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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #330 on: January 13, 2017, 02:36:48 PM »
Kiku-chan:

>Calmly approach her and put a hand on her shoulder.
>"Don't be so harsh on yourself."

Daiko-kun:

>"I see... now then... may i ask an favor ?"

Niji-chan:

>Smile.

Niji Red:

>"See her version of the history, clear up doubts and mistakes, attempt to make up."

Niji Blue:

>"It's much better to have her as a friend than hating her right ?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #331 on: January 13, 2017, 02:39:17 PM »
Kiku-chan:

>Calmly approach her and put a hand on her shoulder.
>"Don't be so harsh on yourself."

> You approach and place a hand in Koa's shoulder, prompting her to jump a bit.
> "K-Kiku! D-Don't scare me like that..."

Daiko-kun:

>"I see... now then... may i ask an favor ?"

> "Hm?" Satori raises an eyebrow.

Niji-chan:

>Smile.

Niji Red:

>"See her version of the history, clear up doubts and mistakes, attempt to make up."

Niji Blue:

>"It's much better to have her as a friend than hating her right ?"

> "Hmph." Momiji looks away.
> "... And about me... what are you going to do...?" Hatate asks.
> "... I don't know."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #332 on: January 13, 2017, 02:47:24 PM »
Niji Red and Blue:

>"We all wanna solve this peacefully right ? So the best would be if all three of you were together."

Kiku-chan:

>"You look more frustrated than scared... did you hit a Writer's Block ?"

Daiko-kun:

>"I would like for you to try and explore the minds of my family, they have lost their memories of their past lifes, and anything would be helpful for them."

Bastet-chan:

>Nod eagerly.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #333 on: January 13, 2017, 03:22:12 PM »
Niji Red and Blue:

>"We all wanna solve this peacefully right ? So the best would be if all three of you were together."

> "May I ask something?" Momiji questions.

Kiku-chan:

>"You look more frustrated than scared... did you hit a Writer's Block ?"

> "Er... Sorta." Koa sighs and places her hands in her head, resting her elbows in the table.

Daiko-kun:

>"I would like for you to try and explore the minds of my family, they have lost their memories of their past lifes, and anything would be helpful for them."

Bastet-chan:

>Nod eagerly.

> Satori thinks for a moment. "Alright." She approaches to Bastet.
> "May I?" Satori asks while holding her third eye.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #334 on: January 13, 2017, 03:45:49 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>"Hai Nya !"
>Nod.

Kiku-chan:

>"May i see it ?"

Niji Red:

>Nod.
>"Sure thing."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #335 on: January 13, 2017, 04:33:18 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>"Hai Nya !"
>Nod.

> Satori nods and the third eye looks at your eyes.

Kiku-chan:

>"May i see it ?"

> "Those are just drafts, so it's not the big deal..." Koa says, sighing.

Niji Red:

>Nod.
>"Sure thing."

> "By "being the three of you together"... What EXACTLY do you mean?"
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #336 on: January 13, 2017, 04:37:22 PM »
Niji Red:

>"Uh... together to talk this out properly, why ?"

Niji Blue:

>"Oh, i think she mistook it for having them as a trio Red."

Kiku-chan:

>"Drafts are the base for the real deal, so they still matter."

Bastet-chan:

>Wait.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #337 on: January 13, 2017, 04:45:10 PM »
Niji Red:

>"Uh... together to talk this out properly, why ?"

Niji Blue:

>"Oh, i think she mistook it for having them as a trio Red."

> "Exactly." Momiji says.
> Hatate looks away.

Kiku-chan:

>"Drafts are the base for the real deal, so they still matter."

> "... It's a little embarrasing for me that you read those things... I have zero ability in this..."

Bastet-chan:

>Wait.

> You wait...
> Satori blinks. "Well, this is something extreme..."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #338 on: January 13, 2017, 04:51:35 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>"Huh ? Do you see something ?"

Niji Blue:

>"Well... if you can make up, then that could be an solution too."

Kiku-chan:

>"Stop diminishing yourself Koa."
>Frown.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #339 on: January 13, 2017, 04:58:40 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>"Huh ? Do you see something ?"

> "I can see you have memories of the life of Daikoku... but if I try to further back than that, your memories suddenly reach a halt." Satori replies. "It's not even natural... It's like... as if something cut those memories..."

Niji Blue:

>"Well... if you can make up, then that could be an solution too."

> "No way." Momiji says. "A trio?"
> "Look the bright way, private time could be a lot funnier." Kanako laughs.
> "S-Shut up!" Momiji barks, blushing.

Kiku-chan:

>"Stop diminishing yourself Koa."
>Frown.

> "B-But... it's the truth..."
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #340 on: January 13, 2017, 05:11:01 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>"I don't get it... why put us inside him ? And who would even be capable of that ?"

Niji Blue:

>"So cute..."

Niji Red:

>"..."
>Try to hug or pet Momiji.

Kiku-chan:

>"It's not, you haven't even shown it to someone else, you cannot judge yourself."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #341 on: January 13, 2017, 05:25:08 PM »
Bastet-chan:

>"I don't get it... why put us inside him ? And who would even be capable of that ?"

> "It was someone, to begin with?" Sakura asks.
> "I couldn't ensure it, but it's most likely. That kind of things doesn't happen normally." Satori affirms.

Niji Blue:

>"So cute..."

Niji Red:

>"..."
>Try to hug or pet Momiji.

> "Cute?"
> You try to hug Momiji, but she pushes you.
> "Hey, what was that?" She asks.

Kiku-chan:

>"It's not, you haven't even shown it to someone else, you cannot judge yourself."

> "... S-Sorry..."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #342 on: January 13, 2017, 05:29:50 PM »
Niji Red:


>"Yeah, you are cute with those ears and the attitude."
>Nod and try again !

Niji Blue:

>Try to hug her too !

Kiku-chan:

>"Don't be... just try to stay positive."
>Approach and read what's written.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #343 on: January 13, 2017, 05:39:11 PM »
Niji Red:


>"Yeah, you are cute with those ears and the attitude."
>Nod and try again !

Niji Blue:

>Try to hug her too !

> You both attack Momiji with a hug. She struggles.
> "What the hell?! Let me go!" She keeps at it.
> Hatate laughs a bit.

Kiku-chan:

>"Don't be... just try to stay positive."
>Approach and read what's written.

> You approach to read some of the drafts in the table. Koa looks away as you do so.
> This one basically tells about a fantasy story, if you trust the few words that it has.
> "I always feel that I'm doing something wrong..."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #344 on: January 13, 2017, 05:58:34 PM »
Niji-chan:

>Giggle.

Niji Red and Blue:

>"Warm..."
>Pet her.

Kiku-chan:

>How is it going at the moment ? The story.

Bastet-chan:

>"So there is nothing ?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #345 on: January 13, 2017, 06:11:24 PM »
Niji-chan:

>Giggle.

Niji Red and Blue:

>"Warm..."
>Pet her.

> You start to pet Momiji.
> "I'm not a pet! So stop this!"

> "You surely changed, Niji-chan..." Marry looks at the scene with a surprised expression.
> "Huh, it's just like how Clowny told us." Luna says.

Kiku-chan:

>How is it going at the moment ? The story.

Bastet-chan:

>"So there is nothing ?"

> You don't think it's as baaad as she tries to make it look... it has it's flaws, of course, but it's passable.

> "I'm sorry, but no."
> Why don't you try with Tsuru-san?" Sakura asks.
> "I can try." Satori turns to Daiko and her third eye looks at him.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #346 on: January 13, 2017, 06:26:46 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"Well, she is cute, but that was their idea."

Niji Red:

>"But you are cute."

Niji Blue:

>Rub her ears.

Kiku-chan:

>"It's alright for a starting writer, it has flaws definitely, but i don't think you are giving it fair view."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #347 on: January 13, 2017, 06:32:45 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"Well, she is cute, but that was their idea."

Niji Red:

>"But you are cute."

Niji Blue:

>Rub her ears.

> You keep caressing the struggling Tengu Wolf.

> "Still they ARE you... so that's no excuse." Marry giggles.
> "... Hm..." Star thinks.
> "Something wrong?" Sunny asks.
> "I don't know why... but when you mentioned Clownpiece, I had the feeling that we are forgetting something..."

Kiku-chan:

>"It's alright for a starting writer, it has flaws definitely, but i don't think you are giving it fair view."

> Koa sinks her face in the table.
> "I'm sorry for having you see my garbage..." You can hear her say.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #348 on: January 13, 2017, 06:39:31 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"Uh... wasn't we all supposed to meet up to play before ?"

Kiku-chan:

>"Stop that, it's definitely not garbage."
>Hug her.
>"Someone wonderful like you can't produce garbage."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #349 on: January 13, 2017, 06:44:51 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"Uh... wasn't we all supposed to meet up to play before ?"

> There's silence among the fairies...
> "OH NO!!" The three shout.
> Marry jumps a bit.
> "Uuuh?" Kokoro asks.

Kiku-chan:

>"Stop that, it's definitely not garbage."
>Hug her.
>"Someone wonderful like you can't produce garbage."

> You hug Koa, who places a hand in your arm.
> "... Really...?" She turns her head to the side and looks at you.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #350 on: January 13, 2017, 06:55:42 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"We planned to play with Clownpiece today, but with all the sheep..."

Kiku-chan:

>"Of course."
>Smile.

Bastet-chan:

>"So ?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #351 on: January 13, 2017, 07:08:17 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"We planned to play with Clownpiece today, but with all the sheep..."

> "What should we do?" Luna asks.
> "... It's okay." Marry nods. "You can play if you want."

Kiku-chan:

>"Of course."
>Smile.

> After some seconds she smiles back.
> "Thank you."

Bastet-chan:

>"So ?"

> "It's the same story." Satori says. "You, however, Tsuru Shinju, have something special..."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #352 on: January 13, 2017, 07:23:29 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"I'll stay, i can send a clone however."

Kiku-chan:

>"I was just saying the truth."

Tsuru:

>"Hm ?"

Daiko-kun:

>"How so ?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #353 on: January 13, 2017, 07:32:05 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"I'll stay, i can send a clone however."

> "I don't want to mess your fun just because of helping me, Niji-chan..." Marry looks down.

Kiku-chan:

>"I was just saying the truth."

> "I know you do." She rubs your arm. "That's why I like you so much."

Tsuru:

>"Hm ?"

Daiko-kun:

>"How so ?"

> "Do you have a sister?" Satori asks.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #354 on: January 13, 2017, 07:35:38 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"But i wanna be with you to help !"

Kiku-chan:

>"Y-Yeah..."
>Blush.

Tsuru and Daiko-kun:

>"A-A sister ?!"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #355 on: January 13, 2017, 07:40:57 PM »
Niji-chan:

>"But i wanna be with you to help !"

> "O-Okay..." Marry nods.
> "We need to go to the Misty Lake now! The others are probably waiting for us!" Sunny says.
> "If we don't go, they'll probably get mad..." Luna adds.

Kiku-chan:

>"Y-Yeah..."
>Blush.

> "But... why I am so special for you? I mean... I don't stand out at all..."

Tsuru and Daiko-kun:

>"A-A sister ?!"

> "I found a far away memory. It's so separated from your current memories that makes me think that they are indeed cutted, but you were able to keep this one." Satori replies. "I can see someone, and you call her "family".
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #356 on: January 13, 2017, 07:49:42 PM »
Tsuru:

>A sister...

Daiko-kun:

>"Could you describe her to us ?"

Kiku-chan:

>"Who said that ? Of course you do, i mean, you have these cute wings and the tail too, and you also know magic which is really neat."

Niji Red and Blue:

>"We'll go !"

Niji-chan:

>Make another sphere of light.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #357 on: January 13, 2017, 08:08:59 PM »
Tsuru:

>A sister...

Daiko-kun:

>"Could you describe her to us ?"

> "She's in red pajamas. She has long red hair and a sleepy face." Satori says.

Kiku-chan:

>"Who said that ? Of course you do, i mean, you have these cute wings and the tail too, and you also know magic which is really neat."

> Your tail is gently wrapped by Koa's tail.
> "You are so nice... Thank you..."

Niji Red and Blue:

>"We'll go !"

Niji-chan:

>Make another sphere of light.

> "Yeah! Go with them!" Momiji says, struggling.

> You create anothe light ball.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #358 on: January 13, 2017, 08:20:36 PM »
Tsuru:

>Try to recall her.

Niji Red and Blue:

>Pat her one last time, then give her an affectionate tight hug before letting go.

Niji-chan:

>Move it around.

Kiku-chan:

>"Hehe..."
Try to wrap ours around hers too.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 6
« Reply #359 on: January 13, 2017, 08:32:24 PM »
Tsuru:

>Try to recall her.

> You try to remember...
> The image slowly comes to mind, but is hard to do it. It's just like Satori said.

Niji Red and Blue:

>Pat her one last time, then give her an affectionate tight hug before letting go.

Niji-chan:

>Move it around.

> You show a bit more of affection to Momiji before letting her go.
> "F-Finally..." Momiji sighs.

> You move the sphere around.
> "What are you doing?" Suwako asks, looking at the sphere.

Kiku-chan:

>"Hehe..."
Try to wrap ours around hers too.

> You wrap your tail with Koa's.
> "Anyway..." Koakuma stands up. "Are you done with the training?"
> _
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