Author Topic: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4  (Read 60317 times)

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #240 on: December 13, 2016, 12:45:07 PM »
>"You look hurt..."
>Look upset.

> "Thank you for pointing out the obvious thing..."
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #241 on: December 13, 2016, 01:15:18 PM »
>Look even sadder.
>"What you said before, about you not always being here... I was worried that it would've been too soon for it to happen..."
« Last Edit: December 13, 2016, 01:25:03 PM by Miniking »

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #242 on: December 13, 2016, 01:30:39 PM »
>Look even sadder.

> "... Look..." Sakura points to herself. "I decided to be strong... I can't let myself be a innocent little girl who can't defend herself."
> "You are carrying that to the extreme." Marisa comments. "I like how you want to surpass your limits... but don't overstrain yourself, that might get you killed."
> "NOTHING IS GOING TO HAPPEN!" Sakura shouts.
> Marisa is silent.
> "I HAVE THINGS TO FIGHT FOR!" She says. "None of you can't stop me to not protect the people I love, the place I love, the LIFE I love! NONE! I... I have to do this!"
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #243 on: December 13, 2016, 02:02:31 PM »
>Clench our hand on a fist.
>"And putting your life on the line is "protecting" that ?! IF YOU ARE DEAD YOU CAN'T PROTECT ANYTHING !"
>Look extremely upset.
>"THERE ARE MANY WAYS TO ACHIEVE THAT GOAL SAFELY, AND ATTEMPTING TO ENDURE WHAT SEEMS LIKE AN EXTREMELY POWERFUL SPELLCARD IS *NOT* ONE OF THEM, ESPECIALLY ON YOUR CURRENT CONDITION."
>Cross our arms and shed some tears.
>"WHAT WOULD MISS REIMU SAY OF THIS ? OR KIKU-CHAN ? OR NIJI-CHAN ? OR BASTET-CHAN ? OR ANY OF OUR FRIENDS ?! AND WHAT ABOUT OUR PROMISE ? IT DOESN'T MATTER IF YOU ARE MY GRANDMOTHER, YOU ARE STILL MY FRIEND LIKE YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN, SO EVEN THEN YOU WILL BREAK THAT PROMISE ?!?"

//Miniiiiii !

Neovereign

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #244 on: December 13, 2016, 02:33:12 PM »
//We probably shouldn't yell at her... And my edit was missed TT_TT
>"N-Not like this at least. This is too extreme. And in the middle of the night, without telling us anything. W-What are we even in danger of?"

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #245 on: December 13, 2016, 02:47:47 PM »
//But my pissed off-ness is so valid. ;-;

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #246 on: December 13, 2016, 02:51:06 PM »
//We can get angrier if she doesn't give good reasoning for any of this.

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #247 on: December 13, 2016, 02:55:28 PM »
//Okei... u_u

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #248 on: December 13, 2016, 02:59:37 PM »
>Clench our hand on a fist.
>"And putting your life on the line is "protecting" that ?! IF YOU ARE DEAD YOU CAN'T PROTECT ANYTHING !"
>Look extremely upset.
>"THERE ARE MANY WAYS TO ACHIEVE THAT GOAL SAFELY, AND ATTEMPTING TO ENDURE WHAT SEEMS LIKE AN EXTREMELY POWERFUL SPELLCARD IS *NOT* ONE OF THEM, ESPECIALLY ON YOUR CURRENT CONDITION."
>Cross our arms and shed some tears.
>"WHAT WOULD MISS REIMU SAY OF THIS ? OR KIKU-CHAN ? OR NIJI-CHAN ? OR BASTET-CHAN ? OR ANY OF OUR FRIENDS ?! AND WHAT ABOUT OUR PROMISE ? IT DOESN'T MATTER IF YOU ARE MY GRANDMOTHER, YOU ARE STILL MY FRIEND LIKE YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN, SO EVEN THEN YOU WILL BREAK THAT PROMISE ?!?"

//Miniiiiii !

//We probably shouldn't yell at her... And my edit was missed TT_TT
>"N-Not like this at least. This is too extreme. And in the middle of the night, without telling us anything. W-What are we even in danger of?"

> "It's not like any of you are in danger, but I need to prepare if it comes at any moment!"
> "And like I said, nothing is going to happen to me!" Sakura replies.
> "..." Marisa sighs and pulls out something octagonal, along with a paper.
> "If I can't endure this, then how I can endure the even WORST things that can happen? I'm... I just..." Sigh. "I just don't want to feel useless just like when my daughter disappeared!"
> _
ALL HAIL PROPOSALING-SAMA. SURPRISE FOR HIM.

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #249 on: December 13, 2016, 03:18:01 PM »
>"There are way better ways to become more capable though ! You think Miss Reimu got to where she is now by putting herself in front of spellcards that could kill her ?! And strength alone is of no value if you don't also develop technique, awareness, wits and reflexes."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #250 on: December 13, 2016, 03:20:37 PM »
>"There are way better ways to become more capable though ! You think Miss Reimu got to where she is now by putting herself in front of spellcards that could kill her ?! And strength alone is of no value if you don't also develop technique, awareness, wits and reflexes."

> "Right now I'm not trying to develop those aspects, but my body alone."
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #251 on: December 13, 2016, 03:24:24 PM »
>"And putting your life on the line is "developing" that ?! IF YOU ARE DEAD YOU CAN'T PROTECT ANYTHING !"
>Look even more upset.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #252 on: December 13, 2016, 03:28:36 PM »
>"And putting your life on the line is "developing" that ?! IF YOU ARE DEAD YOU CAN'T PROTECT ANYTHING !"
>Look even more upset.

> "I can ensure you! I'M NOT GOING TO DIE!"
> "Love Sign!" Marisa is pointing the octagonal thing towards Sakura. "MASTEEER SPAAARRRK!!"
> A GREAT rainbow laser it's fired from the object.
> "Then you can do this, Sakura!" Marisa shouts.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #253 on: December 13, 2016, 03:31:16 PM »
>Be surprised, then quickly launch ourselves in the way of the laser too.
>"You aren't doing this alone !"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #254 on: December 13, 2016, 03:34:45 PM »
//Oh boy. On one hand, I'm afraid of Sakura losing another child, while on the other, I'm afraid of us losing her so soon, or something else...
Well, I'll let you decide on this Raf.

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #255 on: December 13, 2016, 03:39:51 PM »
//Well we can't just tackle her outta the way, but we can't let her just stay there alone either.

//So i remembered the promise we made of doing it all together, and if she is doing that, then so should we, she won't have any arguments to counter us with either.

//That's why i put that command, so any objections?

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #256 on: December 13, 2016, 03:42:22 PM »
//Nope~

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #257 on: December 13, 2016, 03:47:05 PM »
>Be surprised, then quickly launch ourselves in the way of the laser too.
>"You aren't doing this alone !"

> "W-What the hell?! What are you-"
> The laser reach the two of you. It hurts A LOT... It's like you are burnin up!
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #258 on: December 13, 2016, 03:56:08 PM »
>Endure it. Endure it! ENDURE IT!

Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #259 on: December 13, 2016, 04:03:33 PM »
>Try to make it so that we expose less of our body to it too !

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #260 on: December 13, 2016, 04:04:49 PM »
>Try to make it so that we expose less of our body to it too !

> It's not possible. You just... can't move with this amount of energy against you!

>Endure it. Endure it! ENDURE IT!

> You try to endure the pain... but IT HURTS!
> "N-NO! D-DAIKO!" Sakura's voice start to get more severe. "I WILL NOT LET THIS HAPPEN!"
> "W-What the...?!" Marisa eyes widen.
> Suddenly, something big from behind you starts to block the laser.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #261 on: December 13, 2016, 04:07:49 PM »
>Try to identify it.

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #262 on: December 13, 2016, 04:24:27 PM »
>Try to identify it.

> You examine what's blocking the Master Spark. It's... a hand...
> When you look behind you, you can see Sakura, but a bit different.
> Her eyes are glowing an intense yellow, while her horn it's more larger and it's shining. She has her hand raised toward the laser.
> The most incredible thing it's... the "monster" behind her. It's a great blue demon-like creature with oni horns. It's imitating the motion of Sakura, blocking the laser with his hand.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #263 on: December 13, 2016, 04:27:42 PM »
>"G-Good to see.... you awoke something inside you..."
>Smile a bit, then head closer.
>"I told you, we are in this together..."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #264 on: December 13, 2016, 04:39:01 PM »
>"G-Good to see.... you awoke something inside you..."
>Smile a bit, then head closer.
>"I told you, we are in this together..."

> She doesn't answer. She seems to be struggling with the Master Spark.
> "HAAAH!" She raises her fist to the sky, the avatar doing the same.
> The spark deviates to the sky, dissipating seconds later.
> The avatar disappears and Sakuras features return to how they were.
> Marisa blinks. "W-What... just happened... She... She BLOCKED and DEVIATED the Master Spark!"
> "I... am... so... rry..." Sakura loses consciousness and starts to fall.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #265 on: December 13, 2016, 04:43:55 PM »
>"S-Sakura !"
>Quickly head over and grab her !
>Check up on her !

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #266 on: December 13, 2016, 04:46:28 PM »
>"S-Sakura !"
>Quickly head over and grab her !
>Check up on her !

> You grab her quickly.
> You check her... Huh? Her wounds are closed...
> She is just unconscious.
> Marisa quickly approaches in a broom.
> "Is she okay?" She asks.
> _
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Monarda

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #267 on: December 13, 2016, 05:03:00 PM »
>"Yes... seeing me in danger awoke a new power on her, her wounds even healed."
>Smile a bit.
>"I told her we would do it together... Marisa right ? So you are an magician from what i can see, the name is Daikoku Susume, her grandson, but our friendly relationship is a lot different from the usual one."

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #268 on: December 13, 2016, 05:05:00 PM »
>"Ugh... Why'd she do something like this though? I-It was too much to just start with out of nowhere..."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 4
« Reply #269 on: December 13, 2016, 05:35:16 PM »
>"Yes... seeing me in danger awoke a new power on her, her wounds even healed."
>Smile a bit.
>"I told her we would do it together... Marisa right ? So you are an magician from what i can see, the name is Daikoku Susume, her grandson, but our friendly relationship is a lot different from the usual one."

> "Uh-huh. The name here it's Marisa Kirisame." She says. "And yeah, she told me about you, ze~"

>"Ugh... Why'd she do something like this though? I-It was too much to just start with out of nowhere..."

> "I was doing this with her since a looong time." Marisa replies. "We are training partners. We always train at this time of the night."
> _
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