Author Topic: [Challenge]This is where I make my stand  (Read 50594 times)

Kinzo the Astro Curious

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #660 on: December 09, 2010, 08:09:14 PM »
Was the mistake on
The last line intentional?
Six syllables, see.

oh is write two?
I wasn't aware if so
my english sucks

UncertainJakutten

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #661 on: December 09, 2010, 08:10:14 PM »
Good job Bitmap. I should have known that my feelings are more long term than single skirmishes :P.

Should be interesting to see where you go.


But see, Moerin
Those are not seasoned haiku
You will fall like leaves.




Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #662 on: December 09, 2010, 08:19:15 PM »
Hey, hey, hey UK,
How many zorkmids you stole
today? ...err... Summer.

UncertainJakutten

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #663 on: December 09, 2010, 08:23:29 PM »
A better question
Would be how many haiku
With the muse, Decay



Tengukami

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #664 on: December 09, 2010, 08:32:49 PM »
By friends and observers twas noted
That in summer time, John was fur-coated.
He said, "You may scoff
But I shan't take it off
Underneath I am horribly bloated."

"Human history and growth are both linked closely to strife. Without conflict, humanity would have no impetus for growth. When humans are satisfied with their present condition, they may as well give up on life."

UncertainJakutten

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #665 on: December 09, 2010, 08:37:51 PM »
There was an old man
From Peru, whose lim'ricks all
Looked like haiku. He

Said with a laugh, "I
Cut them in half, the pay is
Much better for two"

I am well aware
That the above, like Fall's warmth
Is merely false art.


Matsuri

Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #666 on: December 09, 2010, 08:48:07 PM »
There was an old man
From Peru, whose lim'ricks all
Looked like haiku. He

Said with a laugh, "I
Cut them in half, the pay is
Much better for two"

I am well aware
That the above, like Fall's warmth
Is merely false art.

:*

Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #667 on: December 09, 2010, 10:01:17 PM »
Moerin is a good
opponent you see to me
is why I laud him

My, shall we make this a haiku thread?

UncertainJakutten

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #668 on: December 09, 2010, 10:19:08 PM »
But the two of you
Are an insult to the art
Bulls in china shops.


Iryan

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #669 on: December 09, 2010, 10:22:16 PM »
Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refridgerator
Old Danmakufu stuff can be found here!

"As the size of an explosion increases, the numbers of social situations it is incapable of solving approaches zero."

Moerin

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #670 on: December 09, 2010, 10:23:25 PM »
But the two of you
Are an insult to the art
Bulls in china shops.
Bitch you just jealous
'Cause I be hardcore stylin'
You can't touch this skill~
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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #671 on: December 09, 2010, 10:24:18 PM »
But the two of you
Are an insult to the art
Bulls in china shops.

Don't worry you see
For tonight will be special
Just you wait and see

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refridgerator

Haikus are fun, kay?
I do agree but what if
your mind becomes stuck?
« Last Edit: December 09, 2010, 10:28:57 PM by Bitmap »

Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #672 on: December 09, 2010, 10:35:07 PM »
Splitting a sentence
Over three lines is a bad
way to make Haikus.

Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #673 on: December 09, 2010, 10:37:12 PM »
My apologies
I am still very new, kay?
Please give me a break.

UncertainJakutten

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #674 on: December 09, 2010, 10:39:37 PM »
What's so hard to get
About the fact that NATURE
Is NEEDED for art.

Refer to nature
In your scribbles, and renew
As springtime flowers.

Otherwise, you both
Are insults to the aged art
Decay as carcass.

Oh, Naut has a point
Splitting haiku as logger
Is quite destructive



Iryan

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Re: [Challenge] IT'S OVER
« Reply #675 on: December 09, 2010, 10:43:44 PM »
There is no reason
To type in haikus all day
It feels forced to me

And what UK said
about the last haiku line
Spring Summer Winter

There, are you happy?
It won't make it poetic,
It just feels forced, too
Old Danmakufu stuff can be found here!

"As the size of an explosion increases, the numbers of social situations it is incapable of solving approaches zero."

UncertainJakutten

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #676 on: December 09, 2010, 10:45:58 PM »
Possibly to you
But I find restored honor
In flowered haiku

Also:

Quote from: Purvis
For the next week, all of your posts are to be made in haiku. Extended haiku is permissible. Do not forget the seasonal reference!


Moerin

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #677 on: December 09, 2010, 10:49:12 PM »
What's so hard to get
About the fact that NATURE
Is NEEDED for art.

Refer to nature
In your scribbles, and renew
As springtime flowers.

Otherwise, you both
Are insults to the aged art
Decay as carcass.

Oh, Naut has a point
Splitting haiku as logger
Is quite destructive

It is the only
Way I am allowed to talk
All week, remember.

Art can go to hell
For all I care if it stops
Communication.

Please bare that in mind
And don't go on about art
When you are not forced

To have to talk in
Haiku all week even if
It is just a joke.
The solution to all of life's problems!

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"For hearts long lost and full of fright, for those alone in blackest night, accept our ring and join our fight... Love Conquers All -  with violet light!"

Iryan

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #678 on: December 09, 2010, 10:52:31 PM »
It is the only
Way I am allowed to talk
All week, remember.

Art can go to hell
For all I care if it stops
Communication.

Please bare that in mind
And don't go on about art
When you are not forced

To have to talk in
Haiku all week even if
It is just a joke.
Alternatively
Just make all your posts include
"Autumn". Problem solved.
Old Danmakufu stuff can be found here!

"As the size of an explosion increases, the numbers of social situations it is incapable of solving approaches zero."

Moerin

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  • It's the roar of the soul!
Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #679 on: December 09, 2010, 10:55:19 PM »
Hmmm, that might work out,
Actually.  Autumn should not
Be hard to shoehorn.
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#1 Rin Satsuki Fan~♥
"For hearts long lost and full of fright, for those alone in blackest night, accept our ring and join our fight... Love Conquers All -  with violet light!"

Iryan

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #680 on: December 09, 2010, 10:57:41 PM »
Quick, replace the
Word "Autumn" with "Spring" to keep
The words at seven.

Unless of course,
You pronounce "actually"
More like "act-shuh-ly"
« Last Edit: December 09, 2010, 10:59:54 PM by Jean-Jacque Toramarusseau »
Old Danmakufu stuff can be found here!

"As the size of an explosion increases, the numbers of social situations it is incapable of solving approaches zero."

UncertainJakutten

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #681 on: December 09, 2010, 11:03:24 PM »
You do realize
That I'm being difficult
As harsh winter...

Mostly as a joke?
Though I do think they're better
Including seasons.



Moerin

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #682 on: December 09, 2010, 11:07:21 PM »
Unless of course,
You pronounce "actually"
More like "act-shuh-ly"
Is there something wrong
With pronouncing it that way?
Um... Because I do.
The solution to all of life's problems!

#1 Rin Satsuki Fan~♥
"For hearts long lost and full of fright, for those alone in blackest night, accept our ring and join our fight... Love Conquers All -  with violet light!"

Iryan

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Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #683 on: December 09, 2010, 11:13:25 PM »
Is there something wrong
With pronouncing it that way?
Um... Because I do.
Well, I have to say
I always pronounce the word
As "Ac-tu-al-ly"

Although it appears
That dif-fe-rent dialects
Make diff'rent haikus

Spring Autumn Autumn
Summer Winter Spring Autumn
Winter Summer Spring
Old Danmakufu stuff can be found here!

"As the size of an explosion increases, the numbers of social situations it is incapable of solving approaches zero."

Re: Official Haiku Thread
« Reply #684 on: December 10, 2010, 05:24:03 PM »
Why is this falling?
For this thread is very great
So up it goes now