ehehe."
>Hug her.

> You hug Yuudachi, and she returns it.

> (Red) You are sleepy...

> (White) You too...
> The feeling of wanting to cry stopped a while ago.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #503 on: February 08, 2017, 05:20:27 AM »
Daiko:

>"Kyouko..."

Kiku:

>Nod.

White:

>Do we still feel like we should bathe at least?

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #504 on: February 08, 2017, 05:29:12 AM »
Daiko:

>"Kyouko..."

> Kyouko doesn't answer as she continues.
> You reach your limit.
> "Ugu?!" Kyouko gets herself room to breathe. "G-Geez!"
> Kokoro blinks. She wipes her face with her hand and looks at it.
> "H-Hey! Ya' want to kill me?!"

//I'm struggling a lot to find "light" words :V

Kiku:

>Nod.

> Koakuma flips the page. She immediately looks away as she sees the content of it.

White:

>Do we still feel like we should bathe at least?

> You do. All your body is still slimy.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #505 on: February 08, 2017, 05:40:22 AM »
//Less adjectives and details. Vagueness & Ambiguity are your friends. When in doubt, just avoid it entirely, like a timeskip.

Daiko:

>Relax.

Kiku:

>Check what she saw.

Niji White:

>Are we waiting on someone/What are we doing here?

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #506 on: February 08, 2017, 05:46:29 AM »
//Less adjectives and details. Vagueness & Ambiguity are your friends. When in doubt, just avoid it entirely, like a timeskip.

Daiko:

>Relax.

//You are already used to it, don't you?

> You relax.
> "Hmm..." Kyouko pouts, but then she giggles. "Want to try, Kokoro?"
> She shakes her head while looking at her hand.

Kiku:

>Check what she saw.

> It's how to do it "more good" with "that" using woman attributes.

Niji White:

>Are we waiting on someone/What are we doing here?

> You are waiting for Marry to return... She's is still in the house, you think.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #507 on: February 08, 2017, 05:53:25 AM »
Daiko:

>"Huh?"

Kiku:

>Glance over to Koa.
>Educate ourselves before moving on.
>"She's like a library..."

White:

>Look around for a bathroom.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #508 on: February 08, 2017, 06:03:54 AM »
Daiko:

>"Huh?"

> Kokoro's hand is a bit dirty, her face as well.
> She looks at you. "You stained me."
> Kyouko giggles. "Yea, sorry for not stoping him."

Kiku:

>Glance over to Koa.
>Educate ourselves before moving on.
>"She's like a library..."

> Koakuma seems a bit uncomfortable.
> You read a bit and then you flip the page.
> Koa returns her look at it. "T-This is an encyclopedia or something?"

White:

>Look around for a bathroom.

> You look around... Nope, nothing else.
> You wonder if Marry bathes at a lake or something...
> _
« Last Edit: February 08, 2017, 06:06:50 AM by Tashi »
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 8
« Reply #509 on: February 08, 2017, 06:08:04 AM »
Daiko:

>"S-Sorry Kokoro."

Kiku:

>"How are her other works?"