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~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: Gappy on February 16, 2010, 11:51:09 PM

Title: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Gappy on February 16, 2010, 11:51:09 PM
The First Ever Monthly Hourai Artful Sacrifice Challenge!

This month's theme - Let's start with something simp- PATCHCON! YES! AWESOME! Basically, Touhou 'Defend The Library'. For more info on what Patchon is, look here. (http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/PatchCon)

(http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9418/256pxpatchconcover.jpg)


(http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7238/patchcon1.jpg)
Bloomers of Our Mikos
I've been posting this pic in too many places... ^^;;



This month's objective: You are to cause your viewers/listeners to bust their kidneys laughing. The more renal damage you cause, the better. To put it simply - the funniest wins.

Entry:You enter the competition simply by submitting a piece of work, whether art or music. The art can be a 4-koma, a short doujin, or a single piece, whatever suits you best. Anything in audio form can be submitted under 'music'. You can submit more than one piece and you can ask to have them judged together or separately.

Time Limit:1 month from today - 16th March.

Judging: In order to make this less a challenge of artistic skill and more a challenge of creativity, the artists/musicians will not be judged on quality of art, but, rather, how well they fulfill the theme/objective of the challenge. In the case of this month's, it's for the most comedic.

All the participants will judge each other's work anonymously and submit them via PM to me. Thus this will be a challenge of honesty, integrity and impartiality. Also, 5 anonymous judges will be chosen randomly from a pool of volunteers. I will do the randomizing and assigning of anonymous volunteer judges as well as calculating and publishing the overall final score.

Prize: The winner gets to make an art request of one of the other participants and his/her art thread (if he/she has one) will be stickied for a week. And, of course, unconditional boasting rights ^^. All participants receive a prize for participating - an eternal place in the competition gallery.  (Pssst, we maaaaaay get permission to give out surprise prizes...maaaaaaybe....)

For the sake of fairness, I myself won't participate. While I won't take part in the judging, there's always the chance I might have an unfair advantage as I'm the one deciding the challenge.

So have at it! Don't disappoint me!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Kuma on February 17, 2010, 06:50:21 AM
oh, nifty!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Caber Knight Etch-A-Sketch on February 17, 2010, 02:36:34 PM
*cracks knuckles and pulls out various pencils and paper*

LET'S DO IT
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Bias Bus on February 17, 2010, 05:29:08 PM
I guess I could try n do somethin for this. Sounds interesting either way, only problem is me getting the motivation to actually do something and/or not forget about drawing my entry.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Janitor Morgan on February 17, 2010, 07:38:09 PM
PatchCon? Very yes.

My art skills are quite lacking, but I can at least try!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on February 17, 2010, 08:56:37 PM
Hmm. I'd enter, but I fear that the fact that I use create.swf would kind of give away who I was ... |3
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Autumn on February 20, 2010, 04:58:10 AM
Seems fun... but I can't think of any jokes.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: triangles on February 28, 2010, 07:00:57 PM
I actually have an idea for this.

One question - is there a time limit for audio/music submissions?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Gappy on February 28, 2010, 07:18:21 PM
I actually have an idea for this.

One question - is there a time limit for audio/music submissions?

No. The duration of the piece can be as long as you like. ^^
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Autumn on March 07, 2010, 06:07:40 PM
Apparently, my doujin is so not going well, so is it okay if the entry's a flash instead?  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Gappy on March 07, 2010, 06:30:30 PM
Apparently, my doujin is so not going well, so is it okay if the entry's a flash instead?  :ohdear:

Sure ^^ go for it!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: mikeKOSA on March 15, 2010, 04:15:17 AM
oh crap... only one day left and i haven't started anything yet. is it the end of march 16th the deadline of submissions or i only have a few hours left?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Autumn on March 15, 2010, 05:44:33 AM
oh crap... only one day left and i haven't started anything yet. is it the end of march 16th the deadline of submissions or i only have a few hours left?

I think the deadline is at the end of March 16 so you only have a couple of hours left (I don't know the exact deadline because we all live in different time zones >.<)

If you still wish to enter, good luck and I hope you manage to make something real fast.  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Janitor Morgan on March 16, 2010, 06:15:31 AM
Ugh...there's a possibility that I won't have access to a scanner, so I can't submit my drawing. D=

Oh well. Might try a different medium next time I enter a contest. Good luck to the rest of the participants!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: mikeKOSA on March 16, 2010, 06:40:23 AM
done^^ i could have drawn more but i dont have enough time so that will do

Ugh...there's a possibility that I won't have access to a scanner, so I can't submit my drawing. D=

that's too bad...
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: youkai_R_US on March 16, 2010, 12:29:10 PM
Oh looks fun! Wait what do you mean its March 16th?....cr*p
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: triangles on March 16, 2010, 05:12:16 PM
Yeaaaah I didn't anticipate my past 10 days or so being full of homework and terrible.
Oh well, perhaps next time!  The concept I had can be easily adapted for a number of themes so I'm prepared  :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Gappy on March 30, 2010, 12:30:12 AM
AAAAAAAAAAND, the moment you've all been waiting for! Finally, the results of the great Hourai Challenge!

SCOREBOARD

Entry No. 1, Slaves: 9, 7, 9, 9, 6, 7 = 47

Entry No. 2, Autumn's Revenge: 8, 8, 8.5, 6, 7, 9 = 46.5

Entry No. 3, Skye: 9, 7, 7, 5, 3, 7 = 38

Entry No. 4, Mori: 8, 6, 7, 9, 6, 9 = 45

Comments:
Entry No. 1
Quote
"simple yet hilarious"

"Made me grin. Every panel is useful to telling the joke. Delivery is alright. Could use better wording. "

"Oh Slaves, once again your knack for humour has left me in stitches.  And that's pretty much what I expect would happen if Patchy put any effort into defending the library.  Maybe that's why it's always so easy for Marisa to steal her books?"

"It's random but funny. The humor (and also the artwork) are very nice."

"Typical Patchy behavior. That last panel is hilarious."

Entry No.2
Quote
"that was pretty funny, I liked the lunatic mode the best"

"Several jokes that made me laugh out loud, some fine comedic timing with random humor. Others fell flat. Ending was underwhelming."

"Nice work, though I think there was unused comedy potential there"

"It started out pretty good... And then the tank came in.  Rather fittingly, I was laughing like a lunatic the whole time."


Entry No. 3
Quote

"I know it's been done to death, but for some reason I can't help but giggle at this."

"It's a reference! Not very well executed.  Decent comparison. Needs more wit, less "look its like Starcraft see?"

"I barely know about Starcraft, so..."

"heh, i never really played starcraft but that phrase makes me laugh"

"To me the joke makes no sense, but the artwork looks very nice and has a humorous touch."


Entry No. 4
Quote
"Heavy-Arms Yukkureimu is a wonderful idea. And I feel with poor Flan-chan."

"Not only do I love the 4 koma style, but the general plotting and humour is superb."

"To me some parts didn't make sense that well, but others were very funny. The art seems to give the comic a comedic feeling."

"Fairly good jokes, but relies too much on being random. Reads Left to Right despite being made for English speakers by someone knows English decently with no indication; completely ruins flow of jokes. Unnecessary panels that don't really add to the humor."

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, the winner of MotK's first Hourai Artful Sacrifice Challenge iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis...

First Place

SLAVES! With his characteristic 4koma, his trademark expressions and gut-busting humour! Congratulations!

And for that you win the first prize - Unconditional boasting rights, art thread sticky for a MONTH, the title of SM, and the right to request one piece of art from one other participant.

Second Place
In second place, trailing behind first by a mere 0.5 points, Autumn's Revenge with his highly amusing flash! Well done! We hope to see more from you!

Third Place
In third place, Mori, with his impressive 4komas and excellent portrayal of the SDM crew! Masterly executed! We look forwards to seeing more work of such calibre!

Fourth Place
In fourth place, Skye, with his amusing and colourful parody. I never thought I'd ever see Patchy associated with those words. The use of subtle details to enhance the comedy value was well done. We look forwards to seeing more from you!

Thank you very much for participating and making this first contest a success! In recognition, you all win a permanent place in Furansu's Trophy Cabinet and you also win the title of Idiot Princess! Congratulations!

And a special thanks to our judges. One of them has already given permission to be named. Thank you, Purvis, and the two other people who have contributed their time and consideration in judging the works of these fine artists!

We hope you all will support the next Hourai Artful Sacrifice Challenge and help make it an even bigger success! Thank you!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Alfred F. Jones on March 30, 2010, 12:44:49 AM
Gappy: You asked to grant the winners of the contest IP, and the rest of the participants any title I could think of. However, SM is a title of higher respect (while IP isn't exactly a lackluster title, SM has more prestige and is more permanent). And so, I will give Slaves SM (he'll still have Resident Artist++, it just won't be visible) and the other participants shall get IP. (This is partially to bring you guys even with the writing contest: It will do no good if even participating in the art contest is equivalent to winning the writing contest. :P) Is this acceptable?

Congratulations and good luck to all the participants, for their performance here and in future contests! o/
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Mounting Jaggis on March 30, 2010, 12:52:16 AM
Yay 4th place, at least it's better than last place
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Gappy on March 30, 2010, 12:55:45 AM
Gappy: You asked to grant the winners of the contest IP, and the rest of the participants any title I could think of. However, SM is a title of higher respect (while IP isn't exactly a lackluster title, SM has more prestige and is more permanent). And so, I will give Slaves SM (he'll still have Resident Artist++, it just won't be visible) and the other participants shall get IP. (This is partially to bring you guys even with the writing contest: It will do no good if even participating in the art contest is equivalent to winning the writing contest. :P) Is this acceptable?

Congratulations and good luck to all the participants, for their performance here and in future contests! o/

Works for me ^^ Thanks Ruron~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Autumn on March 30, 2010, 03:49:54 AM
Wow... I actually did better than I expected...

Congrats to everyone who entered!  :toot:

*Looks at tag* Idiot princess?  :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on March 30, 2010, 06:00:37 AM
Congrats Slaves, and the other participants as well. That was some nice work you produced there, I look forward to the next challenge.
And it was fun to judge it~
  ;)
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Gappy on May 06, 2010, 10:12:26 AM
The next competition will start on around the 19/20th of May (once I finish my exams ;P) So, I need ideas for a theme. Anyone care to lend a hand and suggest ideas?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Solais on May 06, 2010, 01:38:59 PM
The most popular Touhou fan characters lead by Satsuki Rin, trying to steal the spotlight from the real characters, and failing.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: youkai_R_US on May 09, 2010, 08:37:30 PM
The most popular Touhou fan characters lead by Satsuki Rin, trying to steal the spotlight from the real characters, and failing.
That sounds awesome to me~
ihavenosayinthematterbutohwell
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Nobu on May 09, 2010, 08:58:03 PM
Outfit swaps! Touhous wearing other Touhou's clothes.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Autumn on May 13, 2010, 05:56:12 AM
Outfit swaps! Touhous wearing other Touhou's clothes.

 BV     YES     BV
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Formless God on May 13, 2010, 06:51:44 AM
I'm sooo gonna join this BV
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Infy♫ on May 15, 2010, 04:15:36 PM
i dont really know how funny music could beat funny images... so i'm not sure if i should even try.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!
Post by: Gappy on June 23, 2010, 07:02:32 AM
The Second Hourai's Monthly Artful Sacrifice Challenge!


This month's objective: It's frightfully hot in Gensokyo this time of the year! And that blasted ice fairy's nowhere in sight! Somebody must've gotten to her first! What utter selfishness! What happened to the spirit of selfless sharing in Gensokyo?! What's a gap youkai supposed to do? Languish and melt in this summer heat?!

Oh well, at the very least you outsiders can try and give me ideas on how to deal with this....this....this summerness! This month's theme is Summer In Gensokyo - Keeping Cool, the Gensokyo Way. Depict your idea in whatever way you desire, be it art or music. As the ice fairy's sort of M.I.A., I'd appreciate it if you don't overly rely on methods involving her. At best, there'll be an ice fairy hunt....at worst, we get a full scale war over who gets to keep her for the summer. I'm in a rather languid mood thanks to all this heat too, so I'd appreciate it if you can make it nice and amusing.

Entry:You enter the competition simply by submitting a piece of work, whether art or music. The art can be a 4-koma, a short doujin, or a single piece, whatever suits you best. Anything in audio form can be submitted under 'music'. You can submit more than one piece and you can ask to have them judged together or separately.

Time Limit:1 month from today, sometime in July - date to be decided.

Judging: In order to make this less a challenge of artistic skill and more a challenge of creativity, the artists/musicians will not be judged on quality of art, but, rather, how well they fulfill the theme/objective of the challenge. In the case of this month's, it's for depicting Summer and Keeping Cool in Gensokyo

All the participants will judge each other's work anonymously and submit them via PM to me. Thus this will be a challenge of honesty, integrity and impartiality. Also, 5 anonymous judges will be chosen randomly from a pool of volunteers. I will do the randomizing and assigning of anonymous volunteer judges as well as calculating and publishing the overall final score.

Prize: The winner gets to make an art request of one of the other participants and his/her art thread (if he/she has one) will be stickied for a week. And, of course, unconditional boasting rights ^^. All participants receive a prize for participating - an eternal place in the competition gallery. The winner will also receive the 'SPECHUL MEMBAH' tag. Isn't that nice?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Drake on June 23, 2010, 07:11:17 AM
Well I certainly have idears.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on June 23, 2010, 11:45:24 AM
I know I will regret this, but I can't let that idea I have go to waste. Now then, where did I put paper and pencils~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Vanishing Sock Puppet on June 23, 2010, 02:25:04 PM
Just when my tablet pen died! ARGH! Hopefully I can get a replacement before the month is up. I'd just draw a picture and scan it in, but I have no scanner...:(
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on June 23, 2010, 02:48:06 PM
I'd just draw a picture and scan it in, but I have no scanner...:(
I don't have one either. I'm just gonna photograph my stuff once it's done :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Autumn on June 23, 2010, 06:45:55 PM
Yes! Finally a new challenge~

Sounds fun  :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Patorikku on June 29, 2010, 03:18:50 AM
You know, I might not be reading the competition info properly, or I'm not properly reading between the lines, but where exactly do I send my completed work in order to enter in the competition? Do I just PM them to みこと, or is there another person I need to PM?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on June 29, 2010, 05:11:25 AM
You send the entry directly to みこと /Mikoto/ Gappy/ That person running the challenge, and only to her.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on July 11, 2010, 08:04:11 PM
Hmmmm... Id like to compete at some point, but i dont think i have anything in my repertoire that sounds Summery  ::).. Maybe next months contest then.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on July 16, 2010, 09:59:53 AM
The deadline for entries will be the 23rd of July, exactly a month after the start of the competition. Remember, send your entry to me via PM. Also, remember, you can enter more than one piece of work. All works will be displayed in Furansu's trophy cabinet for as long as Alice's Atelier and MotK exists (or, at least, as long as I stay Atelier Acolyte XD).
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on July 18, 2010, 12:57:03 AM
My dad's computer is broken so I am without a scanner for a good while.
So there's no way I can make the deadline.  :ohdear:

Maybe next contest, I guess.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Ragathol on July 18, 2010, 03:21:41 PM
Aw, I already did my summer's pic, and DID include Cirno... Well, as you say, someone got to her first, and that someone was, of course, Marisa.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on July 26, 2010, 12:08:58 PM
Hi everyone! Sorry for not showing up for a while. RL is busy busy busy @_@. I won't have time to arrange the judging for a bit. I'm extending the deadline till the end of the month for those of you who still want to try and get something in!

Also, a big thank you to those of you who have submitted your work!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on August 04, 2010, 08:51:12 PM
Hi all,

Thank you very much to those of you who participated this time around! We really appreciate it! My apologies for the delay in judging. Summer break has paradoxically been busier for me than term time XP

Anyhow, you should all have received PMs regarding the judging. If you haven't then something must have gone wrong (my brain, probably) and you must PM me immediately and/or track me down on IRC. You can find me or find clues on how to reach me on #Touhou-meido on irc.dejatoons.net.

Take your time with the judging. We expect to be finished within little more than a week. But there is no real hurry, so yukkuri~

Also, for the next contest, should we reduce the time limit to two weeks? Or is the current 1 month time limit more comfortable?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on August 05, 2010, 05:08:12 AM
Quick update.

There were issues with entry 3 and 5. The links have now been fixed.

Entry 3 - http://www.mediafire.com/?ik23jgr4e8rx78o

Entry 5 - http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/452/page3jj.jpg


Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on August 11, 2010, 09:25:04 PM
Also, for the next contest, should we reduce the time limit to two weeks? Or is the current 1 month time limit more comfortable?

Yeah 2 weeks sounds fine. Then we could have contests more often, which may increase board traffic. Sounds like a good thing to me =P
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: triangles on August 12, 2010, 12:01:01 PM
Actually I was going to say the opposite - with school starting up for a majority of forum members in the next month it'd probably be better to keep the longer deadline (even if I've yet to enter I still enjoy everyone else's contributions!)
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on August 12, 2010, 04:56:54 PM
My apologies for the lateness in the posting of the results. I believe most of the artists have sent in their results. The other judges, however..... ^^;;

Anyway, my hope is to have all the results collated and published within the next few days.

Now the only issue that remains is our next competition....any ideas? I'm thinking something along the lines of 'back to school'
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Hello Purvis on August 12, 2010, 07:25:41 PM
The theme should be vagrancy.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Patorikku on August 12, 2010, 07:30:46 PM
As far as the next competition goes, it all depends on when it is, right? I was thinking "Halloween in Gensokyo" would be a cool one to try.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Infy♫ on August 12, 2010, 08:13:28 PM
thats what they did in rika's garage last year, and in my opinion, it's getting a bit boring.
how about doing something related to autumn?

-wait. a certain user would have an advantage in that
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on August 12, 2010, 09:06:19 PM
-wait. a certain user would have an advantage in that

Who =o?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Autumn on August 12, 2010, 09:26:22 PM
thats what they did in rika's garage last year, and in my opinion, it's getting a bit boring.
how about doing something related to autumn?

-wait. a certain user would have an advantage in that

Awesome.   BV
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on August 12, 2010, 11:45:40 PM
Awesome.   BV

Haha oh.

But actually i like that idea. I already know what i would do.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on August 21, 2010, 10:19:55 PM
Right, one judge dropped out and two judges have yet to reply to me so far. I'm assuming they've dropped out as well. I'm in need of 3 volunteers to be anonymous judges for the contest. If you're interested, please PM me ASAP! Thanks!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Autumn on August 22, 2010, 12:32:52 AM
Right, one judge dropped out and two judges have yet to reply to me so far. I'm assuming they've dropped out as well.
:colonveeplusalpha:
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Infy♫ on August 25, 2010, 06:16:51 PM
uwaa~ i want new contesht!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on September 26, 2010, 08:15:42 PM
FINALLY, THE RESULTS OF THE SECOND HOURAI ARTFUL SACRIFICE CONTEST!
*Insert applause/boos here*

My apologies for the late posting of the results - Judges were being lazy again Medical school has gotten off to a busy start this year, but my hopes are that I'll settle into the groove quickly and be able to find time for more art.

As you're all about to get lost in HUGE WALLS OF TEXT, let's get the credits out of the way first, 60s Hollywood style~
Thank you very much, first and foremost, to the artists for participating! Art, in my opinion, should not be judged by its quality, but by how well it achieves its purpose - to dazzle, to awe, to humble, to inspire and enlight! This time around, it's all about keeping y'all cool during the heat of summer....and I think everyone here achieved just that. Well done! Give yourselves a pat on the back!

Thank you to the judges who've given their time and deep(?) consideration to judge these beautiful pieces. I know I had to chase down some of you down dark alleyways and over deep ravines to get you to GET YOUR SUWAKO-DAMNE-....I mean...ehem....esteemed opinion of these pieces....but all in all, thank you very much for your support in this contest.

Thanks again to our returning judge, Purvis, who somehow managed to find his way out of his trashcan hoboland and to our contest grounds. Always indebted to you and your monocled moustached eminence, Doctor~

And without further ado.....DA JUJMENTO!

FIRST PLACE
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In first place....!
http://www.mediafire.com/?ik23jgr4e8rx78o
By Autumn!
10, 8, 8, 6, 9, 8, 10, 9 = 68

Comments

I think, out of all the artists and entries put in, this artist probably had the best plot to it, and kept to explaining what was going on at the time. The artist really took into consideration what sort of cunning ideas Yukari would come up with, and it really showed in their work. Referencing another person's work, specifically Stalin's ideas, really had me going. They had just about everything in their flash set up for this contest, and I must commend them for the great display!

***

Nice animation^^
I love the part when Gensokyo blows up? hooray for random music! :V
Awesome, but it would be nice if you could add some more humor in the video (other than the end)? but I guess you achieved the objective so good enough, heh heh~

***

Not much production value, but man that was funny. Must have put a lot of work into it.

***

Good idea, on topic, proper amounts of CCCP. But too many memes for the sake of memes and some annoying dead times.

***

Nuclear Winter is a pretty clever thought. A good example of "Yukari fooling around again". Tip for next time though: The resolution and filesize were far bigger than needed.

***

Very amusing. Yukari's plan doesn't make sense though, or does it?

***

Ah, is there anything that nukes can't do?  I could see plenty of Gensokyo natives hatching this sort of plot.

A nice video.  I can tell that you experimented a lot with different effects to get it to look the way you wanted.  The skit wouldn't be out of place on YouTube or something.

***

Gensokyo's Artificial Winter

I'm halfway into watching this and I already want to give this a 10. My god.

Again, the art quality isn't so great, but it's fairly well-used. There's a lot of detail and color, but relatively few 'real' images, the poses are very flat, and the expressions are frankly lacking. Eyebrows are important!

A lot of the jokes are cribbed from Walfas and other references, but are well-executed (the music choice in particular is pretty good). The timing for changing scenes and ending jokes are great, but Yukari's warps are a little drawn-out. The sound/music/external image choice is heavily memetic, but also used well.

I'm hoping it's not just the video format talking, but damn, for wit and humor I'm willing to give this a full 10 out of 10. I am way too easily amused by rapid-fire humor.

SECOND PLACE
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In second place, trailing behind first by just 1 single point...! This was a close one!
By Aizo!
9, 9, 9, 9, 8, 7, 8, 8 = 67

Comments:
Its a classic 4 panel kinda funny, and it definitely fits the theme. Only gripe is it looks a little bit messy and could be darker.

***

This entry really had the idea of "trying to keep cool" embedded within it, and every part of the comic really shows just how desperate and brutal the Gensokians can get under heavy heat. The ending bit of the comic was a brilliant explanation as to what happened to Cirno as well, and had amused me quite a bit. I was especially impressed by how well the artist kept the Gensokians in character, and kept the story on track. Excellent job!

***

I love these types of comics... reminds me of the comics by Happy Flame Time^^ The art and the story's awesome
I like how Reimu and Marisa are trying to find Cirno and end up running into shenanigans. Poor Daiyousei...  :ohdear:
Nice job, but the ending was kind of  :/ +  :V to me

***

Excellent humor, on topic, good times. Only problem is, every comic doesn't necessarily involve the theme as strongly as it should. And beachtime Sakuya is great.

***

Very nice display of how important Cirno is after all. I love how everyone is pretty much going crazy there, as well as the resons for her disappreance on the last page. Conan!Remi is a hilarious as well.

***

I wanted it to be funny and random while still fulfilling this month's objective. it turned out to be good i guess

***

Armpits?  Armpits.

Very nice facial expressions.  Everything looks good despite having a fairly simple style.  I'm hoping you don't restrict yourself to just drawing 4koma, and extend your talents to other media.

***

4koma 4 5set

I must admit, the basic art quality is unspectacular, with definite rough edges. Still, it's quite adequate for comics of this sort, where the 'writing' is honestly more important. Even then, there's definite signs of "I'm working past the extended stick figures phase" in the work put into detailed parts like Marisa's beaten face, the refereshment goddess' palm trees, and Daiyosei's... restraints. No backgrounds, granted, but very definite progress. Keep at it!

The expressions are simple and predictable, but accurate and generally used well - except maybe Marisa's inscrutiable grin in the last panel of the right-hand 4koma in image 1, which wasn't entirely clear to me. The amount of detail for parched Marisa makes up for it, though. The proportions are good but not perfect - for the most part they're realistic and consistent (and Remi's back view, even if she's taller than she should be, has subtle curves that make for a more realistic look) but limb lengths are sometimes off and the chibification that excuses that in some images is... either inconsistent or not especially distinctive. Remilia lounging on the chair is definitely off in some way, but that's a very difficult pose to pull off and not really something to hold against ya.

As for the writing... the gags are fairly predictable, for the most part, but executed well enough (particularly with the expressions). Remilia's global warming rant came out of nowhere and was worth a laugh between the irrelevancy and excellent expression. And the secondary visual gag of how beaten-up Marisa was in the last image made me crack up when I actually noticed it. So that's pretty good as well - not incredibly creative, but solid execution.
(There are also grammar mistakes, off course, but I'm willing to let that slide, especially if English isn't your first language.)

All in all, I'm pleased - it's interesting, decently made, sticks to the theme (even if there's not much success gotten), and is worth a good 8 out of 10 despite the shortcomings.

THIRD PLACE
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By A Tuna Sakana!
8, 7, 5, 6, 7, 9, 6, 7 = 55

Comments:
Haha adorable. The artstyle seems to be working well with the whole moeblob thing. Good job.

***

This artist didn't delay one bit on the idea of "keeping cool", and went right into the solution. What amused me the most is the ending, showing the result of NOT keeping cool, and certainly supports the idea that the Gensokians will get extremely desperate to keep cool for a reason. I admit, this one didn't explain the situation all that well, but they certainly addressed the point of keeping cool, and that's what counts.

***

Cute comic, good job^^
No one likes hot days? especially when there?s ten suns outside? Orin better get some more ice :3
I like the story/events/whatever's going on but it feels like something?s missing right before the end?

***

Took far too many panels. On theme, though. Not a bad idea.

***

Thinking of Utsuho as a miniature nuclear-power-plant, she's probably one of the people who need cooling down the most in summer.

***

haha, that was pretty cute. orin should have just put okuu inside the fridge to avoid the meltdown.

***

More Okuu!?  I sense a conspiracy...  Quite an amusing scenario, in any case.

Good use of chibi art style, it fits very well here.

***

The art here is... uh, remarkably simplistic, but it works pretty well with the style of the comic. There are some cute little details (the ⑨ on the fridge, twitching Orin tails) but I'm afraid there's not much nice I can say on the art itself. For the most part it's a consistent and effective chibi-ish style that's adequate for the format and carrying the joke, but there are a few mistakes and clumsy moments - mostly with Orin's arms while sitting down, and her crossed legs.

The expressions are also very simple, but I think they actually work very well as it is. They suit the style perfectly and get the message across without fail. There's not much nuance to it, but it's effective. Orin in the first panel of the second image is especially cute, and spiral-eyed Utsuho in the last one is quite good. I think my main suggestion would be a little more detail/nuance to the open-mouth shouting Utsuho did - the tone from that was slightly ambiguous, aside from the last panel with her.

As for the joke itself - I actually really liked it, since I didn't expect it. Quite clever, and well-executed. Cramming all of the Incident Solvers' comments into the last panel was a good move to avoid dragging out the joke, and including it added a little bit of extra punch worth having. I have no real complaints, though the second round of ice pops might not have been strictly necessary - I think it's good pacing, though.

It's mostly the writing/joke I like here, but I'm still thinking this is worth a 6 out of 10.

FOURTH PLACE
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By flamezero16!
7, 6, 4, 7, 7, 10, 6, 6 = 53

Comments:
Nothing more summery than sunflowers, but as for keeping cool? Audio quality could definitely be better but overall i think its good.

******

I was surprised to see a music entry in a contest such as this, considering that it may be a little difficult to give someone the impression of cooling down in summer with a musical piece. No less, there was certainly a good amount of talent and thought put into this entry, and I commend the artist for their hard work. I tried matching up the music to what seemed to be an acceptable setting, and the best match I had was the image of a calm, winter day with light snowfall. I suppose if you heard this in the middle of summer and had that idea, it might cool you down a bit, mind over matter and whatnot, and it did help me cool down a little. Kudos for your effort, indeed!

***

... I have no idea what to say about this. I expected music as part of someone's entry, not just music. But it's really cool~ you make me want to play the accoustic again  :V
Sounds like Reimu and Marisa are on a journey to find Cirno on a hot summer evening. And they run into some bumps along the way, but at the end it's like "to be continued".
Very nice, but maybe you could add some pictures to show what's going on...

***

It's nicely made, but this isn't making me think of keeping cool at all. This is more relaxed time theme. Which, I suppose, is tangentially connected, but not really there. Best I could tell myself is this is like calm nighttimes plains music.

***

Nice, calming and very well played. There's probably also a meaning in the songs that were chosen (as it sounds like a mix of different themes), but I can't figure it out if it exists.

***

Why does this music reminds me of a the rpgs that i played long ago? anyways, this is really good though it didn't feel like summerish to me.

***

Yuka-sama.  <3 <3 <3

Didn't expect an audio submission when I saw this, and didn't expect PC-98 music either, very pleasantly surprised.  It sounds like the sort of thing you might play to pass the time on a hot summer's day, too.

***

I'm not very experienced with critiqueing music, or even commenting on it beyond "hey that sounds good," but oh well!

It's very calm and relaxed. I forget what cultural set that sort of quiet guitar(?) comes from, and hilariously I'm not sure what tune it's based on (if it is!). It's generally well-written and performed, aside from the occasional not-quite-artsy/appropriate off-key strum and what sounds like mic interference in the later parts. Man, was this live? Major props if so - I haven't really kept up with the contest.

I think my main gripe is that there are decently long segments which vary little or repeat the same changes to the tune, making it less... interesting. That's somewhat appropriate, since it sounds like a 'strumming while relaxing on the porch to beat the heat' sort of tune, but it doesn't really get my attention or interest for the most part. There's also a... melancholy tone behind its slowness, a sadness I don't necessarily associate with summer or keeping cool.

It's pleasant, but it's not especially interesting or memorable. Still, worth a decent 6 out of 10 for matching the tone well.

FIFTH PLACE
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By Patorikku!
7, 7, 6.8, 7, 6, 7, 7, 5 = 52.8  (You! The Judge who went with '6.8'....I'm going to hunt you down and force feed you acryllic paint!)

Comments:
Art isnt particularly snazzy and the proportions are off, but its cute and funny in a way.

***

This artist didn't really look as if they put the most effort they could have into the work, but they certainly kept on track with what they were talking about. The setting seems appropriate enough, and a focus on keeping cool was certainly seen. The irony in Marisa's plan made me giggle a little bit, and the reaction really did help. As good as it was, it's not as good as it could have been, really, and I recommend that the artist tries to look at carrying their further work a little deeper,

***

Simple but it works~
Typical Marisa, always thinking like that because she?s a dumba- *shot*, but it does get the job done. :3
Good job on the drawing? more would be nice^^

***

Badum-tsh! Brief, which is good. On topic, which is good. Could be better illustrated with the theme.

***

Always taking the easy way, that's just like Marisa.

***

I didn't expect marisa to give up that easily. it also could have been better.

***

Utsuho again?  Hm...

Anyway, nice pencil work.  I'm no expert, but it looks like you went through a lot of effort for the shading and such, and it shows.

***

Marisa's Cooling Plan One-Shot

I think this one's a step up in base art quality compared to some of the others - there's rough edges in proportions and noticable erasure marks, but rather few corners are cut and there's a lot of detail to both the (main) background and characters. Marisa playing with her half-on shoe is a nice touch, along with the other little details. Chibi-Utsuho is adorable and worth a little laugh on her own.

The expressions... I'm not sure about. The mouth positions/details aren't perfectly descriptive (though the one in the last panel really tries) and I'm really not sure about the prelevance of Eyelashes in the first one - though that might just be a stylistic complaint. There's not much space to say much on this since it's so short... but I'll point out that the second panel is basically perfect for its purpose.

Nor is there much to say about the joke writing - it's not outstanding, but solid, especially with the perfect execution in panel 2 (again, chibi-Utsuho is an excellent touch). But there's not much depth to it, even if it's a good bit of realized irony.

Overall, I'm reasonably amused, and the visual detail is very good. Worth a 7 out of 10 to me.

And that's all, folks~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on September 26, 2010, 08:34:04 PM
Nice one Fally  :D Course this means im just gonna have to beat ya in the next contest to make it even~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on September 26, 2010, 08:52:23 PM
Oooh, finally results XD

Congratulations Autumn, and everyone else that participated~

Actually pretty surprised about how well my entry fared. It was a lot of fun to participate though. ^^
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Patorikku on September 26, 2010, 10:01:56 PM
Well, fair's fair, I guess. I was up against some nice entries, so it's only natural to find my place to take last. The critique I got will probably make my next entry to the next contest better, though, that 6.8 was not exactly the best part of my day...

Hoping you'll start up a new contest soon! If I may recommend a theme for next time, how about "Snow Sports in Gensokyo"?

But seriously, 6.8? Why not just round up? :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on September 26, 2010, 11:39:55 PM
But seriously, 6.8? Why not just round up? :V

Pulled away from 5th place by .2... Just as planned...

Haha really though, lets just say we tied for 4th eh? About the contest, isnt it a little early for snow sports =p? Gappy was sayin she wants to do these more often, So we could prolly squeeze another 1 or 2 in before snowfall~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Autumn on September 27, 2010, 02:07:18 AM
Oh wow, I actually won... thanks everyone.  :blush:

Yeah, exporting the video from Flash and making it into a viewable file completely screwed up the quality and made some parts look cut off. (Since Movie Maker can't use Quciktime vids)  :ohdear:

And also, it's kind of uh, challenging for me to put humor into the animation without using, uh, some specific types of jokes...

Well thanks again everyone~ (If the next contest's about fall, MWAHAHAHA)

Gappy was sayin she wants to do these more often, So we could prolly squeeze another 1 or 2 in before snowfall~
... you know we don't have snow in Texas.  :smug:
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Summer Challenge - KEEP COOL!
Post by: Gappy on September 27, 2010, 09:11:35 AM
Monthly Hourai Artful Sacrifice Challenge III!
The Return of Autumn!

This month's theme - New Beginnings in Academia in Autumnal Solstice Red

This month's objective: It's back-to-school time, to the backdrop of autumn! It's the season of harvests, bounty, good food, beautiful scenery....It's a season of new beginnings for some, but a season of dread for others. I don't approve! Everyone should charge into autumn with fiery passions burning, their hearts reflecting the bountiful abundant red of autumn! Show them how it's done, Gensokyo style! This month's objective is to psyche people up for school by using the fiery red power of autumn! Comedy is optional, but encouraged!

Entry:You enter the competition simply by submitting a piece of work, whether art or music. The art can be a 4-koma, a short doujin, or a single piece, whatever suits you best. Anything in audio form can be submitted under 'music'. You can submit more than one piece and you can ask to have them judged together or separately.

Time Limit:1 month from today - 27th of October

Judging: In order to make this less a challenge of artistic skill and more a challenge of creativity, the artists/musicians will not be judged on quality of art, but, rather, how well they fulfill the theme/objective of the challenge. In the case of this month's, it's for the piece that manages to utilize the full power of autumn to motivate people for school!

All the participants will judge each other's work anonymously and submit them via PM to me. Thus this will be a challenge of honesty, integrity and impartiality. Also, 5 anonymous judges will be chosen randomly from a pool of volunteers. I will do the randomizing and assigning of anonymous volunteer judges as well as calculating and publishing the overall final score. Please volunteer in advance! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

Prize: The winner gets to make an art request of one of the other participants and his/her art thread (if he/she has one) will be stickied for a week. And, of course, unconditional boasting rights ^^. All participants receive a prize for participating - an eternal place in the competition gallery.  (Pssst, we maaaaaay get permission to give out surprise prizes...maaaaaaybe....)



So have at it! Don't disappoint the Aki Sisters!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Autumn on September 28, 2010, 01:30:50 AM
Fall.
...
Ha... ha...
Hahaha...
HAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHA!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!  >:D

Er, yeah. Let the killing competition begin!~~~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on September 28, 2010, 01:51:09 AM
Your confidence now will only make your tears more delicious later Fally~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Patorikku on September 28, 2010, 02:55:18 AM
Your confidence now will only make your tears more delicious later Fally~
My sentiments exactly. ... What? ... Of course I was kidding! What made you think I wasn't? :V

Anyway, definitely entering in this one. Hopefully, this time, I'll end up doing better on it. I'll probably even add colour! Good luck to everyone!

I'm never doing that coloured font thing again.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Lloyd Dunamis on September 29, 2010, 07:15:35 AM
Congratulations to the winners! :3

Were there other entries besides the five entries shown in judging?



Then, A New Challenger, Lloyd Dunamis, Appears!!
Nice to be here with all other contestants! :3

I, and some others, might be at a disadvantage though, not having Fall in our country and all ;_;
?Welp, let it not be an obstacle to greatness. Go, Musical Comprehension of Mine!! >w<

When I burn with passion, I burn dried leaves!!



?is what my competitive side tells me to say |3
Anyway, no assurance that I'll be able to send an entry yet, but I might as well tell stuff here to let me, well, encourage myself on an autumnal school piece or something while inspiration is flowing.
OMG, I'm competing against the others!? >/////////<
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Autumn on September 29, 2010, 11:54:37 PM
Ah good to see that you joined Lloyd. Let the competition begin!~ (Again)
...
I will exterminate you Lloyd
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Mushyrulez on September 30, 2010, 01:07:52 AM
Oh hey! Seeing as I'm making a fall-themed banner/wallpaper for my blog anyways and have a somewhat-fall-related composition on the works, I might join this as well.


Then again I have virtually no composing experience and completely no artistic experience. And my creativity sucks. OH WELL
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 02, 2010, 11:04:15 PM
I have this sort of odd, simple idea but  I have a question about it.
I wanted to incorporate a poem that someone [famous] wrote, but I was wondering if it was okay as long as a I write down who wrote it on the entry?  :/

Also good luck to everyone else.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on October 20, 2010, 06:59:07 AM
Alright, time to make a post here as well.

As you may have seen, I'm as of recently the second Acolyte of AAA and have pretty much taken over as long as Gappy is kept busy by real life.

So to make sure this Contest runs smoothly, please send all entries for this challenge to both me and Gappy. Chances she will be around are slim, but I'd still like her to get the entries just in case.
Everyone who has already submitted an entry to Gappy, re-submit it to me as well please.

Have fun and good luck~


I have this sort of odd, simple idea but  I have a question about it.
I wanted to incorporate a poem that someone [famous] wrote, but I was wondering if it was okay as long as a I write down who wrote it on the entry?  :/
That's coming as a pretty late answer, but: I don't see a problem with that. Feel free to do it.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 26, 2010, 11:06:08 PM
Oh hey, we can still submit on the 27th, right?
The weather is being really schizophrenic to do anything today.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on October 27, 2010, 06:42:09 AM
Oh hey, we can still submit on the 27th, right?
The weather is being really schizophrenic to do anything today.
Sure sure~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on October 29, 2010, 07:11:18 PM
PMs have been sent out, judging is in progress. Please watch warmly~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on November 10, 2010, 07:55:49 PM
And it is time! Faster than ever before: It's Judgement Time

First of all, thanks to all the artists who have contributed. We had five entries this time, though two were by the same person. Well, submitting several entries seperately is allowed after all  ;)
Even more amazing though is that three of the five entries were music. It's nice to see both the visual artists and the musicians are working hard and producing a lot of very good works. Keep it up, you make this board the nice place it is~

Well then, let us see what the entries this time were and how they fared. I like tension, so we will start from the back.

Fifth Place
Artist: Flamezero
Entry: Listen here (http://www.4shared.com/audio/GiFaJ4gd/Cirnos_Perfect_Math_Class.html)
Score:30

Comments:

Huh, and IOSYS-like. Well, I suppose foreign children voices have a kind of back to school feel. Kinda. I suppose it all comes together pretty well, technically speaking, but it's not really all that interesting to listen to.  4/10

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... I... do not comprehend. I'm sorry, but is this a joke entry? I mean, I respect the Cirno's Perfect Math Class song, but just that overlaid with electric guitar in the background? Really?

... well, it DOES pick up around 1:40: That part does a good job of complementing the background "baaaka baaaka." Unfortunately, before that the electric guitar usually sounded more like noise than a complement to the tune.

Sorry if I'm being a jackass with this one, but I'm not sure I want to give this more than a 3 out of 10. I think it would have worked better with either a live video to show the skill behind it (if that was the case) or if you could find some way to better mix the volume levels to make the guitar stand out from the song. I think a lyric-less version of it, at the very least, would have worked better. Sorry, man. Not feelin' it.

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7/10
This fits the back to school theme well, but not so much the autumn.

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Cirno's Perfect Math Class! A classic, and one that tackles what all youth hates (or loves, but that's different), school. It didn't get the Autumn part much though, but it did give the "back to school, @*(#&*!"

Anyway, I'm not really a fan of distortion guitars over an existing composition, but I'd say this is well-made. The only thing I can point out is that there are times when they just don't mix well (this is mainly my opinion though) around 0:22-0:43 for example. Also, around 1:19~1:20 (when the vocals say "guruguru", the guitar just went a little strong, and it kinda turned off the portion for me. However, 1:39, is the whole point of this song, and onwards, it was great.

However, the greatest weakness, I think, was the fact that I can't feel any Autumn vibes on this song. It kinda felt like a summer extravaganza, to be honest. It's too lively, too powerful, way too powerful for the fragile autumn.

Score: 8

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5/10
Oh god, I did not see this coming.
Strangely (Not in a bad way, of course!) the entry does tie in with the "Back to School" theme, but "Autumn" theme in this entry seems to elude me. I can only assume that the guitar was done by the entrant, which is very well done~  Although, it sounds like the guitar was edited over the original song, which bothers me a little. When I listen to it, my mind would tune out the guitar and I would only be listening to CPMC. Maybe you could have it so that you could just have vocals + guitar.

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Cirno depicts cold, something I'd assign not only to winter, but also  to Autumn. But the guitar and the song chosen dont give off an authentic autumny feel.
3/10. Not that it sucks, but it's not fitting imo.



Fourth Place
Artist: Sercan
Entry: Listen here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s1BiBmheRQI)
Score: 44

Comments:

I suppose it sounds nice, but I'm not feeling any autumn in this. And that giant gap from 6:00-6:09? What is that even doing there? Don't just put two songs on the same track, make some effort to put them together. Despite that, and despite the fact this doesn't feel like fall, I'll give it a good score just because this is only music entry I found pleasant enough to listen to more than once. 7/10

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Half-improvised, unpracticed live piano? This should be interesting.

Occasional awkward pauses and clear slip-ups, but it sounds pretty good. I like it, overall. Unfortunately, those slip-ups DO hurt it, and the limited tune selection starts to drag on after a few minutes. I'm not sure I'm getting too much of an autumn/school feeling from it, either.

It's great for what you had to work with, I can tell, but my gut's saying to peg this around a 7 out of 10 for the occasional bit of clumsiness, despite the quality (and definite piano skill).

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7/10 Quite impressive you pulled it off without alot of practice. You stumble a bit now and again, but all in all, a beautiful arrange.

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A slow buildup at the start really reminds me of autumn leaves falling. You know, like taking a stroll in the park in the morning or evening, it really hikes people up.

Minoriko's theme is a theme I will always love, because it conveys the changes of autumn. The quick pace of melodies, the changes in the melodic line, it is a reflection of autumn itself.

1:37-ish sounded awkward. Approaching that mark, it sounded like the piece was being rushed, instead of pacing with its full grandeur. It is not that bad, but it slightly blotches the melodies around that time.

2:25 build up is really good and complemented by 2:49 onwards, it's great. It sounded like Minoriko's theme, but it is quite different, a stroke of originality indeed.

Also a fan of Centennial Festival, it's a great Extra Stage theme, and it really sounds like a festival. Very encouraging, hitting the theme of this contest dead-on. What I didn't like was the long silence between the two compositions, but I guess it's just me being impatient.

Not a fan of the long slow parts though, but it really conveys the pacing of autumn, slow but it is actually moving subtly under your nose. If you don't actually pay attention, you'll miss a lot about autumn.

There are very good improvisations in the piece, and shows a lot in originality. Even if it sounds awkward at times, improvisations are a big plus for me.

Score: 9

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8/10
Piano ranges! My favorite~ How did you know?  :3
(Plus I love Centennial Festival of Magical Girls.) Great job on both of the songs.
ZUN does have a way with making songs great for piano music, but you on the other hand, give the songs a bit of your personality. (Someone who isn't afraid to not read sheet music, EHH? *Shot*) It was wonderful that parts of the music were slow, but changed pace as it went along. It sort of adds energy to it. Upon reading your description, it's pretty amazing that some of the parts were improvised. Adds personality, like its own song. Or something like that.

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My my. Such delicious piano play and such a delicious piano player, d- *shot brutally*
I spent too little time on my entry, seeing what other people have made. this one-shot recording contains unneccesary slowdowns, mistakes, and other bad things. The reverby pianos used here, give me the feel of autumn. I would say, this piece depicts the morning of the first school day pretty properly, especially the centennial part.. But I'm not gonna be egoistic here.
6/10



Third Place
Artist: Aoshi
Entry: See it here (http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4455/75893923.png)
Score: 45

Comments:

Cute, clever, but kind of lazy. Got me to learn a but more about Cummings, though.  5/10

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I rarely 'get' poetry, so much of the meaning of this is probably lost on me.

Still, I can at least catch the falling leaves references, and Shizuha's pose and involvement are really fitting. I don't think I 'get' it in full, and it's a really simple peice, but it's good - odd as it may sound, I think Shizuha's hands look quite good, for the complexity of that hand gesture. Proportions and coloring are also beyond immediate complaint. And come to think of it, it's a very nice font choice, as well.

I don't understand it in full, and I'm not seeing too much to it, but I do like it. I think this is worth a 7 out of 10 as well.

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9/10 The drawing might not be the best, but it seems to be the only entry that incorporates both Autumn, and back to school. Great job.

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Ah, a famous E. Cummings poem. For those who don't know, it could be read as "(a leaf falls), loneliness."

The drawing style is great, though the eyes could do a little improvement. It lacked highlights, and it looked a little dead inside. The theme was motivating people for autumn, it kind of negates that.

Honestly though, the poem itself is a little depressing, and philosophical. It makes people think, instead of making them lively for autumn.

Score: 8

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7/10
Simple picture is simple~~ Although, simplicity does add a nice touch to it, it doesn't seem to need a background. (Possibly ruin the overall "feeling" or "mood" in the situation?) It was nice that the entrant included a poem from E. E. Cummings, although a few people might not have heard of them. Considering the poem, it seems to fit well with fall, as the poem expresses a leaf falling in loneliness, or "oneliness." Even the way the poem is formatted to depict a leaf falling downwards express fall. The words "And finally..." in the corner could mean "And finally....fall begins." showing a leaf falling towards the grounds.

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holy shit, a poem. i find it fitting more to shizuha, than to autumn itself. But she IS autumn. ff, deep. and if thats not enough, the way the text is depicted along with the picture would make my dutch teacher fap.
9/10



Second Place
Artist: Anunsew
Entry: Listen here (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8508770/Different%20Shades%20of%20Autumn.mp3)
Score: 46

Comments:

Hmmm. MoF mashup. Not bad flow, took me a minute to recognize Nitori's theme in that.There's some fun piano work, too.  But overall, it just has less charm than the originals, the sounds don't blend together as well as they ought to. It's a good effort, but needs work. Does give a definitely autumn feel, though, so that saves it some points. 6/10

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Hmm... sounds like a pretty straightforward MoF medley, really. It flows well for the most part, and there are some nicely unexpected changeups from the usual MoF tunes. The piano from ~0:21 to ~1:06 and around ~4:20 to the end is a very nice departure from the norm. Some of the music transitions are a little jarring, though: the one at ~2:18 to Nitori's theme stands out to me, and not all of the segues are elegent. Still, quite good.

Overall, I like it. And while I don't know how much of the 'autumn' theme of it comes from the feel of the music and how much of it comes from the Mountain of Faith references, it does fit the theme. I'd give it a 8 out of 10.

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6/10
Wonderful stuff. Really made me picture falling leaves, and tied in to the theme of Autumn quite well. Not exactly sure how it ties into back to school, however.

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It's...quite long.

The intro was good, and it sets the mood of fall in mind. 1:07 sounded awkward though, it sounded like the tracks were just glued together. The piano was also a little too loud around that part. The drums of 1:30 were kinda surprising, along with Minoriko's theme tagging along.

The violin around 1:40 to 2:05 reminded me of Harvest Festivals. And then 2:18, Nitori's theme. Maybe it's kind of unbalanced, but I like the surprises this song brings. It's hard to guess what will happen next.

It reflects the aspect of what Autumn brings, uncertainties and changes. Autumn is a time of change, but you have to face it anyway, whether it be school or growing up. Around the end of the theme (4:05), the song turns into full force, like an encouraging mother that urges you to go on, despite what these changes may bring. Around 4:44, the song slows down, as if to tell the listener that what's next is up to his decision.

Anyway, it's a beautiful theme, and the only things I can speak against it is the fact that every part of the song is already an existing composition. Not much originality, but creativity makes up for the lack of it.

Score: 9

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9/10
A very creative piece! The title fits the song very well. The way the music sounds give it a MoF feeling to it, which is very Autumn-y indeed (But doesn't express "Back to School. Hrm.). (Although the beginning strangely sounds like Septette for the Dead Princess. Maybe it's just me.) The way melody changes significantly from slow and "peaceful" to fast and upbeat is a nice touch and you executed it nicely.
It saddened me when it finally ended but playing it again was like a different song every time.

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first off it sounded a little sleepy, with that harpsichord, an instrument i'd see more as a springy thing. but it built up really greatly. the piano is so delicious~ its happy feel and tempo changes make me like this more than most other pieces i've heard from this certain artist. even though my own idea of going to school again isn't as cheerful, this piece gives off the feel gappy described. oh god, that part with crescendo vibrato piano is eargasming.
I say 8/10. it's probably the best touhou medley i've heard in AAA.



And finally, the first place, and a well-deserved one. So well deserved, in fact, that one judge threatened to take away two points from everyone else to ensure the victory.
Not that it would have been necessary, because the six-point difference to the second place speaks for itself.
Ladies and Gentleman, the winner is...

First place
Artist: Aoshi
Entry: Image 1 (http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5564/minorikoonleaf.png)
Image 2 (http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3733/akisisters.png)
Image 3 (http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9254/97131778.png)
Score: 52

Comments:

Creative and immediately interesting. This is a good entry. People need to do this more. Excellent placement, too. 9/10

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Oh, this one's clever. Well-drawn images of the Akis, put on fake leaves among a bunch of real ones? That's about as autumn as it gets, and in an unexpectedly effective way.

I really like it. My only real complaint is an unreasonable one - that the leaves the Akis are on look so fake and untextured compared to the real ones behind them, especially the hints of white paper visible on the edges. Would it have worked better with more stylized leaves without the veins, and/or fake ones for the other leaves as well? I don't know. But there's a few tweaks that could have made it a bit better, I think.

That said? They're not entirely reasonable ones. Despite the simplicitly, definitely worth a 9 out of 10.

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8/10 Haha these are adorable. And you can tell by the detail, that it took alot of effort to make.

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That is so cute!

It's a simple concept of portraying autumn, and what is best for that? Leaves!
The drawing and coloring style is great, although I kind of think that Minoriko's face was too round. But hey, I really like Shizuha's smile, and it gives me this warm, fuzzy feeling inside.

I feel so motivated that I feel like I could run a marathon right now!

Score: 9

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8/10
Creative. Seeing how the Aki sisters are the goddesses of fall, it seems fitting that they are on fall leaves themselves. (Especially Shizuha considering her ability.) (And maple leaves, no less.  :3) ("Back to School.....?"  :/) Although a little more care could go into Shizuha's leaf, which is noticeably smaller than that of Minoriko's. Maybe you should have used the same leaf as Minoriko for Shizuha. Also, it's pretty funny that those are the ONLY two red leaves in the vicinity of the ground. Doh ho ho~

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*listens to Different shades of Autumn*
Lovely! Very original indeed! I love how the background also has fallen leaves!
9/10



And that's it, Ladies and Gentleman, Artists and Musicians. Thank you once more for participating, and a big thanks as well to the judges and their detailed judgements. That really became a nice wall of text up there.
Aoshi, enjoy your Special Member tag, even if it doesn't do much.
The others, you shall get a nice blue Idiot Princess title for your participation.

A new contest will begin once Gappy decides on a theme, until then, keep up your good work and have fun, everyone~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on November 10, 2010, 10:47:46 PM
Goddamn last place >.> Woulda been better off enterin an acoustic bit again XD Well grats Aoshi, ya done good amigo.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on November 11, 2010, 12:17:03 AM
:teaspit:

:blush: Wow, wasn't really expecting that.

Thanks, and congrats/good job to everyone else too~!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Autumn on November 11, 2010, 01:15:09 AM
*Resurrects*

Congratulations to all the people who entered~ All of the entries were  :V
I should have entered hurr

Oh and Flame... wat  :/
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on November 11, 2010, 01:26:51 AM
I should have entered hurr

You were all excited about it too...
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Anunsew on November 11, 2010, 04:00:17 AM
I should have entered hurr
There's always next year's Fall. :P

And congratulations to Aoshi, I really liked your entry. :3


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Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Infy♫ on November 11, 2010, 04:20:33 PM
hadnt expected anything higher than 4th place, so im happy with this. congrats to the winner!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Lloyd Dunamis on November 24, 2010, 12:15:05 PM
Congratulations to everyone, especially Aoshi! :3
The 2nd set of pictures that won would've been all Fall-y if you had the green grass covered with more dried leaves. But nevertheless, it's nice. The Aki sisters each in a maple leaf kinda portrays that they co-exist with Autumn itself, too.
Ah, cute artstyle is a plus! >w<

Anunsew and Sercan! Your musical pieces are just :*
Kinda figured musical submissions would be more or less MoF-based. I'll be commenting on it further on your respective threads =w=

Then Flamy...
Goddamn last place >.> Woulda been better off enterin an acoustic bit again XD
Hai (yes). I was kind of anticipating an acoustic "New Beginnings in Academia in Autumnal Solstice Red" from you, but... :<

Welp, next time, I guess =w=


Erm...f-for those expecting for my submission.........l-let's just say I kinda burned them leaves too many before I get to compose one myself, aheheh ^_^;; *coughcough* Bweh. Autumn exterminated me along with him >.>;;... eh, just kidding
Actually, I was confused myself how to incorporate Back to School with Autumn theme. I guess my worry got the best of me, end up not submitting one >_<;;...

Kinda figured that your Minoriko's theme arrange that you submitted to Awesome Atelier Album was also. :*
The Centennial Festival is also a grand additional, and it's one theme I like that I don't hear everyday.
Musical.

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Then, for something completely different, I think...
Judge4, whoever you are, I love you~<3
... Eh, i-it's not just for anything; It's how his judging went. Be it art or music, his comments are detailed, or something like that =w=
(n-not that the other judges were anything bad)
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Autumn on November 25, 2010, 07:11:40 AM
(n-not that the other judges were anything bad)
He's criticizing all of you. Exterminate him.  :flamingv:

I already said congratulations to all... but congratulations to all heh.

I'm really hoping there's a contest for winter because... oh the irony if I enter  :3

Edit: I exterminated you Lloyd? I don't remember such thing.  BV
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Infy♫ on December 25, 2010, 02:55:45 PM
i am eagerly awaiting the next contest!
i wonder what it will be~ and when... :<
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: flamezero16 on December 27, 2010, 10:19:47 PM
i am eagerly awaiting the next contest!
i wonder what it will be~ and when... :<

Well, thats why we have a certain fish around yes? I'm sure it couldn't be too much longer =p
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on December 27, 2010, 10:22:06 PM
Well, thats why we have a certain fish around yes? I'm sure it couldn't be too much longer =p
I brought it up to Gappy a while ago, but we didn't get past "Oh yeah, need to do something again" >_<

There'll definitely be a new contest to start the new year. And there's also some other plans being talked about currently, we hope to get some fresh air and activity into AAA in some time.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Gappy on January 04, 2011, 06:25:51 PM
Monthly Hourai Artful Sacrifice Challenge IV!
New Year! New Inspirations! New Resolutions! NEW COMPETITION!

This month's theme - Renewed Will and Fiery Resolve in New Year Resolution's Struggle for Blazing Dawn!

This month's objective: It's another new year! Remember your new year's resolutions from last year? How long did it last before you gave up/forgot/put it off/postpone/trash/ragequit/end/get fed up with it/other modes of quiting? This year, it's going to be different! Because this year, we do it GENSOKYO style! That's right, we're going to party through our new years resolution, fueled by tea, sake, danmaku and ART. This year, the Atelier's going to show the world how to celebrate new years resolutions, the GENSOKYO WAY. So tickle your muse and make new years resolutions personal again! Burn your fiery will and resolve on paper or tunes! THIS.IS.YOUR.YEAR!

This month's objective is to portray Will and Resolve in fulfilling New Years Resolutions, Gensokyo style! Comedy is optional, but encouraged!

Entry:You enter the competition simply by submitting a piece of work, whether art or music. The art can be a 4-koma, a short doujin, or a single piece, whatever suits you best. Anything in audio form can be submitted under 'music'. You can submit more than one piece and you can ask to have them judged together or separately.

Time Limit:1 month from today - 5th of February

Judging: In order to make this less a challenge of artistic skill and more a challenge of creativity, the artists/musicians will not be judged on quality of art, but, rather, how well they fulfill the theme/objective of the challenge. In the case of this month's, it's for the piece that manages to best portray Will and Resolve in fulfilling one's New Year's Resolution, GENSOKYO STYLE.

All the participants will judge each other's work anonymously and submit them via PM to me. Thus this will be a challenge of honesty, integrity and impartiality. Also, 5 anonymous judges will be chosen randomly from a pool of volunteers. I will do the randomizing and assigning of anonymous volunteer judges as well as calculating and publishing the overall final score. Please volunteer in advance! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

Prize: The winner will receive the title of ShrineMaiden, gets to make an art request of one of the other participants and his/her art thread (if he/she has one) will be stickied for a week. And, of course, unconditional boasting rights ^^. All participants receive a prize for participating - an eternal place in the competition gallery.

So have at it! SHOW US YOUR BLAZING FIERY MANLY/WOMANLY NEW YEARS SPIRIT!
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on January 05, 2011, 12:08:36 AM
Err, wait. I'm a little stupid.

Is the topic "Show how you try to resolve resolution in a Touhou way," or "How the people of Gensokyo try to go about fulfilling their resolutions?"


The winner will receive the title of ShrineMaiden
 
Huh. . .?
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Autumn on January 05, 2011, 01:37:29 AM
Awesome. I'll try to squeeze in a short comic or something  :V
Screw animations, they take forever

Is the topic "Show how you try to resolve resolution in a Touhou way," or "How the people of Gensokyo try to go about fulfilling their resolutions?"
Um... I'm going with #2 since it seems more fitting. (Cirno learning to get a driver's permit? haha NO)

Oh and
The winner will receive the title of ShrineMaiden
Wat.  :/
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Gappy on January 05, 2011, 06:02:30 PM
Apparently 'Shrinemaiden' is what they call that title that says 'HUURRRRRRRRRRR'. I recall one of the staff telling me that it is apparently higher up than IP. Don't ask me.

Anyway, do whatever you feel fulfills that objective. It doesn't matter how you interpret it. In fact, seeing different interpretations is half the fun. :P

Good luck~
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on January 06, 2011, 07:26:09 AM
Apparently 'Shrinemaiden' is what they call that title that says 'HUURRRRRRRRRRR'.
That's Special Member. I've never heard of it being called Shrinemaiden once  :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: flamezero16 on January 06, 2011, 06:12:33 PM
That's Special Member. I've never heard of it being called Shrinemaiden once  :V

!!! It's a trap!

Honestly though, I cant think of anything I can do with this theme on the guitar =/ Least so far. Might sit this one out.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on February 13, 2011, 06:04:49 AM
Hey, I was wondering.

Did anyone participate in this at all?  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Infy♫ on February 13, 2011, 07:36:34 PM
AFAIK, no.
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's New Year Resolution - BLAZING FIERY RESOLVE!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on February 13, 2011, 08:56:42 PM
Did anyone participate in this at all?  :ohdear:
Nope.

There is something new coming up to hopefully stir things up again. Please watch warmly till tomorrow  :3
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Aoshi-shi on February 13, 2011, 09:04:47 PM
How long did it last before you gave up/forgot/put it off/postpone/trash/ragequit/end/get fed up with it/other modes of quiting?

Correct me if I'm wrong, but this is probably most ironic contest so far.  :V
Title: Re: [Competition] Hourai's Autumn Challenge - BACK TO SCHOOL!
Post by: Dead Princess Sakana on February 13, 2011, 09:09:15 PM
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this is probably most ironic contest so far.  :V
Ouch. You are right XD