Maidens of the Kaleidoscope
~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: Pirate on August 12, 2012, 05:04:24 AM
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Oho. I've been making enough artwork and been plenty happy with myself to actually POST some artwork in a new thread!
None of these pictures are actually pirated.
(In order of earliest to latest)
Murasa http://www.fileize.com/view/4f193790-d28/ (http://www.fileize.com/view/4f193790-d28/)
Cirno (I swear I did not get inspired by a certain pool in danbooru) http://www.fileize.com/view/de012b2f-184/ (http://www.fileize.com/view/de012b2f-184/)
Koishi and Orin http://www.fileize.com/view/a60b8364-387/ (http://www.fileize.com/view/a60b8364-387/)
Komachi and Eiki. Brush whoring is now my favourite technique http://www.fileize.com/view/9b07810d-3a9/ (http://www.fileize.com/view/9b07810d-3a9/)
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REPORTED FOR PIRACY
Well there's some potential here. Anatomy is mostly correct, coloring is basic but that usually improves by itself.
Facial anatomy is somewhat off, but the expressions still convey emotion well. Keep at it yo
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Well I am a noob artist but for me Komachi's legs looks pretty long.
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REPORTED FOR PIRACY
Well there's some potential here. Anatomy is mostly correct, coloring is basic but that usually improves by itself.
Facial anatomy is somewhat off, but the expressions still convey emotion well. Keep at it yo
Oho, facial anatomy? Mind giving me an example where I got it wrong?
And thanks, it's always nice to be appreciated.
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http://www.fileize.com/view/8356d4dd-a6e/
Tewi's pranks are amazing.
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long while of not posting, here.
http://www.fileize.com/files/7b80c84b/46b/Tewi.png (http://www.fileize.com/files/7b80c84b/46b/Tewi.png)
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http://www.fileize.com/files/9efab10d/b5a/img047.jpg
Shou's pagoda explodes.
Bomber grape is a bad influence on me.
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Shou looks a bit pigeon-toed there. I like her expression, however.
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http://www.fileize.com/files/fb0e048c/007/ParuParu1.png
Paru Paru.
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http://www.fileize.com/files/8febec17/825/Paruparu2.png (http://www.fileize.com/files/8febec17/825/Paruparu2.png)
ლ(╹◡╹ლ) おっぱい！
(Nsfw-ish?)
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http://www.fileize.com/files/68d35585/48e/tunasatomiminomiko.png
Quick drawing and colouring of Miko. Her hair is impossible.
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Tewi without rabbit foot?!?! For me one detail is that Miko's left pupil is dislocated. Using my
amazing photoshop skills I moved it a bit :P
Anyway, nice pics ;)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img19/6222/pupilcorrection.jpg)
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Ah, thank you, I didn't notice that...wayward pupil. Too busy trying to screw with the hair colouring. (And yet it still looks no different than what I usually do. FFF)
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In just a little over a month, you've already improved a great deal; the top half of that Miko is really well done.
What I will say is that sometimes bits of limb are chopped a little too much by a brush stroke, or the anatomy of one part will detract from the high quality of the rest of the picture; the Miko, for example, is really well-done and looks pretty spiffy, but her weirdly shaped body and strange left arm detract from the overall composition quite a bit.
Regardless, keep it up! :3
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http://www.fileize.com/files/b08948f0/de9/fusrodahcomic.png
Why hasn't this joke been made?
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Poor Kisume. Being used as a projectile weapon must not be fun.
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Poor Kisume. Being used as a projectile weapon must not be fun.
Poor Parsee that had her nose crushed by a poor Kisume
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http://www.fileize.com/files/afedef4e/49d/yukkurishiitene.png
Take it easy!
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http://www.fileize.com/files/afedef4e/49d/yukkurishiitene.png
Take it easy!
Their eyes looks pretty good and parsee's face in the first koma is cute :ohdear: and...
Lolol Parsee magician, look what she did with her sleeves in the last pic. :V :V
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Their eyes looks pretty good and parsee's face in the first koma is cute :ohdear: and...
Lolol Parsee magician, look what she did with her sleeves in the last pic. :V :V
*Unspeakable rage*
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http://www.fileize.com/files/0877c1fe/66d/konpakuyoumu.png
This is better than before, right? Please tell me it is.
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The hair near the base of her neck looks a bit transparent. Was that intentional on your part?
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The hair near the base of her neck looks a bit transparent. Was that intentional on your part?
Eh, not really. Guess I kinda forgot to rub out the lines. Oops.
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do you love drawing 3/4 view or something :v
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do you love drawing 3/4 view or something :v
I do it because it's easy. Hoho.
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I'm back! Here's an Aya!
http://www.fileize.com/files/3645a9d4/ff9/ayaya.png
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I'm back! Here's an Aya!
http://www.fileize.com/files/3645a9d4/ff9/ayaya.png
Nice ayayayay, the only problem for me is that her nose looks a bit strange, like a cat nose.
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you forgot to colour one of the sleeves :v (and to shade the other, lol)
&&her left leg needs to extend a little more
nice hands tho!
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you forgot to colour one of the sleeves :v (and to shade the other, lol)
&&her left leg needs to extend a little more
nice hands tho!
GODAMMIT IT ALWAYS HAPPENS
I get more urgent and more in a hurry to post it, so I end up leaving more mistakes than a holey ship made by the worst craftsmen.
The first time I was going to post it I actually forgot to colour the camera. Imagine that orz.
Thanks for the compliment on the hands though, I had to take a picture of my own as a reference because I had no idea how you hold cameras.
Nice ayayayay, the only problem for me is that her nose looks a bit strange, like a cat nose.
I don't know about that. I just thought I'd make a nose that looked remotely realistic. Guess I failed in that department, whatever the reason.
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So I heard the current craze is "cute"
Let's try that.
[Moments later]
http://www.fileize.com/files/13887786/1e0/img073.png (http://www.fileize.com/files/13887786/1e0/img073.png)
I'm a terrible artist.
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I love your Tewi pictures.
http://www.fileize.com/files/8febec17/825/Paruparu2.png (http://www.fileize.com/files/8febec17/825/Paruparu2.png)
ლ(╹◡╹ლ) おっぱい！
(Nsfw-ish?)
Life-like texture
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http://www.fileize.com/files/d6ba1f84/074/beckon.png
Should stop realism. Seriously.
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That looks pretty good so far, actually. Are you going to finish it?
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Cest parfait!
I love your drawing But i think realism is not your forte. You keep drawing with your usual style.
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That looks pretty good so far, actually. Are you going to finish it?
that's the finished product, actually. Nothing much more t add than a background (which I gave up on doing)
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http://i.imgur.com/o9qdI.jpg
My hate for grass has deepened. I think I took about more than six hours and a hundred layers to do that. FFFF
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Oh someway you fixed that Reimu :P
Nice job with the grass, now I know why you used 8 thousand layers to draw it.
There are some "black points" in Suika's right leg that made me think that my screen was dirty :P
You could put something more in the background like mountains, also I think that you could make a better fireball and her hands pose doesn't look like a hand that is shooting something, maybe if you open more the fingers it could look better.
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http://i.imgur.com/o9qdI.jpg
My hate for grass has deepened. I think I took about more than six hours and a hundred layers to do that. FFFF
"HEY CHECK OUT MY NEW PANTSU!"
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Let's copy artist styles
http://i.imgur.com/vk7Ox.jpg?1
Lunasa - Kazetto
Reimu - Irua
Miko - Makuwauri
Kanako - Tres-Iques
Satori - Zucreelo
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Your Tres-Iques is pretty spot-on :V
The other ones still seem to lean a little on your own style, imo.
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http://i.imgur.com/hPL6y.jpg
Meiling.
Experimenting with shading technique.
Probably failed.
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http://i.imgur.com/rbjQc.jpg
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Say, that's a pretty good Yamame! You're improving super fast jeez
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Say, that's a pretty good Yamame! You're improving super fast jeez
Haha, thanks. Imitating Imizu's style seems to be a really good idea. It's just the right amount of realism and anime for me.
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http://imgur.com/aiuu7Pb
LAZY BACKGROUND IS LAZY.
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http://imgur.com/aiuu7Pb
LAZY BACKGROUND IS LAZY.
I like that, it brings to mind that old saying, "If animals like you, you can't be a bad person."
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http://imgur.com/aiuu7Pb
LAZY BACKGROUND IS LAZY.
But figure and cat is not :) Well-done!
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Lazy background rules, and I think that I discovered (or not) the cat's "problem" that we were chatting in IRC about it, its eyes are too "back", so it looks that its head is round like a seal's head. Cat's eyes are positioned in the front of its head.
Anyway, cool colors :)
Ref pics:
http://www.padrebergamaschi.com/Pets/images/he_jumping_cat.jpg
http://animalstown.com/animals/e/eared-seals/wallpapers/eared-seal-wallpaper-2.jpg
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http://imgur.com/2qyMOBO
I caught a Nue.
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http://imgur.com/2qyMOBO
I caught a Nue.
Nue without thighhighs =o
Anyway GJ! I only think that her hair looks a bit like a ponytail, I am not sure if you wanted draw one so I think that it should looks more free or something like.
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http://imgur.com/VKRLST1
Tewi again. I hate Junior College so I draw almost everyday. Derp.
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She's gonna wreck it!
Where did you learn how to draw the bottoms of feet? I've managed to avoid drawing that particular perspective on feet most of the time, but I find it very hard t' do.
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Absent for days...because of THIS http://imgur.com/81DMnZV
Dark Souls Crossover, Tenko and Ornstein and Smough!
Yeah it's not good, but it's a start, I suppose.
She's gonna wreck it!
Where did you learn how to draw the bottoms of feet? I've managed to avoid drawing that particular perspective on feet most of the time, but I find it very hard t' do.
Ghovs kept bugging me about feet, so I just did them, lol. You just need to take references and it'll come to you...somehow. (Yeah I'm not helpful at all)
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/index?tags=kuro_suto_sukii (NSFW because it's danbooru, of course)
This artist is pretty much the best for taking references for feet, and I use his works all the time. Just looking at his stuff gives me a foot fetish. Really.
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Woah cool perspective, the monsters (sorry I don't play Dark Souls) looks like the monsters from this video (NSFW - mindf@ck video) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d5t5EQY3I9o. That axe texture looks strange but looks nice at the same time :P
* The right boob from the fat guy looks a bit strange;
* You could make the sword brighter;
* You could put texture in the ground too, like you did with the windows;
* Where is Tenshi's hat? :V
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/ocq43mv6duuv4gp/ARISU.png
Hahahaha, oh gods I'm so lazy :V
First time drawing and colouring a tree, second time drawing and colouring grass, all around bullshit o/
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Ohhh
pantsu shot nice one, the dolls are lovely. The only thing that I think that you can change is the eyes. It looks like that you used that gradient tool from Flash to fill it. Maybe if you paint it like you did with the rest could make it looks better.
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I think you need to practice folds because I'm afraid they simply do not work that way, I have no idea what is going on. I suggest using this tutorial http://www.creativespotlite.com/drawing/drapery-tutorial-1.htm Try practicing a few folds and post them here.
-There is quite a bit wrong with her anatomy, the first thing that caught my attention was the pantyshot, the suspicious bulge suggests Alice might be a trap which I'm going to assume isn't what you were aiming for.
-The little finger of her right hand looks broken and does not fluidly connect to the rest of her hand.
-Her left foot does not look connected to her leg, you can see how the bone structure works here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ankle
-I'll echo Kaze_Senshi about the gradient of her eyes, also, why is the shine on the left of her iris when the light source of the picture is coming from her right? Her pupils are different sizes but that isn't very important in the grand scheme of things.
-Shanghai's boobs are too high up.
-Alice's right leg looks strange.
You said you were lazy and I'm going to have to agree, especially where shading and colouring is concerned. The scribbling that you use to shade with looks messy and doesn't convey a sense of depth at all. Its use on her face makes it look a bit like stubble. Similarly, how come Alice doesn't have a shadow underneath her but the foreground does where there is nothing to cast one?
-You also haven't filled in the colours properly, there are random blue streaks all over the place (presumably where the sky is showing through) and often the colour does not quite meet the lineart, leaving pixels of white everywhere.
-There is no variation in the lineart thickness which, again, limits depth and makes the piece look rather flat.
-The lineart doesn't always join together (most noticeably her right elbow)
-You might want to work on your frills, Ragathol provided me this in the first Art Tips thread http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=10937.0;attach=21398;image
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You're a beautiful artist you just need more practice. Remember, practice makes perfect! :D
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http://i.imgur.com/GKMP9vz.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/d2WT6Cm.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/hGAhVGV.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/YkRpUl9.jpg
I hate myself so much.
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i just noticed
but everyone faces the same way
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Cool poses, your hands and foot looks pretty nice.
Why Rumia's hair is moving like she is falling back but her dress is like she is moving forward?
i just noticed
but everyone faces the same way
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PS: Kanako needs more b00bs :V
PS2: Kanako's foot has only 4 toes :o
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do you love drawing 3/4 view or something :v
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I do it because it's easy. Hoho.
http://i.imgur.com/VXWa2QA.jpg
Here's something different instead.
I'm just kidding it's still 3/4
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still-facing-3/4-left.jpg
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http://i.imgur.com/oezMLRl.jpg
Rekindled my hate for front view.
I want to rub Rumia's belly.
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Her pose looks very stiff, though that may be due to the pose itself... Also her legs seem to be of different lengths? :V
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Her pose looks very stiff, though that may be due to the pose itself... Also her legs seem to be of different lengths? :V
Front viiieeeewwwwwwww :V
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Stupid question, but why most of your pics contain bare feet?
...Tried to carp at your Rumia, but couldn't find any flaws beside one mentioned by Pasu. :V
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Stupid question, but why most of your pics contain bare feet?
...Tried to carp at your Rumia, but couldn't find any flaws beside one mentioned by Pasu. :V
but if I don't draw bare feet, how will I get good at them?
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The way the legs are positioned give the impression that its really painful/she's going to pounce in an awkward way
but if I don't draw bare feet, how will I get good at them?
but if you dont draw anything other than 3/4 heads, how will you get good at anything other than 3/4 heads? ;v
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I-it doesn't matter! 3/4 views are all I need anyway!
http://i.imgur.com/gYl6ypy.jpg
(I tried)
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Ohhhh. Oh my. It's been...two months? Time sure flies.
In order of uh...timeframe.
http://i.imgur.com/9BUlirk.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/YeCB2iT.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/Q4PopU0.jpg
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Oh you are alive :P
Nice drawings, I only think that you should let more space between wolf-girl's eyes.
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Jealousy!
Jealousyjealousy
JEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSYJEALOUSY
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Oh here's a Medicine at 3am.
http://i.imgur.com/xxSyOZK.jpg?1
JEALOUSSSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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would it kill you to draw anything than 3/4 view lolllllllllllllllllllllll
wheres her other leg
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I'm sorry, but isn't she missing a limb?
fake e: gdi vento
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It's under her skirt, slightly visible!
...maybe!
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http://i.imgur.com/Oib1lwk.png
Okuu disguises herself to get at Orin's food.
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It's cute, and I really like how pretty you made the faces look :)
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http://i.imgur.com/itS3Qfy.png
OC.
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http://i.imgur.com/itS3Qfy.png
OC.
Bonus points for not including...
1. Silly hat,
2. Sixteen thousand different shades of gray that imply colors
Also, this looks nice :B
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http://i.imgur.com/1q0HbeC.png
Kogasa.
Can't into background.
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Cute Kogasa, I feel that that heart should have smoother curves on its bottom :x
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http://i.imgur.com/gOTbKdT.png
From No Game No Life
http://i.imgur.com/Ulp0c2w.png
With terrible background.
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http://i.imgur.com/mmxGoM2.png
http://i.imgur.com/rwTsWtI.png
More OC.
http://i.imgur.com/84dn4ii.png
Random 2hu sketch.
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http://i.imgur.com/NGrG7Eo.png
Satori bust.
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Very nice digital coloring, there : o
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(http://i.imgur.com/4R8om02.png)
Photo study.
(http://i.imgur.com/O5Vf96m.png)
Turd polishing 101
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http://i.imgur.com/yOUcSc8.png
Turd polishing never ends.
http://i.imgur.com/UKiJZE9.png?1
Something more recent.
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Nice skin shading :o
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(http://i.imgur.com/rdi7SSe.png)
Seiga
(http://i.imgur.com/dpy6xuP.png)
Turd polishing portrait again.
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(http://i.imgur.com/zhzDbdn.png)
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(http://i.imgur.com/9KEkhhD.png)
Still portrait day.
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She looks rather princess-y : o I like how you've been using paints, btw. Gives off a very traditional feel.
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(http://i.imgur.com/zKSXU3Z.png)
Fullbody time featuring Kogasa.
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(http://i.imgur.com/zQLWMVn.png?1)
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That coloring kind of reminds me of the way a certain ero-artist does his coloring...nice job btw!
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An interesting colouring and stylistic approach. Almost makes me think Aya was in Frozen. :V
It does appear as if there is a stylistic difference between the face and body, which causes a bit of inconsistency. I think the latter's relative chunkiness relative to the facial details is the culprit.
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The way you drew legs and feet in those last two pictures is fantastic. It shows both refined painting technique and good anatomical knowledge.
The poses in those two pictures are great too. Often when I draw a full body pose, it ends up looking like they would tip over to the side (particularly when you look at them in the mirror). You have no such problems.
Something about Kogasa's face feels off to me, but your princess portraits show you're clearly good at drawing faces, so it might just be my taste.
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http://i.imgur.com/n7zBSCQ.jpg
Something different.
@DX7_EP
Will have to elaborate on what you mean by chunky/facial details
@Sixten
You're not the first person to note Kogasa's face being off. But I don't know how to fix it so i'll leave it at that.
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Compared to the face, the rest of the body seems to show more sharp contrasts and less smooth transitions between shades. This is made more apparent in the clothing, but is also there somewhat in the legs, arms, and hair.
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I see a lot of improvement, considering how well-done that foreshortening on that Reimu and Marisa looks!
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(http://i.imgur.com/QUggucO.png)
Trying to speed up.
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I feel like your recent experiments with form and light are turning out pretty good
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I really enjoy the shading you do on your faces and the lack of black lines is an interesting effect.
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Thanks for the compliments. I'm pretty stoked about how my studies paid off.
Wanted to post some work earlier but scrapped them all due to issues. Working on a personal project at the moment so i likely will take even longer. (hurrah)
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http://i.imgur.com/nrRJIaC.png
Comic.
I'm not very funny.
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http://i.imgur.com/nrRJIaC.png
Comic.
I'm not very funny.
Man you weren't kidding-
Is the joke really just him taking off his shirt :V
The comic feels incomplete. Not all comics have to be funny, but if this was indeed an attempt at humour I... would suggest you continue the plot instead
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http://i.imgur.com/gIIOAAq.png
Parsee
http://i.imgur.com/Ks8im5w.png
Now with progress thing.
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http://www.livestream.com/notapirate
Because if I'm going to force myself to draw, i may as well go through the whole nine yards.
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http://i.imgur.com/hDBHYT1.png
Randumb.
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http://i.imgur.com/2C54LhF.png
Alice.
(Of course, I had to realise my mistakes several hours later instead of finding them before I was at all finished.)
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http://i.imgur.com/JQzVdJ1.png
Another portrait.
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(http://40.media.tumblr.com/f589e8b1dffb0893860395dee256caa3/tumblr_nn18o2waDN1us1tb7o1_1280.png)
Feeling empty. Just like this thread.
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Do you base your faces on real people ever? One thing i've liked about your more recent stuff is it feels like they're somewhat modeled after real people. I especially like the expression on the last one, super cute!
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Posr more cute art pls :>
I really like the shading on the last bunch too!
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(http://i.imgur.com/kK7Hd16.png)
Background sucks but I had to try.
@Nobu: I've done portraits with reference before so I guess it carried over. I'm trying to rely on imagination now though
@Nekorex: I'll keep posting!
I appreciate the comments, really; I don't really know if people look in this thread these days.