Author Topic: Money is forever - Poverty Quest  (Read 177671 times)

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #450 on: December 24, 2018, 03:12:00 PM »
>Shoulder our way into that crowd.

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #451 on: December 24, 2018, 06:50:45 PM »
>She's the one with the sledgehammer whose hammerhead you pulled out back at the apartment.

//Uh, that's the longest string of command I've ever seen in any CYOAs. And it's also pretty confusing no thanks to the very poor grammar, so much that I don't even understand what you're trying to say.
! WARNING FOR  :wikipedia: OUT WALL O' TEXT, IF NOT BROKEN UP IN SEVERAL AND/OR ESSENTIAL PARTS !
// ( The commands inputted  by Purvis and Tom are  similar to what I have been meaning and " reaping  the hoped and gunned for results" .They are even better on both accounts).After precising that,I admit I am again sorry for this (repeated)Negative CYOA Record of mine.It does really explain why I am still Inexperienced at them , by forum and text-adventure and general,and points  not an ENG Native Tongue but an ITA(lian) one..
Allow me to further explain myself . Athe time I had been : under pressure,on a tight schedule,typing by Ipad and even somehow troubled(not seriously or close to it,Thank God)...And it all expressed poorly.I really should have ,at the very least  ,somehow  simplified+edited the post just like I had half-a-hunch and half-planned about.
I hearthily thank you for  pointing me out and correcting me,Lt Colonel Summers,on top on Parsing this CYOA.
No offense taken, on the contrary.
I also thank Purvis(along Tom ,other contribuiting players and "lurkers" of the present and the past) more, for his kind words/writings ,the insightful understanding of my intention,on top of being the the Main Player Lead .
In fact,for my time and availabilty, I had been trying too hard by doing too much,even for the purpose of helping out and increasing overall activity/interest. //
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Lt Colonel Summers

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #452 on: December 25, 2018, 02:12:34 AM »
>Shoulder our way into that crowd.

>You try to squeeze your way through the extra thick crowd, while keeping Nitori close to you.

>The Sukeban are having trouble with the extra thick crowd too. Firing into the air here made no difference as they kept being slowed down.

! WARNING FOR  :wikipedia: OUT WALL O' TEXT, IF NOT BROKEN UP IN SEVERAL AND/OR ESSENTIAL PARTS !
// ( The commands inputted  by Purvis and Tom are  similar to what I have been meaning and " reaping  the hoped and gunned for results" .They are even better on both accounts).After precising that,I admit I am again sorry for this (repeated)Negative CYOA Record of mine.It does really explain why I am still Inexperienced at them , by forum and text-adventure and general,and points  not an ENG Native Tongue but an ITA(lian) one..
Allow me to further explain myself . Athe time I had been : under pressure,on a tight schedule,typing by Ipad and even somehow troubled(not seriously or close to it,Thank God)...And it all expressed poorly.I really should have ,at the very least  ,somehow  simplified+edited the post just like I had half-a-hunch and half-planned about.
I hearthily thank you for  pointing me out and correcting me,Lt Colonel Summers,on top on Parsing this CYOA.
No offense taken, on the contrary.
I also thank Purvis(along Tom ,other contribuiting players and "lurkers" of the present and the past) more, for his kind words/writings ,the insightful understanding of my intention,on top of being the the Main Player Lead .
In fact,for my time and availabilty, I had been trying too hard by doing too much,even for the purpose of helping out and increasing overall activity/interest. //

//It's alright. You tried your best.
//Here's a suggestion: when you post in CYOAs, input just one or two commands so it doesn't look too confusing to be interpreted.
« Last Edit: December 25, 2018, 02:21:08 AM by Lt Colonel Summers »
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Hello Purvis

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #453 on: December 25, 2018, 03:55:39 AM »
>Keep going!
>Low tone; as much as we can get and expect to be heard: "Gotta figure out our next step!"

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #454 on: December 27, 2018, 03:55:32 AM »
> Try and lower our head a bit while in the crowd to make ourselves harder to spot
> Does the crowd appear to be standing still or going somewhere?

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #455 on: December 27, 2018, 04:00:34 PM »
//Important announcement: I won't be available for updates until 2019 begins. Sorry...
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #456 on: December 31, 2018, 01:51:12 PM »
//And I'm back! Sorry to keep you waiting!

>Keep going!
>Low tone; as much as we can get and expect to be heard: "Gotta figure out our next step!"

>You keep moving, with Nitori right in tow.
>"We got to get out of this crowd!" Nitori suggested.

> Try and lower our head a bit while in the crowd to make ourselves harder to spot
> Does the crowd appear to be standing still or going somewhere?

>You two lower your heads to keep a smaller profile.
>They are panicking and running about no thanks to the Sukeban firing shots into the air.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #457 on: December 31, 2018, 06:10:42 PM »
>"Right now the crowd is the only thing keeping them from shooting us!"
>Is there somewhere we can duck into, a building or something?

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #458 on: January 01, 2019, 07:41:54 AM »
>"Right now the crowd is the only thing keeping them from shooting us!"
>Is there somewhere we can duck into, a building or something?

>"It's also slowing us down!" Nitori tells you. "Those bitches will eventually catch up with us!"
>You see a mini-market not too far ahead...
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #459 on: January 01, 2019, 07:20:55 PM »
>Let's try to duck into that minimart, then.

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #460 on: January 02, 2019, 02:00:22 AM »
>Let's try to duck into that minimart, then.

>You try to squeeze your way through the crowd toward the mini-market. The thick and panicking crowd isn't making this any easier.
>The Sukeban are still hot on your trail. Good thing the crowd isn't making things easy for them either.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #461 on: January 02, 2019, 05:24:35 AM »
>We have sharp, skinny elbows. Put them to use driving a wedge between people. Toward that mini mart!

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #462 on: January 02, 2019, 10:38:38 AM »
>We have sharp, skinny elbows. Put them to use driving a wedge between people. Toward that mini mart!

>Using your elbow as a wedge, you shove your way toward the mini mart as fast as you can.
>You manage to reach the mini mart with quite a bit of distance between you and the Sukeban.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #463 on: January 02, 2019, 06:05:39 PM »
>Dash inside!

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #464 on: January 03, 2019, 01:21:38 AM »
>Dash inside!

>You and Nitori quickly dash inside the mini mart.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #465 on: January 03, 2019, 01:59:06 AM »
>You and Nitori quickly dash inside the mini mart.

>Lock the door behind us, then dash toward the counter. "Quick, we got maniacs trying to kill us! They got guns!"

>_

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #466 on: January 04, 2019, 02:04:43 PM »
>Lock the door behind us, then dash toward the counter. "Quick, we got maniacs trying to kill us! They got guns!"

>_

>You try to lock the door, only to find that it is an automatic door and thus can't be locked like you would a normal door.
>You quickly make your way toward the counter and tell the receptionists about the approaching Sukeban.

>Unfortunately, one of the Sukeban somehow managed to catch up with you and entered the mini-mart shortly later, and she just happened to be the one with the SMG.
>Said Sukeban decides to not wait for the receptionists' response, and immediately opens fire at your direction.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #467 on: January 04, 2019, 03:40:28 PM »
>Dive behind the counter, drag Nitori with us!

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #468 on: January 04, 2019, 10:32:43 PM »
> Can we see a back door / exit behind the counter?

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #469 on: January 05, 2019, 06:38:43 AM »
>Dive behind the counter, drag Nitori with us!

>You and Nitori quickly take cover behind the counter.
>The receptionists and customers did the same, diving behind whatever they can find to use as cover.

> Can we see a back door / exit behind the counter?

>If there was one, you can't see it because of the shelves obstructing your view of the back of the mini-mart.

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #470 on: January 05, 2019, 07:33:52 AM »
>At a glance, does it seem like there is any back room behind the counter?

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #471 on: January 06, 2019, 01:36:47 AM »
>At a glance, does it seem like there is any back room behind the counter?

//I don't get what you're saying...
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #472 on: January 06, 2019, 03:46:56 AM »
Is there an office, a break room, a storeroom, anything?

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #473 on: January 06, 2019, 12:36:34 PM »
>At a glance, does it seem like there is any back room behind the counter?
Is there an office, a break room, a storeroom, anything?

//As far as I know, counters in mini-marts are generally placed right next to the entrance, so...

>No, all the counters here are placed right next to the entrance.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #474 on: January 07, 2019, 05:16:24 AM »
(I've seen 'em all over the place, but also as you've positioned it!)

>Keep low, and see if we can kind of slide under the counter. Prepare our crowbar again.

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #475 on: January 07, 2019, 06:19:34 AM »
(I've seen 'em all over the place, but also as you've positioned it!)

>Keep low, and see if we can kind of slide under the counter. Prepare our crowbar again.

>You stay low and prepare your crowbar again. There was just no room under the counter for you to slide through.

>"There's no way our for you now, bitch! Come out and let's talk!" The SMG Sukeban declared loudly.
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #476 on: January 07, 2019, 06:50:15 AM »
>Don't move. Let her come, or let her wander off.

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #477 on: January 07, 2019, 01:39:59 PM »
>Don't move. Let her come, or let her wander off.

>You stay perfectly still behind the counter.

>"What's the matter? Nekomata got your tongue?" The SMG Sukeban taunted. "Well then...girls, go get 'er!"
>That sounds like the other three Sukeban have caught up with her, and you can hear footsteps slowly approaching your position...
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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #478 on: January 08, 2019, 07:25:56 AM »
>Welp.
>Whoever's shins we see first, smash 'em with the crowbar.

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Re: Money is forever - Poverty Quest
« Reply #479 on: January 09, 2019, 08:08:52 AM »
>Welp.
>Whoever's shins we see first, smash 'em with the crowbar.

//This post will prove to you that the Yorigami Sukeban is no ordinary mafia.

>You stay still, waiting for the Sukeban to get to you.
>As soon as you see a Sukeban showing up in your line of sight, you swing your crowbar at her legs...
>...Only for the crowbar to bend upon impact, with the Sukeban herself unharmed.
>"What...?!" Nitori uttered in disbelief.
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