[Music] The return of tyvb!!!

[tyvb]

Hey everyone! Its been a really long time since I've been here; I doubt some of you even remember me...but! I have come back and made a new composition.

Feedback would be much appreciated: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3BLCQLRmfw

Programs used:
FL studio 9 XXL edition
Kontakt 4

[tyvb]

Is MoTK dead?

[Suikama]

Oh hey I remember you :V

Glad to see you back and compsing again

Is MoTK dead?

Nah it's just the subforms don't get as nearly as many views as the spam boards :derp:

[Anunsew]

Very nice, as expected from tvyb.

[atoms2ashes]

...I love you now.

Very much so.

[tyvb]

...I love you now.

Very much so.

<3

[tyvb]

No criticisms?

[Drake]

Hmm. Not sure why, but I don't really like the parts when the only stringbassharmonything instrument is the Aahs. (0:15, 1:15, etc) I'm pretty sure it's only a personal thing, though.

Not really sure what to say other than that <3

[flamezero16]

Hey amigo. I most likely wasnt around last time ya were here, so nice to meet ya.

Yeah definitely seems like music takes a back seat compared to art in this forum XD

Anyway i like your composition. It doesnt really sound ZUNish, but its good none the less. If ya ever need a guitar player for your compositions let me know!

[tyvb]

Well. I got a new toy, and though I should go ahead and make another song :3

Even though its a WIP, I would like some opinions on that guitar I have as the melody. I don't know if its too strong/weak. I depend on input from communities to make these even better

http://www.mediafire.com/file/nwn2yywldyj/SarielWIP.mp3

Please be a fast reply :3

[flamezero16]

I dont think its too loud or anything, but the distortion is a bit to strong XD difficult to pick the particular notes out. Tone down that overdrive a bit and it would be perfect.

[Drake]

I think it's a bit too loud. I also agree with above, distortion sounds a bit weird.