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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #120 on: November 23, 2010, 04:36:24 AM »
Upper thigh area.

But yeah, that's certainly nothing to complain about.

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #121 on: November 23, 2010, 10:59:26 AM »
Here's something I just did really quick. The background is kinda lolwtf, but eh. That's not the important part. :V


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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #122 on: November 24, 2010, 04:36:06 AM »
Wow, I love the colors you used and and how they blend so well. What kind of method do you use for inking?

Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #123 on: November 24, 2010, 04:39:20 AM »
Wow, I love the colors you used and and how they blend so well. What kind of method do you use for inking?

What, color? That's insignificant in comparison to the the expert use of Ass.
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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #124 on: November 24, 2010, 05:04:07 AM »
sup grolla
.............fuck

Wow, I love the colors you used and and how they blend so well. What kind of method do you use for inking?
This particular drawing was done from scratch in SAI using a mouse.

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #125 on: November 24, 2010, 06:18:13 AM »
Excellent work! I'm liking your Saeko lots <3

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #126 on: November 26, 2010, 07:27:36 PM »
Looks sexy! The figure looks great, the blush is cute, and the breasts look great as always! But,

Criticism on that Saeko:
That line going from under her breasts all the way down looks kinda weird (is it a belly button?). I don't think belly buttons are supposed to be that long. Perhaps shortening it down a bit and some better placement would make it look better.

I hope this helps :) You're making great progress, keep it up!

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« Last Edit: November 26, 2010, 09:32:11 PM by TidalEspeon »

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #127 on: December 01, 2010, 09:02:20 PM »
[nsfw]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6397/raisin0.jpg[/nsfw]

Pose shamelessly copied from this. I was like, "I like this, but the face looks kind of weird. Also, not naked enough."

Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #128 on: December 02, 2010, 12:43:05 AM »
[nsfw]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6397/raisin0.jpg[/nsfw]

Pose shamelessly copied from this. I was like, "I like this, but the face looks kind of weird. Also, not naked enough."

Comical, but in a good way. Also: Lumpy foot, Intentional?
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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #129 on: December 02, 2010, 03:02:13 AM »
[nsfw]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6397/raisin0.jpg[/nsfw]

Pose shamelessly copied from this. I was like, "I like this, but the face looks kind of weird. Also, not naked enough."
On the original:
Face looks wierd, I agree.

Ass is a spear

Yours:
Shading around her nipple should be smoother. It looks like a sticker =/
Also, since you do line weighting, you can try softening the lines in that area. It really stands out, and it doesn't look all that appealing...

The shading on the rest of her body doesn't match the one in her hair. It looks unfinished.

Other than that, Reisen is fine. She has a huge smile on her face <3

And that's one hell of a curve you gave her torso~
She must work out!

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #130 on: December 02, 2010, 03:12:09 AM »
Comical, but in a good way. Also: Lumpy foot, Intentional?

What exactly about it is comical?

And no, more like I have trouble drawing feet and got lazy. I thought it looked somewhat passable. :<

@GreenVirus: Thanks, I'll start working on fixing those things you pointed out. I'll post the new version when it's finished.

Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #131 on: December 02, 2010, 04:07:42 AM »
What exactly about it is comical?

Exaggerated proportions, cream background, odd expression, and it makes me giddy.
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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #132 on: December 02, 2010, 04:58:36 AM »
And not the right kind of "giddy" either? ;)

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #133 on: December 04, 2010, 07:25:58 AM »
Looks really nice! I love the smile on her face, the blush was perfectly done and placed :) Besides the flaws that have been pointed out already, its very well-done! And yeah, some smoother shading on the nipples would improve it a nice bit. Maybe something like this can help you with that
[nsfw]http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/641661/blue_eyes-blush-braid-breasts-huge_breasts-izayoi_[/nsfw]

EDIT: Sorry about the hotlink! didn't think it would be an issue. Its fixed now.
« Last Edit: December 04, 2010, 10:43:52 AM by TidalEspeon »

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #134 on: December 04, 2010, 08:02:27 AM »
[nsfw]http://danbooru.donmai.us/data/196ddf031c1d97dfabca6192d5fbe032.png[/nsfw]
You hotlinked to an image. Danbooru isn't letting me see it. Maybe you can edit your post so that it directs to the page instead.

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #135 on: December 04, 2010, 10:59:45 AM »
Looks really nice! I love the smile on her face, the blush was perfectly done and placed :) Besides the flaws that have been pointed out already, its very well-done! And yeah, some smoother shading on the nipples would improve it a nice bit. Maybe something like this can help you with that
[nsfw]http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/641661/blue_eyes-blush-braid-breasts-huge_breasts-izayoi_[/nsfw]

EDIT: Sorry about the hotlink! didn't think it would be an issue. Its fixed now.
How is the rating on that image "Questionable"?

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Re: [Art] [NSFW] scribblins
« Reply #136 on: December 12, 2010, 06:43:34 AM »
How is the rating on that image "Questionable"?

Well, y'know.. the way the image is framed, she could be about to take a breast exam. And those are ok even for Youtube.


Fuck man, I keep forgetting to check in AAA. I'm a terrible fan. ;_; But yeah, your curves, eyes, facial features (i.e. freckles and nose) and breasticles are probably some of my favorite parts of your art style.
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