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Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« on: April 13, 2010, 08:49:43 PM »
P-p-p-presenting!

Down On The Corner




So yeah this is the first project from the "ooh, official official MotK VN project". This is was basically just a test project for me, so I used Tengukami's "Down on the Corner" story (with his permission), and stuff from the internet/touhou games (without any permission :V).

Oh yes, comment/critism/betabugtesting is appreciated. I wanna learn how to make awesome VNs like nasunasunasu and DragonKnight777  :] :] :]

The next project will be "Guest of the Moon Princess", also by good ol' Tengukami, once he finishes his script/storyboard/ and all that (no pressure man :V). We still need an artist but perhaps I can negotiate things with Formless God or something :3

Remember, if anyone else here is interested in having a Visual Novel, the topic for it is right here. It's fun! It's free! Just sign along the dotted line complete the checklist and I'll have a VN for you in no time!


tl;dr version
DOWNLOAD LINK HERE
Alternate link
Mac and Linux versions
Please note that this story is NSFW.

and that does it for my advertisment training wheeeee~

Edit: Oh yeah Mac and Linux versions will be up in a bit. Please wait warmly.
« Last Edit: April 15, 2010, 11:11:58 PM by Tengu☆kami »

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 10:31:26 PM »
The Linux version works great on my system.

I am ... speechless. This is by far the most popular story I ever wrote, and now it's in VN format. You did a great job. I'm laughing my ass off here.

And it gives me even more motivation to finish the storyboard for Guest of the Moon Princess.

Awesome stuff. Thank you so much.

"Human history and growth are both linked closely to strife. Without conflict, humanity would have no impetus for growth. When humans are satisfied with their present condition, they may as well give up on life."

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 10:45:17 PM »
And it gives me even more motivation to finish the storyboard for Guest of the Moon Princess.
Just as planned :smug:

Awesome stuff. Thank you so much.
Anytime :3
« Last Edit: April 13, 2010, 10:49:56 PM by Suikama the Robotic Rapidash »

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 03:44:01 AM »
Oh wow, It's even more funny in this form.   :V
I'll come up with an evil scheme later. First, it's time to build a giant robot!

You can't have a good evil scheme without a giant robot!

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2010, 03:44:54 AM »
Sound effects and music help add that effect.

It's like anime! Only without the animation....

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2010, 05:36:33 AM »
Pfft, I never thought this day would come.

Then again, i'm glad it did ;3
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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 02:35:29 AM »
lol the rubbing noises were the best. I thought it was something else, had to put my ear near the laptop to be sure :V

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #7 on: April 15, 2010, 02:43:48 AM »
Sound effects and music help add that effect.

It's like anime! Only without the animation....

Kamiyama-What-Animation-It-Isn't-Even-Moving.gif

I have tried it yesterday, and I think this is great, I didn't notice any bugs.
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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2010, 03:03:58 AM »
Kamiyama-What-Animation-It-Isn't-Even-Moving.gif

I have tried it yesterday, and I think this is great, I didn't notice any bugs.
Don't you mean jiggling-eye.gif :V

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #9 on: April 15, 2010, 03:20:23 AM »
Well, that made an interesting start to my day  :o
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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #10 on: April 15, 2010, 11:10:14 PM »
Please mark nsfw stuffs :<

<Tengukami> Right you are. Done.

Some people may not have read the original to know what it's about, and then they open up the game to see that lovely title screen...

Anyway, great story Tengukami, nice job on the VN Suikama. Uh, a question about the program though: how do a couple dozen pictures, some text, a few small sound effects and 1-2 songs make 56mb? Is the program you use really that huge Suikama, when all it does is display some text and pictures and move stuff around in sequential order?
« Last Edit: April 15, 2010, 11:12:41 PM by Tengu☆kami »

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition!
« Reply #11 on: April 16, 2010, 03:17:51 AM »
Please mark nsfw stuffs :<

<Tengukami> Right you are. Done.

Some people may not have read the original to know what it's about, and then they open up the game to see that lovely title screen...

Anyway, great story Tengukami, nice job on the VN Suikama. Uh, a question about the program though: how do a couple dozen pictures, some text, a few small sound effects and 1-2 songs make 56mb? Is the program you use really that huge Suikama, when all it does is display some text and pictures and move stuff around in sequential order?
This is a good question.

I shall check.

Edit: Holy crap. The forest ambient noises file alone is 20 mb! I just downloaded it and threw it in without a second thought...

.wav files. Can't live with em can't live without :(

Ignoring that, the sounds and music take up about 20 mb and the pictures another 20 mb.


Also whoops, forgot about the nsfw. Sorry about that :X
« Last Edit: April 16, 2010, 03:27:12 AM by Suikama the Robotic★Rapidash~♪ »

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #12 on: April 16, 2010, 03:29:06 AM »
The program can't play anything but .wav files?

>: |

Edit: Thinking about it, you could've made a video of yourself acting out the whole story and it would've been of smaller filesize than this...Just sayin'.
« Last Edit: April 16, 2010, 03:33:55 AM by Naut »

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #13 on: April 16, 2010, 03:38:43 AM »
The program can't play anything but .wav files?

>: |

Edit: Thinking about it, you could've made a video of yourself acting out the whole story and it would've been of smaller filesize than this...Just sayin'.
I was saying that as a figure of speech :V The music files are mp3 and 3 mb each. I didn't realize that forest sound effect was so big just now.

Also did you hit your bandwidth limit or something? Why so cheap? BV :V :getdown:

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #14 on: April 16, 2010, 04:00:09 AM »
Oh I'm fine with the filesize (and nsfw-ness for that matter), I'm just trying to think in the interest of others who may also want to enjoy the story. Not everybody has a good connection.

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #15 on: April 16, 2010, 07:32:40 PM »
Oh I'm fine with the filesize (and nsfw-ness for that matter), I'm just trying to think in the interest of others who may also want to enjoy the story. Not everybody has a good connection.
:3

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #16 on: April 18, 2010, 08:17:04 PM »
hes right lol, thankfully I just rape the university internet connection for larger downloads though.

could try OGG, i've started fiddling with it lately and comes out pretty small. probably for the crap qaulity mind. And also because the program I use wont accept MP3 files  :V

also forgot to say but fetish thread reminded me, love the title image. good to get the early lulz in  :]

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #17 on: April 19, 2010, 03:30:22 AM »
Finally read/watched it.

Fun times. Good image choice.
There was something here once. Wonder what...

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #18 on: April 19, 2010, 03:51:22 AM »
I am disappointed in the lack of hot Cirno-on-broom action.

GJ anyways :V

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #19 on: April 19, 2010, 08:33:21 PM »
I am disappointed in the lack of hot Cirno-on-broom action.

GJ anyways :V

This will be included in the adult only special edition soon to hit the shelves!  :V

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #20 on: April 20, 2010, 10:34:58 PM »
The Cirno-on-broom action was only implied in the original story anyway.

"Permission" has a bit more explicit goings-ons, with Cirno and Kaguya, although the "action" is less about who put what body part where and more about what's going on in their heads while they're engaged.

"Human history and growth are both linked closely to strife. Without conflict, humanity would have no impetus for growth. When humans are satisfied with their present condition, they may as well give up on life."

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #21 on: April 21, 2010, 04:06:01 AM »
I think that alone makes "Permission" one of the best-written naughty-fics I've ever seen, for the record.

Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #22 on: April 29, 2010, 09:49:51 PM »
I think that alone makes "Permission" one of the best-written naughty-fics I've ever seen, for the record.
If I can get an artist willing to draw lolisex then mayb*shot*

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #23 on: May 07, 2010, 08:58:12 PM »
suikama you evil genius! you made even me laugh, and i don't laugh often. maybe... i'll help you with your VN project, maybe, have to think about it

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Re: Down On The Corner - Visual Novel edition! NSFW!
« Reply #24 on: May 07, 2010, 09:21:21 PM »
suikama you evil genius! you made even me laugh, and i don't laugh often. maybe... i'll help you with your VN project, maybe, have to think about it
:3