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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #420 on: August 01, 2011, 07:14:00 AM »
>"There is no time for this. My friend needs me, right now. Please let me go, we can discuss whatever you need later tonight. Right now is too important, I am sorry."

>You speak to you know not what, pleading for reason, for some understanding of your need to help your friend. Somewhat to your surprise, you get a reply. The sound from the darkness changes, from hundreds of whispers to something else. It takes a few moments for you get a grasp of the new sound, but you'd wager it's laughter. The uniform secret snickers of... of whatever's out there.
>"She doesn't understand, she doesn't understand."
>"Of course not, she's still only human."
>"Is she afraid? Is that human fear?"
>"Or is she angry? She thinks she can't see her friend!"
>"No. Surely not!"
>"Why, she can hear her, if she but listens hard enough."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #421 on: August 01, 2011, 07:17:13 AM »
>Try to hear Rin, or the Stranger for that matter.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #422 on: August 01, 2011, 03:05:05 PM »
>Try to see them, too. Will it as hard as we possibly can.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #423 on: August 02, 2011, 01:49:17 AM »
>Try to hear Rin, or the Stranger for that matter.
>Try to see them, too. Will it as hard as we possibly can.

>You perk your ears and strain your eyes against the darkness, trying to find your friends' voice amongst the noise, some sign of her amidst the gloom. It doesn't take long to find her voice again, and you look in that direction. You look as hard as you can at the black curtain before you, and it almost seems to part at your focus. A surge of light assaults your eyes and a blast of wind nearly takes you off your feet. You take a moment to steady yourself as the gale passes, and see a scene before that is... impossible.
>The school sports field does stand before your vision, deserted as it was moments ago, but there is no sign of the yellow-skinned stranger, no sign of Kyouko either. What you see is... YOU. Byakuren Hijiri, clad in a long black gown, hiding your feet, with elbow-length black gloves. The outfit itself is strange to you, but even more alien is the aura, the presence of command surrounding her/you. It is an imperious feeling, like anyone in your presence would bow down before Byakuren, as they rightly should. In fact, sure enough, there IS someone kneeling before Byakuren on all fours, even. Though she is not directly in front of Byakuren, but rather Rin, who is standing next to you, alongside a tall woman with blue hair whom you do not recognize, and seems to be licking Rin's shoes. It takes you a moment to recognize the dark-haired woman at Rin's feet is Konngara, right about when you notice Rin speaking.
>"I can't thank you enough, my Lady. I'm honored by this gift."
>Byakuren merely nods in acknowledgement, while the blue-haired woman intones in a resonating voice, "Justice from the Dark Lady..."
>"Did you want me to do anything special with her, my Lady?" Rin continues, as Konngara pauses in her 'task', glancing up long eough to glare at Rin before a look from Byakuren returns her face to the ground, her attitude melting with that imperious look.
>"Anything you wish," Byakuren speaks, in a powerful voice you barely recognize as your own, full of towering superiority. "As once she owned you, so now do you own her. Until such time as you grow bored with her."
>Rin rubs her hands together, smirking broadly. "That won't be anytime soon, my Lady. I can be very creative." Byakuren chuckles darkly, as Rin produces a collar and leash. "And I've been looking forward to this for a long time." She fastens the collar around Konngara's neck, and snaps the leash to it. "Time for a walk, you. Let's see how YOU like being a pet for a while."
>Byakuren sneers as Rin bows deeply before you and walks off with her new pet. You feel contempt for the subjugated oni, but this is no more than what she has earned for herself, and the bare minimum that you grant to your favored. Such is your world, the world of the Dark Lady.

>The curtain of darkness rolls in again, leaving you alone in the dark once more.

>Byakuren Hijiri Corruption Score: 14.
>You feel a distinct chill around you, and a weight pressing down on your shoulders.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #424 on: August 02, 2011, 01:53:59 AM »
>"No. That is not me. I will never become such a person."
>Keep willing the darkness away. We need to help Rin, and we're not going to let whatever this is stop us.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #425 on: August 02, 2011, 02:14:07 AM »
>Rather than a 'this isn't me.'
>"What would be the point of that? It doesn't solve anything with Rin or Konngara."
>After all, resentment and justification would still be issues, it's just inspire Konngara to do something later on, likely something drastic. Not that there is time to explain this.


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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #426 on: August 02, 2011, 03:21:38 AM »
>Let's say both.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #427 on: August 02, 2011, 06:00:02 AM »
>"What would be the point of that? It doesn't solve anything with Rin or Konngara."
>After all, resentment and justification would still be issues, it's just inspire Konngara to do something later on, likely something drastic. Not that there is time to explain this.

>You reaffirm your beliefs on the subjects of vengeance to yourself and whatever's out there before assuming, likely correctly, that this is not the proper time for a philosophical debate with some otherworldly influence.
>But in the back of your mind, a fleeting thought occurs. Why DO you care about Konngara at all? As far as you know, she's never done any good for anyone, and has only made life more difficult for everyone around her. Rin especially, but yourself as well. You weren't looking for any more responsibility, and because of that obnoxious oni, you now have to take care of a youkai who couldn't look after herself well enough. But Rin has proven to be worth your affection, so why shouldn't she have some payback? Who's to say that that wasn't what she really wants? And seeing her get what she wanted DID feel satisfying....
>That thought vanishes from your mind almost as quickly as it formed. Leaving you with the unsettling question of why you had it in the first place...

>"No. That is not me. I will never become such a person."
>Keep willing the darkness away. We need to help Rin, and we're not going to let whatever this is stop us.

>You cast your defiance out into the night, vowing never to become the kind of person you witnessed just now, trying to keep your friend foremost in your mind. The black veil before ripples again, and you can hear the sounds of snickering again. It seems louder this time.... No, that's not right. There seem to be more voices now is what it is, leering at you from the darkness.
>"'Become such a person'?"
>"She doesn't understand!"
>"Only human after all."
>"Wouldn't they know their own birthright? Or the truth when they see it?"
>"Or wonder, if they can do that much, what could they do for others? Other close to her heart? Her own blood, even..."

>Byakuren Hijiri Corruption Score: 15.
>The chill around you worsens, and the weight on your shoulders grows slightly heavier. Your right hand starts to feel numb.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #428 on: August 02, 2011, 06:06:10 AM »
>"I was told that wearing this ring would give me the power to protect what I care about. I will not allow such power to corrupt me. If you're so convinced that what you showed me is who I am, that I would come to misuse such power, then give me the chance to proove you wrong."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #429 on: August 02, 2011, 06:59:07 AM »
>"I was told that wearing this ring would give me the power to protect what I care about. I will not allow such power to corrupt me. If you're so convinced that what you showed me is who I am, that I would come to misuse such power, then give me the chance to proove you wrong."

>Before we say this, do we even know that it's acting on us?
>As for the stray thought, the answer is obvious: utility has no meaning in the evaluation of a being. They live and experience, this is enough to make it worthy to preserve them.

I say we take the ring off. It has failed to help us, and if this has happened in real time, likely gotten Orin in a world of shit.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #430 on: August 02, 2011, 09:43:39 AM »
>Before we say this, do we even know that it's acting on us?

>You cannot say with absolute certainty, but given that you're losing feeling in the hand you're wearing the ring on, and that it's gemstone turned black the instant you put it on, this seems at least a decent guess.

>As for the stray thought, the answer is obvious: utility has no meaning in the evaluation of a being. They live and experience, this is enough to make it worthy to preserve them.

>Oh so enlightened are you... Shame that this place still sees you as only human. You would make a fine example of your race.

>"I was told that wearing this ring would give me the power to protect what I care about. I will not allow such power to corrupt me. If you're so convinced that what you showed me is who I am, that I would come to misuse such power, then give me the chance to proove you wrong."

>Defiantly you deny the darkness around you, and whatever creatures it holds, vowing your heart will never be swayed. The voices from the dark stop their laughing, if indeed that's what they were doing in the first place. The ripples in the darkness stop as well, though whether this is because whatever was out there has vanished, or simply stopped moving, you cannot be certain. But for the moment, you find yourself alone again, awash in a black sea. You think you can hear something, barely, coming from far away, but it's too far to make out clearly, and Rin isn't here to be your ears this time.
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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #431 on: August 02, 2011, 02:48:30 PM »
>Strain to hear it, moving towards it as we do.
>Also, continue attempting to will the darkness away.

Let's go a little longer before removing the ring. It's clearly doing something, and as far as the promised power is concerned, I think we may be getting closer to it. Also, I expect that this is not happening in real time.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #432 on: August 03, 2011, 10:15:08 AM »
>Also, continue attempting to will the darkness away.

>You continue to draw upon your willpower to ward off the gloom pressing down upon you. A weight, you note, that seems to be getting heavier and heavier. You have always been a strong person, very sure of yourself and your own identity, with a will surpassed by few, if any, you've known.But this isn't like when you faced down Konngara, or when you decided to remain in Mayoiga, away from your family. You are alone here, more alone than you've ever been, a simple teenage human girl at the mercy of some otherworldy force. A power, or being, even beings, perhaps incomprehensible to the greatest minds of the world, and that power has you trapped firmly in its' icy cold grip.

>Strain to hear it, moving towards it as we do.

>You strain your ears against the silent wall of black, trying to focus on the distant sound. You draw a bead on it and set of in its direction, whatever direction that is. The darkness seems even thicker now, you almost seem to shove your way through. The sensation is... disturbing. Like dozens of spiders dancing across your skin, chilling you with their frigid, spindly legs.
>Time passes as you press on, and after what seems like an hour, but what easily could have been only a minute, you draw close enough to the sound to hear it more clearly. It is another voice, just one this time. And it sounds familiar, too. Almost like....
>... Myoren?

>Byakuren Hijiri Corruption Score: 17.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #433 on: August 03, 2011, 10:50:12 AM »
>Take heart. We can remove the ring whenever we wish.
>Try to focus on this voice. It seems we are married to this course of action for now if it's been that long.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #434 on: August 04, 2011, 08:18:05 AM »
>Take heart. We can remove the ring whenever we wish.

>You take comfort in the knowledge that you can remove the ring at your convenience. Any comfort, at this point, is a welcome sensation, however small it is.

>Try to focus on this voice. It seems we are married to this course of action for now if it's been that long.

>As you focus your attention on the lone voice, you find that it is, indeed, the voice of your brother. And yet at the same time, different, somehow. It seems stronger, more robust, than you're used to hearing your soft-spoken brother sound. "I still can't get over what you've done to me." you hear him say, before the darkness before you rolls back as it did before. The burst of wind that accompanies it this time seems more comfortable this time. Perhaps because you knew it was coming. But then, perhaps not.

>You see before you part of a room you have never seen before, with red carpet and hardwood walls, and a woman with short blonde hair you've never seen before guarding the door. The black-clad version of yourself is present, as is your brother. He is different than the last time you saw. He's always been sickly, and a bit frail, but now he looks... buff. Ripped, even, as you look at his shirtless form. He seems energized, full of a life he's never had before, as he grins from ear to ear and rubs his hands together. "To free me from the prison of my own body, give me a life I'd barely dared dream of before.... with all that comes with it...."
>The blonde girl at the door raises her arms to her side and intones, "Glories to the favored of the Dark Lady." as Myoren turns to face the other occupants of the room. A lineup of women, each with different outfits and appearances, each with the same hopeless look in their downcast eyes, standing at attention as they are inspicted by your newly virile brother. He struts before the young women, sizing them up with an obvious look on his face as to why they, and he, are here.
>"Do any of these appeal to you, brother mine?" Byakuren inquires of Myoren, who pauses in his appraisement, raising his hand to his mouth in exaggerated consideration. Byakuren smirks at your brother's newfound humor.
>"Well, they're a fine bunch, that's for sure. Certainly adequate, buuuuuut...." he drawls, turning his gaze to Byakuren. His eyes are smoldering. "I think I'd rather have you."
>The blonde door guard starts from her place, her expression outraged, but just as quickly, her stops, her hands flying to her chest, and she screams, dropping to the floor. You note that Byakuren's hand is surrounded by a dark purple glow, Byakuren's neutral face somehow frightening to behold. Myoren's grin seems cruel as he watches the blonde writhe in agony on the floor, black sparks flying from her chest as she continues screaming. The line of women cover their faces with their hands, a gesture of supplication, you believe, rather than simple dread.
>"Mind your place, little demon. Lest I send you back to the world that spawned you." Byakuren intones in a terrible voice, before lowering her hand, the glow fading. The guard screams once more, briefly, before curling up into herself and gasping shallowly. She returns her gaze to Myoren, and crosses the room to him, tracing the musculature of his sculpted chest lightly.
>The last thing you see before the darkness rolls back in upon you and covers your sight, leaving you alone again, is the image of Myoren wrapping his arms around Byakuren.

>Byakuren Hijiri Corruption Score: 25.
>You feel a sharp chill in your heart, accompanied by a pleasant feeling throughout your body. As though the dark and cold were welcoming you to where you belong.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #435 on: August 04, 2011, 10:15:00 AM »
>Wince at the chill, then shudder.

I think, at this point, there is literally no reason Byakuren would keep the ring on if she's feeling this place is welcoming her.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #436 on: August 04, 2011, 03:09:38 PM »
Agreed. But first...

>"Again, you are wrong. You show me with the power to help my brother, and yes, I would do so in a heartbeat if I could. But I would not be the person you show me to be. I will not allow myself to become that person."
>Remove the ring.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #437 on: August 04, 2011, 08:05:04 PM »
>Add, before taking off the ring, "I have no more time for this farce. People need me."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #438 on: August 05, 2011, 01:22:10 AM »
To be honest, I'd like to go the 'dark lady' route (and yes, I think I could make the transition without breaking character), but something tells me I'm probably alone in that. Although if you do want to do that, then say so.

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« Reply #439 on: August 05, 2011, 01:25:21 AM »
Sounds boring, really. And moreover, out of character at this point in time.

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« Reply #440 on: August 05, 2011, 04:29:52 AM »
>Wince at the chill, then shudder.
>"Again, you are wrong. You show me with the power to help my brother, and yes, I would do so in a heartbeat if I could. But I would not be the person you show me to be. I will not allow myself to become that person."
>Add, before taking off the ring, "I have no more time for this farce. People need me."
>Remove the ring.

>You cringe at the sensation within your chest, and the lowering temperature around you, then decide that alright. Enough is enough. Whatever you hoped that ring was going to do, it obviously hasn't done you any good. At least not the kind of good you wanted in the first place, and you've certainly had enough of being alone in this place. Power or no, it's time to leave, and you take hold of the purple band around your finger.
>Before you yank it off your hand, however, you hesitate. It truly was good to see your brother that healthy, that full of life, for the first time in his entire life. You'd hoped to see him thus for the whole of your life, and had dabbled with the idea of a medical career to make it so. But here, in this place, you have seen it come to pass. Because of you. And he looked no older here than he did the last time you saw him, which means, you think at least, that you could walk out of this place, stretch your arm out, and give him the life he's always dreamed of.
>And that's just your brother. If you could do that for him, what's to stop you from doing so to someone else? Anyone else? And when that crosses your mind, the voices from the dark whisper around you, closer, somehow, this time.
>"People do need her. Her world needs her."
>"She doesn't know how much."
>"More than she can know."
>"She doesn't know why."
>"Because she hasn't asked the right questions."
>"She doesn't know the questions."
>"Of couse she doesn't. Why else would she still resist what she is?"
>"Only human..."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #441 on: August 05, 2011, 04:31:59 AM »
>Some prices are not worth being paid, some bargains are not worth taking.
>Remove it.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #442 on: August 05, 2011, 04:53:21 AM »
>Before removing the ring: "I resist what you've shown me because I do not want to be that person. You say that's who I really am, but you are wrong. Even if I were to have such power, I would not allow myself to become the person you showed me. If you insist that I'm wrong, then tell me how to obtain that power, and I will use it as I choose to, but I will do so without becoming the person you showed me. Otherwise, we're done here."
>Assuming that no power of information on how to obtain it is forthcoming, remove the ring.

I still think we should go the 'dark' route, but whatever.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #443 on: August 05, 2011, 04:56:04 AM »
>"If you insist that I'm wrong, then tell me how to obtain that power, and I will use it as I choose to, but I will do so without becoming the person you showed me. Otherwise, we're done here."

>Let's not say this. Blatant power hunger is unbecoming of ideals that do not require it to flourish. It betrays what such is about to begin with and implies it's being done for personal profit.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #444 on: August 05, 2011, 04:59:37 AM »
I'd say Byakuren would want power right now, because she needs it in order to help Orin and others. That's why we put the ring on in the first place, remember So I guess she doesn't really want it, but she'd recognize that she needs it. If you think that needs rephrasing, go ahead, but the idea I was trying to communicate is that of a claim that these voices are wrong about us, that we would not become a different person even if we had the power we were shown. And also to emphasize that yes, we are seeking power right now, because in the current situation, we really kind of do need it (although I suspect that we've already gained some, and that we gain more the longer we wear the ring for).
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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #445 on: August 05, 2011, 07:10:42 AM »
>Some prices are not worth being paid, some bargains are not worth taking.
>Remove it.

>Despite the temptation before you, you resist it, holding true to yourself and your heart. And so, thrusting aside thoughts of a vindicated Rin and a surprisingly buff Myoren, you pull the ring off your finger.
>.... And nothing happens. Even with the ring now securely removed from your hand, the chill remians in your heart. The air around continues getting colder. That weight upon your shoulders persists. The voices fall silent again. And you are still surrounded by a sea of darkness, still as alone as you were since this all began. A lone human in an empty world of black.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #446 on: August 05, 2011, 07:15:08 AM »
>"Well, at least you're quiet now."
>Take a few moments to close our eyes, and listen for sounds of Rin and the Stranger.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #447 on: August 05, 2011, 07:20:39 AM »
>"Well, at least you're quiet now."
>Take a few moments to close our eyes, and listen for sounds of Rin and the Stranger.

>The blackness offers you no response as you shut your eyes. Not that this is an entirely necessary thing to do, but it does help focus your hearing, at least on a psychosomatic level. You strain your ears to hear some sounds of your friend, or your enemy. No sound of any sort returns to your ears. Not even the sound of your own heartbeat can be heard at the moment, nor your breathing. Only silence. Only empty, endless, lonely darkness.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #448 on: August 05, 2011, 07:23:14 AM »
>Check pulse.

Re: Magical Lotus - Episode 1
« Reply #449 on: August 05, 2011, 07:35:43 AM »
>Check pulse.

>You place your right hand to your wrist to check your pulse. Given that this hand is currently numb, you try switching hands. Although the violet ring is cool to the touch, it's a comfortable kind of cold, rather than a numbing chill. Gauging your pulse, your heartrate is elevated (which is quite understandable) but not dangerously so. Your right arm, however, is quite cool to the touch. You are still very much alive.

>Byakuren Hijiri Corruption Score: 28.