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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #60 on: January 04, 2011, 07:48:05 AM »
Aoshishi! That Stocking is fabulous :* I really like the shading, especially on the clothes and hair. Two pieces of criticism I would have are that the skin tones are a bit off (not quite Zombie Reimu but somewhere in between), and that the line separating the blue from the pink on the left side looks oddly smudged.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #61 on: January 04, 2011, 11:32:07 PM »
Two pieces of criticism I would have are that the skin tones are a bit off (not quite Zombie Reimu but somewhere in between), and that the line separating the blue from the pink on the left side looks oddly smudged.

Yeaahhh... strangely I've been doing that with the skin a lot lately.  :/
I use the smudge tool in Photoshop to create the highlights/shading in the hair, so that might explain the smudges. Thanks for pointing that out though.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #62 on: January 08, 2011, 05:27:55 AM »
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You got the artist tag!
Well deserved Aoshi, very well deserved.

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #63 on: January 08, 2011, 06:02:39 AM »
Don't know who gave it to me, but thank you~

Also, here's a rushed Keine.
And a random Reimu.
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« Reply #64 on: January 08, 2011, 02:31:05 PM »
That Keine looks great. The hair color and gradient edges along make the hair stand out well.

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« Reply #65 on: January 08, 2011, 04:25:57 PM »
Whoa, I let this go for 2 pages.
Your rushed Keine is actually one of the best if not the best I've seen from you, she looks great~

Also congrats on the tag
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #66 on: January 15, 2011, 08:47:38 AM »
Can you tell that I'm starting to run out of ideas?  :ohdear:

Yeah... I should going to bed now. (3:50 am)
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« Reply #67 on: January 15, 2011, 11:02:39 AM »
Can you tell that I'm starting to run out of ideas?  :ohdear:

Yeah... I should going to bed now. (3:50 am)

Run out of ideas? I think this Koishi is good.

We need more Koishi.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #68 on: January 15, 2011, 05:21:12 PM »
I'd like to argue that the market is over-saturated with Koishi right now. :P

Your pictures are as nice as ever, Aoshi. Keep it up~

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #69 on: January 15, 2011, 08:08:22 PM »
Can you tell that I'm starting to run out of ideas?  :ohdear:

Yeah... I should going to bed now. (3:50 am)

Not trying to be sarcastic, but yeah I can see that. Hint: The eeeeeyees~/shot

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #70 on: January 15, 2011, 09:09:58 PM »
Can you tell that I'm starting to run out of ideas?  :ohdear:

Yeah... I should going to bed now. (3:50 am)

A great Koishi to make my day...


Aoshi. I'm sure you won't run out of ideas. I believe that all artists have it in them to have ideas.
Another idea will come to you eventually. It could even be a portrait, and it would still be an idea.

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #71 on: January 15, 2011, 10:14:07 PM »
Hint: The eeeeeyees~/shot

Hmm, what about them?
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« Reply #72 on: January 15, 2011, 11:31:34 PM »
Hmm, what about them?
Well, I think that one of the eyes are at a weird angle, or it's just that the left eye needs to be a little taller and bigger than the right. Sorry if I can't explain it really well. :X

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #73 on: January 17, 2011, 02:24:27 AM »
My art teacher gave me back my art final a few days ago.
We had to make a comic in an hour. I had a large head start though, since he told me about it the day before.

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I apologize for the shitty shoddy quality. I totally rushed this comic like nobody's business.  :smug:
And I have no clue as to why the scanner scanned the fourth page like that. Stupid scanner.
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« Reply #74 on: January 17, 2011, 03:22:45 AM »
Ah yes, Stage 2 of Ghost Team's scenario in IN.
Great plot choice, I think.

And for that being drawn in an hour, it looks EXCELLENT.
Fantastic job for a final.
I had a laugh or two in reading that as well.

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« Reply #75 on: January 17, 2011, 12:27:16 PM »
I'm actually glad you didn't go into detail with Yuyuko eating Mystia.  :V
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #76 on: January 19, 2011, 08:41:02 PM »
Mystiaaaaa ;_;

Very well drawn! Maybe you'll do more comics in the future?

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #77 on: January 20, 2011, 01:01:34 AM »
I am such a newbie at comics and paneling. This was actually the first serious attempt at it.  :ohdear:

But I'll definitely consider it.
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« Reply #78 on: January 20, 2011, 03:13:10 AM »
I demand something Eientei-ish.  :derp:
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #79 on: January 20, 2011, 03:39:09 AM »
Hmm, that means that I'll need to think of a fanfiction story to go as a plot, but I'm not great at writing...
Bluhhbuhhhhh....

I'll need to think of something.  :3
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« Reply #80 on: January 20, 2011, 03:41:12 AM »
How about a 4-koma?
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« Reply #81 on: January 20, 2011, 03:42:54 AM »
Seems reasonable. I'll get to work on that as soon as I shovel all my school work away~
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« Reply #82 on: January 20, 2011, 03:44:46 AM »
Oh, yay. I love 4-komas.

I shall look forward to it.  :3
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #83 on: January 20, 2011, 03:48:28 AM »
You could say that Aoshi will....
do her best.  :smug:

YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA- No wait, that was lame. Nevermind.
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« Reply #84 on: January 20, 2011, 03:49:39 AM »
You could say that Aoshi will....
do her best.  :smug:

YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA- No wait, that was lame. Nevermind.

But Aoshi sleeps all day.  :V
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #85 on: January 23, 2011, 03:51:54 AM »
Nice comic. Had I been asked to produce something like that in an hour... yea... >.>; My handwriting would probably look like aztec ruins.

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #86 on: January 29, 2011, 01:21:19 AM »
Aradia: Be so moe-dorable that you resemble nothing of your canon personality.

Aoshi: SCREW THE ANATOMY,ARRANGEMENT AND AWKWARDNESS, I HAVE MONEY.
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« Reply #87 on: January 29, 2011, 01:29:49 AM »

Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #88 on: January 29, 2011, 01:53:01 AM »
Aoshi, have you noticed that Yukarin's eyes on your Avatar and on your sig are different?

Just a random thought


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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #89 on: January 29, 2011, 01:59:43 AM »
If you mean the eye color, then yeah. I sort of noticed it a day after I had it. Although I wonder why her eyes are greenish-blue in that picture.
Hmm, interesting. . .
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