Author Topic: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3  (Read 58599 times)

Neovereign

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #660 on: December 06, 2016, 04:23:36 AM »
>"Who?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #661 on: December 06, 2016, 04:27:37 AM »
>"Who?"

> "Daddy." Kokoro repeats.
> Mokou laughs. "I think she means Miko."
> "Uh-huh." Kokoro nods. "Daddy Mimiko."
> Mokou burst out laughing.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #662 on: December 06, 2016, 04:30:42 AM »
>"Miko? I don't think I've heard of h-them..."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #663 on: December 06, 2016, 04:48:49 AM »
>"Miko? I don't think I've heard of h-them..."

> After some seconds, Mokou finally stops.
> "Aaah... Gods, you've made my day, Kokoro..." Mokou clears her throat, still with a smile and laughing. "It's a hermit and a taoist. She, like me and Kaguya, is immortal. The taoism it's a way to attain immortality, as far as I know."
> "Wait, wait, WAIT... You said "she"..." Sakura says.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #664 on: December 06, 2016, 04:52:17 AM »
>"Your dad's female? Wouldn't it be your mom then Kokoro?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #665 on: December 06, 2016, 04:58:10 AM »
>"Your dad's female? Wouldn't it be your mom then Kokoro?"

> "She is daddy..." Kokoro thinks. "... Well, sorta... She isn't really my daddy... but I can notice she tries to teach me things about the world and stuff... so I think she is like my daddy."
> There's silence in the room...
> The silence breaks when Mokou laughs again.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #666 on: December 06, 2016, 05:02:48 AM »
>"Well, I won't make fun of your preferences Kokoro."
>Smile.
>"Do you think she might know about the others popping up? Should we... try and test to see if more will appear?"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #667 on: December 06, 2016, 05:05:18 AM »
>"Well, I won't make fun of your preferences Kokoro."
>Smile.
>"Do you think she might know about the others popping up? Should we... try and test to see if more will appear?"

> Mokou suddenly stops and narrow her eyes when you say this.
> "Test? How?" Kokoro asks.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #668 on: December 06, 2016, 05:07:58 AM »
>"Try a situation and see if it causes another box to appear. I'll tell the others to keep a look out and keep feeling for that feeling from the other times."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #669 on: December 06, 2016, 05:13:26 AM »
>"Try a situation and see if it causes another box to appear. I'll tell the others to keep a look out and keep feeling for that feeling from the other times."

> "Oh. You mean a situation like when we were about to kiss?" She asks.
> "WHAT?!" Mokou suddenly bursts.
> Keine covers her mouth with her right hand.
> Clownpiece and Sakura look confused at the sudden shout of Mokou.
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #670 on: December 06, 2016, 05:18:46 AM »
>"M-Maybe but I don't want to force the situation. And, it's still your choice too. It could be something much less than that if you wanted."
>Kiku-Mind: "Or more... Maybe those books you're gonna get her can help too, ehehe."

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #671 on: December 06, 2016, 05:22:13 AM »
>"M-Maybe but I don't want to force the situation. And, it's still your choice too. It could be something much less than that if you wanted."
>Kiku-Mind: "Or more... Maybe those books you're gonna get her can help too, ehehe."

> Kokoro only nods.
> "... Hey, Daiko isn't it? Can I talk with you in private?" Mokou asks. She has a serious tone.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #672 on: December 06, 2016, 05:25:13 AM »
>"What for?"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #673 on: December 06, 2016, 05:27:04 AM »
>"What for?"

> "I want you to clarify some things to me. Can you, please?" She asks.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #674 on: December 06, 2016, 05:28:39 AM »
>"O-Okay...?"
>Start following her.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #675 on: December 06, 2016, 05:32:13 AM »
>"O-Okay...?"
>Start following her.

> Mokou stands up and puts her hands in the pockets of her pants. She heads outside and you follow her.
> The two of you don't stop until you are somewhat remote of Mokou's house.
> She stops walking. Mokou is still giving you her back.
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #676 on: December 06, 2016, 05:33:38 AM »
>Do the future sensing thing for Mokou. Don't go too descriptive though. Don't want her finding out if we can...

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #677 on: December 06, 2016, 05:43:42 AM »
>Do the future sensing thing for Mokou. Don't go too descriptive though. Don't want her finding out if we can...

> You think about Mokou to foresee something, with not much effort to not let her notice you.
> ...
> Doesn't seem to work. She doesn't "block" you, but you can't do it.
> "First of all." Mokou starts. She turns to see you, and it has a really serious face... "... What do you want of Kokoro?"

//Ah, it seems that I always go to sleep in crucial moments... Do you like cliffhangers (or tries of it), my little pervert fellows? Night~ :P
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #678 on: December 06, 2016, 05:58:05 AM »
//The bad about me and cliffhangers here is that I'm usually not awake fast enough to get back with the others...
>"I want to be with her and for her to be able to enjoy things. Why are you acting so serious?"

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #679 on: December 06, 2016, 08:35:43 AM »
>"She was the only one that i could trust and talk with at my worst of times, and from what i have seen she really cares about me..."

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #680 on: December 06, 2016, 12:26:38 PM »
>"She was the only one that i could trust and talk with at my worst of times, and from what i have seen she really cares about me..."
>Change this section to "we really care about each other..."
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Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #681 on: December 06, 2016, 03:02:44 PM »
>"She was the only one that i could trust and talk with at my worst of times, and from what i have seen she really cares about me..."

>Change this section to "we really care about each other..."

//The bad about me and cliffhangers here is that I'm usually not awake fast enough to get back with the others...
>"I want to be with her and for her to be able to enjoy things. Why are you acting so serious?"

> "I see... In other words, are you trying to start a romantic relationship with her?"
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #682 on: December 06, 2016, 03:04:26 PM »
>Nod.

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #683 on: December 06, 2016, 03:07:04 PM »
>Nod.
>"That's how we feel, ever since i met her it felt a bit like now."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #684 on: December 06, 2016, 03:07:50 PM »
>Nod.

>Nod.
>"That's how we feel, ever since i met her it felt a bit like now."

> "..." Mokou sighs. "Tell me every thing you know about her by now."
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #685 on: December 06, 2016, 03:16:03 PM »
>"She is a very old youkai that seems to express her emotions through her masks, she also is a dancer, has a pretty big curiousity too and is quite misunderstood."

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #686 on: December 06, 2016, 03:23:18 PM »
>"She is a very old youkai that seems to express her emotions through her masks, she also is a dancer, has a pretty big curiousity too and is quite misunderstood."

> "Alright, that's nice..." Mokou scratches her head. "Look Daiko... It's not my duty to interfere in your life or Kokoro's... but... I need to say some things about this..."
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #687 on: December 06, 2016, 03:26:04 PM »
>"Huh ? What is it ?"

Tashi

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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #688 on: December 06, 2016, 03:37:39 PM »
>"Huh ? What is it ?"

> "Since when do you know Kokoro?"
> _
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Re: Hikikomori Quest - Remaking my Life: Part 3
« Reply #689 on: December 06, 2016, 03:45:25 PM »
>"Yesterday, i met her on the village, she seemed to be following me and watching me."