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Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« on: February 25, 2010, 07:00:45 PM »
[nsfw]http://tengukami.blogspot.com/2010/02/permission.html[/nsfw]

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2010, 07:45:20 PM »
This is the first erotica Touhou fic that I've read and unequivocally enjoyed, much less respected for staying true to the characters. Said it before as a proofer, saying it now as a reader: Well done.

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2010, 08:15:00 PM »
Put my rage in a backseat and gave this a read...

T'was a good read, and surely worth my time of looking into. I still deeply dislike yuri, but I enjoyed what you did with this. If I ever go about writing some Touhou erotica of my own, I'll be sure to keep yours in mind.
« Last Edit: February 25, 2010, 08:19:56 PM by Neco-Arc Erebus »
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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2010, 08:18:42 PM »
Nice Work.
Comment Me OK. :D

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #4 on: February 25, 2010, 08:20:50 PM »
I already said it, but this was the first erotic fiction I've read, enjoyed and considered to be art. Also what Ruro said.

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #5 on: February 25, 2010, 10:50:54 PM »
Possible hyperbole ahead. Oh well.


Surprised I really shouldn't be by this point. And yet here I am, pleasantly so.

I can't think of anything to say that hasn't been said. Really, I can't describe how I felt reading without sounding extremely cheesy.

You.... what you've done is beyond words. Beauty and sophistication unmatched by any erotic story I've read previously, to the point I feel bad calling it that.

Bravo. Just....bravo.
« Last Edit: February 25, 2010, 10:53:07 PM by Marislayer »

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #6 on: February 26, 2010, 05:26:22 AM »
It was splendid~

even if I did completely skim over the actual sex scene

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2010, 10:39:55 AM »
To describe this story, hmm...

"Pretty" does a good enough job, I suppose... nice and light, very well-done. Twangs at the heartstrings, not at the erective tissues.

Great work.
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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #8 on: February 26, 2010, 07:25:46 PM »
Real nice work. Good job. :D

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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #9 on: February 26, 2010, 11:38:56 PM »
That was amazing, I really enjoyed it especially the swimming scene.
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Re: Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #10 on: June 30, 2011, 02:19:05 PM »
A bit of Post Necromancy, but I feel I have to give this one a personal review. When I read this Yuri, it reminded me of a 4koma Futa involving Reimu and Cirno. I won't go into much detail, but it was a sad Lolicon.

This, however, was different. I don't know why, but the way you managed to word it made it feel like Kaguya was more like a Mother to Cirno, and that what she was doing was educating CIrno about something she'd have to decide for herself later...

*slow clap* Absolutely beautiful. I'd give it...5/5.

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Permission (Touhou Erotica - NSFW)
« Reply #11 on: June 30, 2011, 03:18:20 PM »
Thank you. This was my first attempt at Touhou erotica, and I'm pretty happy with the result, too. Even if the catalyst was trying - and failing - to explain the difference between "porn" and "erotica" to my pals in CPMC. Thought it best, in the end, to demonstrate it. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it.

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