Author Topic: Dolphin Rider Koishi - The End  (Read 309303 times)

GuyYouMetOnline

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #450 on: August 16, 2012, 03:15:13 AM »
More DRK hell yes!

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #451 on: August 16, 2012, 06:30:36 PM »
EoSD, check.
PCB, check.
IN, check.
PoFV, check.

SA, check.

What time is it? It's MoF time!

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #452 on: August 17, 2012, 07:15:46 AM »
Holy.
WHAT.
FUCKING VERY YES.

Keine got what she deserverd, Marisa refrences [i was rather expecting Alice for that), and character development. All that I liked to see and want to see more of it.

I also think you should update the fanfiction.net version, 'cause how long has it been since it ended at Ch.6?
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #453 on: August 18, 2012, 10:44:15 AM »
I also think you should update the fanfiction.net version, 'cause how long has it been since it ended at Ch.6?
Quick note on this - I discontinued the ff.net version because after a couple of weeks there had been no interest beyond the people who had already read it on MotK. Literally, all the comments were like 'saw this on MotK' or 'good to see you're uploading this here'. I figured it wasn't worth the trouble if it wasn't actually gonna reach a new audience, so. :V

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #454 on: August 18, 2012, 01:45:26 PM »
I dunno, I find that shorter fics on ff.net often have trouble getting a large readership, and only the really popular or really long fics end up getting reviews by ff.net people. You may want to keep at it--when the story gets enough words/chapters, more ff.net people give it a read. Not to mention, there is the possibility that a good number of ff.net people simply read and just don't have anything to say; have you checked how many hits DRK has gotten at ff.net?

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #455 on: August 18, 2012, 03:47:17 PM »
Quick note on this - I discontinued the ff.net version because after a couple of weeks there had been no interest beyond the people who had already read it on MotK. Literally, all the comments were like 'saw this on MotK' or 'good to see you're uploading this here'. I figured it wasn't worth the trouble if it wasn't actually gonna reach a new audience, so. :V

Actually, I disagree. I usually lurk around the Touhou Fanfiction page and was first introduced to your work via the ff.net version of DKR. I read through it, and after seeing the lack of upates, decided to search up DKR on Google. MotK was the first result, so I clicked it and finally got to read through the arcs I missed.

You were, in a way, the catalyst to me joining MotK. I... I'm actually not sure where I'm going with this response, but I suppose I just wanted to say that posting on ff.net wasn't an entire waste.

I think that you've given up on the ff.net version of DKR far too quickly. You've only posted six chpters; the first arc. Perhaps if you updated, there'd be more reviews. If I recall, the Mokou arc is the next, am I correct? In that case, I highly recommend that you at least upload that arc. Your unique take on the Hourai rivals has left a deep impression on; judging by the reviews, your other readers and myself. I believe that the Fujiwara arc is your story's defining chapter, where the stakes finally start to rise and the action becomes more apparent.

If you'd at least post that masterpiece, I believe that you'd be abke to garner more attention.

//is embarrassed.

« Last Edit: August 18, 2012, 03:54:30 PM by Scrittore »

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #456 on: August 20, 2012, 02:27:36 AM »
DAMMIT ROU I WAS TRYING TO GET TO SLEEP LIKE A HALF HOUR AGO AND SAW THIS UPDATE

NOW GET OVER HERE AND KISS ME YOU SEXY PIECE OF MANFLESH

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #457 on: August 22, 2012, 06:29:31 PM »
So I'm updating FF now and again, as per suggestion! Gonna take a while to catch up, so if you want your updates to be hot off the grill this is still the best place to go.

And on that note...

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?You wanna what??

Sango blanched at the suggestion. That was to be expected given what Koishi had just said.

?I want to visit mother and father today.?

The dolphin pouted. ?But this is a day off, isn?t it? Why would you spend it doing something as downbeat as that??

That was true, admittedly. After their run-in with Keine, Nitori had given Koishi and Sango the weekend to recover. Mokou?s cream had worked its magic, removing any trace of the marks the belt had left on them. It was a chance for Koishi to treat herself, either spending the whole day slacking off or doing some genuine socialising.

But Koishi had remembered a duty she?d long left unattended.

?I haven?t visited my parents since Satori disappeared. I want to pay my respects.?

Sango was eying her, fingers fidgeting. Koishi could make out the doubt in her eyes.

?Are you sure you?re okay with that? I mean, I always thought you were pretty sensitive about your family.?

Was she? Koishi had to think back to the day she?d met Sango. The girl she?d been then seemed nothing like the girl she was now. She cringed as she recalled how she?d cowered under the bedsheets, begging for destiny to pick anyone but her.

It?s in the past now, she told herself. I?m stronger.

?Yeah, it?s fine,? she said at last. ?Honestly, Satori and I promised to offer them flowers every three months, but after she vanished I sort of forgot. So I?m going to leave them a whole bouquet today to make up for it.?

There was a trace of sadness in Koishi?s voice. More than usual, though, she felt in control of her emotions. She wanted to grieve, but she had matured enough to find a proper time for it. She had decided that time was now.

?Nyaa?? Rin?s head poked out from behind the doorway. ?Koishi-sama, you?re going to visit the family grave??

Koishi nodded. The cat stepped out from behind the door, rubbing at the milk covering her lips.

?Can me and Okuu come as well? I mean, your old man fixed me up, so I kinda owe him.?

?That?d be nice, but...? Koishi came close and ruffled at Rin?s hair. ?The graveyard has a rule against bringing pets in with you. Sorry.?

?Pets?? Rin stuck up her nose. ?I wasn?t meaning like that. I meant in this form!? She motioned towards her almost-human figure.

?Eh?? Koishi grabbed at one of Rin?s ears on instinct. It twitched in her grasp, while Rin?s tail rubbed at her thigh.

?How do you plan to do that?? Koishi asked. ?Sango-san can get away with a jacket because she only has a fin to cover, but you two-?

Rin put a finger over Koishi?s mouth, smirking as she silenced her. ?Don?t worry about that, Koishi-sama. Me and Okuu have been preparing for something like this...?

-----

It was like she?d just walked into a noir film.

As she walked down the street, Koishi was boxed in by a pair of women in trenchcoats. On her left, the taller woman was letting her long black hair run down her back; to the right, the redhead was wearing a fedora that seemed to twitch up and down when she smiled. Sango was trailing behind, and though Koishi couldn?t see her right now she assumed the dolphin was laughing.

?Sho here?sh the plan, shee?? Rin said, pointing a finger at her feathery friend. ?We walk big, long shtridesh and act like we own the plaesh, shee? And if anyone triesh ta shtop ush, we tell ?em we?ve got an offer they can?t refu-?

?What are you doing?? Koishi?s voice was devoid of humor. Rin looked back at her with a pout.

?I?m staying in character. I saw people talking like that on TV when they dressed up like this.?

Koishi began to seriously consider hiding the remote when she left the house. Rin had been exposed to some terrible influences.

The other gangster was much quieter, thankfully. Her coat flapped in and out as she shuffled her wings beneath it. Beads of sweat ran down her face, and she wiped at them now and again. The bright sunlight wasn?t doing anything to help the matter. Koishi would have waited until a cooler day, but tomorrow she?d be back at school.

Hang in there, Utsuho. She reached up and gave the raven a little pat on the head. Utsuho cooed and leaned towards her master, paying no mind to the glares the trio were receiving as they made their way to the graveyard.

?So where did you two even find those outfits?? Koishi asked. She?d been wanting to ask the question since they?d left the house, but she?d held back on a lingering fear she wouldn?t like the answer. Utsuho turned towards her with the same matter-of-fact look she always showed.

?Orin found them lying in a dumpster a few months ago. They were full of holes, but she put a lot of work into sewing the coats back together.?

That was less incriminating than Koishi had been afraid of. She let out a breath she hadn?t noticed she?d been holding in.

?Wait, Rin can sew??

Utsuho tilted her head. ?Well, she can now. She took a while to learn, and there were a lot of...mistakes.?

On the word ?mistakes?, Rin slumped forwards. Now that she was looking, Koishi could make out scratches all over the catgirl?s fingers. How much must she have wanted to get out into the city if she was willing to go through that?

?Quit making me sound so bad.? Rin perked up, shoving Utsuho away a little. The raven yelped, her coat flapping out and almost revealing her wings as she stumbled to the left. ?I learned, and that?s all that matters.?

The cat looked away in a huff, but Koishi couldn?t help but smile. Rin had never been good when it came to admitting her feelings, but she?d clearly wanted to make this journey for quite a while. It had been a good idea to bring them along, she decided.

When they made it to the cemetery, Koishi turned on her heels towards the dolphin trailing behind them. It was a quiet day in these parts, with no-one in earshot in any direction.

?I?ll stay out here,? Sango said as she stood guard at the entrance. ?I didn?t know your folks, so it doesn?t make sense for me to visit.?

Koishi nodded. It was good to know that Sango understood. She nudged the two coated youkai along into the graveyard, following on behind.

Good to see we made it here without trouble. Sango let her thoughts seep into Koishi?s head. I was afraid we?d need to explain to someone that you weren?t getting kidnapped by the Mafia.

Yes, Koishi thought. It was definitely a good thing Sango wasn?t coming along.

-----

Koishi walked through the field of graves, finding her destination without even thinking about it. She?d memorised her path so intently that even a few months of ignorance wasn?t enough to get it out of her head.

How often have I been here? she wondered. She'd visited once or twice a month after her father?s death, though she only offered flowers on special days. A local gravekeeper gave her a familiar wave as she passed, and she returned it. She?d never taken the time to ask his name, and he?d never asked for hers. Maybe she would get around to it one day.

She came to a stop in front of a modest grave. The cemetery was too crowded for any family to get more than a few square metres of coverage, and the Komeiji grave was no exception. The stone itself was a tall marble slab with the family name engraved on it, and the family?s ashes were buried underneath. There was a small footspace in front of the grave, only large enough for one person at a time.

Utsuho was first to step up, as had been decided on the way here. She had been carrying a flower bouquet for the whole journey, which she carefully placed in front of the grave. She was poor at hiding her emotions, wings trembling beneath her coat as she looked upon the earth.

?Komeiji-san...I?m not going to lie, I didn?t know you very well. I was a nuisance for you, refusing to leave the surgery even when there was nothing wrong with me. I didn?t want to leave Orin on her own, that?s all. I wanted to tell you, but I couldn?t...?

She smiled weakly. ?But somehow, you knew. You kept us together, and you took both of us in at once. Without you, I would have never met Satori-sama or Koishi-sama. We?d be back on the streets, or holed up in an adoption centre with nowhere to go. I owe you a lot, more than I could have ever repaid.? For a moment, she looked ready to hug the gravestone itself, but instead rose to her feet. ?Thank you, Komeiji-san. I never got to say goodbye to you before, so...goodbye, I think.?

As she stepped away from the grave, Utsuho looked conflicted. Perhaps she?d expected more from the ritual, a moment of revelation or a message from the dead. Rin gave her a pat on the shoulder before stepping towards the grave herself. The cat placed small sticks of incense at each side of the gravestone, lighting them as she fell to her knees. Koishi had bought them on the journey over, intent on making a proper service out of this visit.

?Heya. Remember me? I?m the dumbass who walked in front of a car.? Rin fidgeted with the legs that she?d broken years ago. ?Not that it matters much. I?m feeling better than ever thanks to you.?

Unlike Utsuho, Rin gazed at the sky while she spoke. Maybe she thought that with no clouds in the way, her words would make it to heaven.

?Y?know, I wasn?t keen on having an owner to start with. I kinda liked living on the streets, when it was me and Okuu against the world. I was ready to break out at the first chance I got. But then you introduced me to Satori-sama, and...? She smiled, her grin stronger than Utsuho?s. ?You have great daughters, Komeiji-san. They?re two of the nicest humans I?ve ever met in my life. I?m sure you?re proud of both of ?em.?

She stood up, saluting as she looked towards the sun. ?So long, old man. Thanks for everything.? She walked away more satisfied than her companion, giving her a little hug as she made room for Koishi. The Siren had agreed to go last from the beginning - after all, this was her pets? first visit to the grave. She?d been here dozens of times.

?Hello, mother. Hello, father.? She placed a watery bucket at the foot of the grave. She dipped a cloth into it and scrubbed at the marble, washing off the dust and grime that had built up in her absence. ?Sorry I?m late. I got a little caught up with something.?

It had always been difficult for Koishi to address her mother in these visits, mainly because she didn't remember her. All Koishi had of her was her father?s stories, but from what he?d said she was a fine woman.

?There?s been a lot going on recently. I don?t think you?d believe me if I told you. It?s the sort of story I?d make up when I was eight years old after too much television.? She laughed at herself, thinking of her costume again. She could easily imagine herself drawing a scribbled sketch of it as a little girl and proudly showing it to her father.

?I?ve been awfully busy, which is why I haven?t been around for you. I know I promised, and-?

She considered mentioning Satori, but decided against it. In the off-chance that her parents could hear her from beyond the grave, she didn?t want to leave them worried for their other daughter.

?-and Satori wishes she could be here too. We?ve both been going through a rough time lately.?

How many times had Koishi come close to death in the last few months? Half a dozen, maybe more? That was more danger than some grown men went through in a lifetime. It was strange to think that back in the beginning, when she?d first learned about the Sirens, she had tried to run away from it all.

?It?s been fun, though, in its own strange way. It?s a satisfying job.?

She?d changed the lives of dozens of people, and she?d even saved one or two of them along the way. Just thinking about that made Koishi?s heart flutter with achievement.

?I?ve met a lot of new people along the way. Some of them were a little scary at first, but...? She put a hand to her chin, trying to find the words she was looking for. ?I don?t think any of them were that bad, in the end. Misguided, maybe, but not bad.?

She thought of the Mindcoil victims. Cirno, who only wanted to be respected. Tewi, the victim of a dysfunctional family. Eiki, unable to stand the injustice around her. Yuyuko, who loved her son almost too much. Each of them had only been trying to cope with the hand fate had dealt them.

Koishi had helped them come to their senses, and she had done what she could to change them for the better. If she?d learned anything from the experience, it was that no-one was beyond help. It was just easier when she could walk into someone?s head and have a chat with their inner demons personally.

?So in the end, I?m glad I?ve had so much to do lately.? She turned around towards her pets with a wink. ?And I?m glad I had some good friends to point me in the right direction.?

Rin gave her a thumbs up. Utsuho simply nodded. The pair stepped back as Koishi wiped the last specks of moss off of the marble.

?Anyway, it was good seeing you two again. I?ll have some great stories for you next time, I promise.? Koishi rose to her feet, bowing towards the grave. She felt lighter as she stepped away, a weight lifted from her chest. ?Don?t worry about me, okay? I?ll be fine.?

That?s right, Koishi thought to herself. As long as I can help people, I?ll keep going.

Rin ruffled at the Siren?s hair as she walked away from the grave. ?You really have grown up, haven?t you??

Koishi chuckled, warming up in the youkai?s embrace. ?I guess you could say that. Are you two done here??

The two pets nodded their consensus. Utsuho seemed much more cheerful than she had been before. Koishi?s words must have reached her, too.

?In that case, we?d better get back to the entrance,? the Siren said, leading her pets back through the graveyard. ?Here?s hoping Sango-san is still in one piece.?

-----

?Phweeee~...?

Sango whistled to herself, foot tapping against the ground as she looked back through the gateway. Still no sign of Koishi and her pets. It had been almost twenty minutes now, and Sango had been on her own for the whole time. She hadn?t even found the chance to pick up something to play with on the way out.

With nothing else to do she?d been trying to compose a song, whistling to herself. This would have been a lot easier if she wasn?t tone deaf - she would imagine one note, try to play it, and get another note entirely. She gave up, her foot-tapping getting faster.

She was interrupted by the sound of sobbing in the distance.

?Huh??

She pried her head around, stopping to look at an oncoming stranger. The man stared at his shoes as he trudged down the road, sighing wistfully every few seconds. Just looking at him was enough to squeeze Sango?s heart with guilt.

?Um, mister...are you alright??

The man flinched, looking up at the dolphin. His expression lightened only for an instant.

?Oh, hello. I?m fine, really. Just...?

He looked through the gateway into the graveyard, his lip shivering. Sango filled in the blanks herself.

?I just need a little help to get through the day. A few hundred yen to buy myself dinner tonight. That?s all I?m asking...?

He was almost too pitiful for Sango to bear. She?d never forgive herself if she turned him down. She had plenty of money to burn, anyway - the boss had given her more than enough to live on.

?Well, alright.?

Sango pulled her wallet out from her pocket, opening it up to take a look through her chance.

He snatched at it, and ran.

Eh? Sango stood in place, absently watching the man running into the distance with her entire fortune. D...Did he just-

?Gets ?em every time!? he yelled, dashing into the more populated city square. He meant to lose Sango in the crowd, she realised. After a few seconds of paralysis, her brain finally caught up with what was going on.

?Oh, that son of a-?

Sango gave chase, running at full-pelt to chase the thief. Her adversary cut a well-rehearsed path through the streets of Gensouto. He cut corners, slipped into alleyways, and slid through spaces too large to walk through. He was leaner than Sango, fitting into passageways she couldn?t sneak in. She was forced to go the long way around and lose time.

After a minute?s chase, Sango had made no progress. On the long straights she was faster, but he pulled away from her in the back-alleys. But he was running out of options, and if he kept this up Sango?s endurance would win out. Desperate, he pulled into a long street with stores on both sides, filled with dozens of shoppers and families. Sango hung right behind him. This was her chance.

?Gimme back my wallet!? Sango yelled. The crowd turned towards her with various gasps and mumbles. The would-be thief looked out to the masses, then plowed through them to make his escape. He shoved bystanders out of the way, sometimes deliberately pushing them at Sango to hold her back.

?Ahh, sorry, excuse me, really sorry...!? Sango murmured apologies as she cleared a path. She was slower and gentler than the pickpocket, which only gave him more time to break away. Sango cursed beneath her breath as her target shrank into the distance.

His escape was cut short when someone tripped him up.

?Whaa!?

As the pickpocket dropped to the ground, Sango could see the tripper step out of the crowd and weigh him down. The rest of the bystanders stepped away to make a clearing. The mugger squirmed about, but after all the chasing he was too tired to get away.

Sango had ample time to squeeze through the crowds and reach the clearing. In that time her newfound ally had reached into the man?s pockets and retrieved her wallet.

?This is yours, right??

Sango nodded, absently taking back the wallet and putting it away more securely. For a few seconds, she could do nothing but stare at the girl who?d helped her out. She looked about Koishi?s age, maybe a little older, with radiant blonde hair and bright brown eyes. Her outfit was sloppy, a red shirt with white sleeves and a short-cut skirt. She switched from looking between the pickpocket and Sango every few seconds, pushing down to keep him from slipping away.

A bystander pulled out a cell phone and alerted the police. It was a few minutes before a car appeared, and a pair of uniformed officers stepped onto the scene. The young girl moved aside to let them apprehend the culprit.

?Uh...? Sango rubbed at the back of her head. She?d figured that getting back her own wallet would have been easier than this. ?Thanks.?

The girl winked. ?Don?t mention it. Anyway, I?d better go before the suits start asking questions.?

With that she turned on her heels and vanished into the crowd, just like the man she?d foiled. Sango reached out for her, grabbing nothing but air.

?Wait! Come back, phwee-!?

The whole thing had left Sango horribly flustered, and the word slipped off her lips almost by accident.

Ah-!

The tremor of power she felt coming from the girl?s direction almost made Sango buckle at the knees.

I...I found her!

Again with the coincidences. Yukari Yakumo had a really twisted sense of humour. Sango made to chase the source of the echo, but a police officer placed a hand on her shoulder.

?I?m sorry, but we?re going to need you to answer some questions about what happened here.?

The dolphin?s heart sank as the Teardrop faded further and further out of her range. She slumped her shoulders as she faced the officer.

?Can I at least tell my friends where I am??

The man nodded. With a stiff lip, Sango pulled out her phone and hit one of the few numbers she had on speed-dial.

?Hi, Koishi-san? Yeah, I?m gonna need you to pick me up at the police station when you?re done. It?s a long story...?

-----

Well, this wasn?t how I planned to spend my day off.

Koishi felt horribly out of place as she sat outside the questioning room. She?d made her way over as soon as she received the phone call, dropping off the pets at home on the way. Bringing more youkai into the public eye seemed like a bad idea.

She had hoped this would be a painless procedure. After all, Sango was the victim, wasn?t she? There was nothing to hold her accountable for. They would ask some questions and send her on her way.

When the officer stepped out of the room grabbing at his temples, Koishi already knew things wouldn?t be that simple.

?You the relative I was hearing about?? he said as he turned to Koishi. Relative wasn?t the word, but it was close enough. She nodded.

The man sighed with relief. ?Finally. About damn time I met someone I could get some answers from.?

?Answers?? Koishi already didn?t like where this was headed.

?Yeah.? He pointed into the room, where Sango was twiddling her thumbs. ?Your friend here isn?t showing up on any of our databases. She?s not down in the census, in our fingerprint records, anywhere. And when I tried to get the local medics to see if she was hurt, she started pushing them away! Let me tell ya, that?s the sort of girl I?d write out of my will.?

Uh-oh.

This was exactly the sort of scenario that Koishi had been afraid of. The police were going to call on her to present documents that didn?t exist. She tried to come up with a semi-believable lie, but nothing seemed even remotely plausible.

?So, mind telling me what?s going on?? the man asked, his gruff expression short on patience. ?And before you get any wise ideas, I?d like to remind you that concealing information from the police is a chargeable offense.?

That last part made Koishi even less sure what to say in her defense. She began to sweat, hands trembling as her mouth bobbed open and shut.

?Well, uh, you see, it?s-?

?Sango-chaaaan!?

Koishi was cut short by another voice barging into the room. She turned about to see an irate math professor stomping towards her.

?You!? Nitori yelled, pointing at the officer with enough intensity to make the grown man flinch. ?Are you the one who?s been bothering my little girl?!?

The man cringed, like Nitori?s words were stabbing through his skull. ?Look, lady, your ?little girl? has a lot of explaining to do. Why isn?t she showing up on any official records, and why is she being so damn uncooperative about it??

Nitori folded her arms and pouted. She played the role of overbearing mother a little too well, Koishi thought to herself.

?Of course she?s uncooperative! She?s only lived in Japan for a few months!?

The officer leered. ?But she told me she moved here from Okinawa.?

?She doesn?t want to look awkward,? Nitori continued, lying with a perfectly straight face. ?Her family are away on business for the year, so she?s been left in my care until they return. She?s a harmless little girl who barely knows her way around Gensouto, and you?re pressing her as if she?s the villain! She was robbed, for heaven?s sake!?

She reached into her purse and pulled out a wad of papers, certificates and signatures that backed up her claim. It was almost disturbing how much paperwork the kappa had prepared for this sort of outcome.

The cop took one look at the pile of evidence before he rolled his eyes. This was more work than he was willing to put himself through.

?OK, whatever. I get the idea. Your girl can go.?

?You bet she can.? Nitori darted into the questioning room, grabbing Sango by the hand and pulling her out into the corridor. ?And I?d better not hear you folks calling her in for the trial! Can?t you see you?ve done enough to her already?!?

Sango was hiding behind Nitori?s back, barely poking her head out to look as the officer. Either she had rehearsed this, or she had picked up the idea very quickly. The officer raised his hands in surrender.

?Alright, alright! I?ll get things cleared up. Just...just get outta here.?

Nitori stuck her nose up. ?It?s nice to see that SOMEONE still has some sense in this police force. For shame!? She stomped out of the building with Sango trailing behind, looking ready to cry at any moment.

Koishi watched them go, then turned back to the officer. For a few seconds, there was an awkward silence.

?Sorry.? It was all she could think to say. The officer just shrugged before walking in the other direction to get back to his job.

Koishi caught up with the youkai as they made it out the front entrance. Nitori kept up the act until they were a few blocks clear of the precinct; then she let go of Sango?s hand and looked back at her with a very different anger.

?I hope you understand how long I had to spend putting those files together. That kind of forgery isn?t easy, you know.?

Sango nodded along. ?Yes, boss.?

?Do you have anything to say for yourself??

The dolphin raised her head. Her grin was far too smug for someone who was meant to be getting chewed out.

?Actually, I do. I was doing some on-the-field research, y?see.?

?And??

Sango winked. ?I think I just found Siren Number 6.?

-----

?So you say she ran away from you??

The moment Sango had explained the story in full, the trio had retreated to Room 495. Nitori was seated at her behemoth of a computer, filing through police records with a wave of her hand.

?That?s right,? Sango answered. ?She said something about not wanting to be questioned.?

Koishi sat at the side, watching the two youkai go to work. She didn?t have Sango?s first-hand experience or Nitori?s techno-genius, so all she could do was watch and wait.

After a few minutes of scouring the database, Nitori pulled up a list of several cases from the last twelve months. They ranged from harassment to pickpocketing to assault, running in different corners of the city.

The one thing they had in common was that each crime was supposedly stopped by a young girl in blonde hair, who fled before the police?s arrival.

?Sounds like you ran into the local good Samaritan,? Nitori said. She scrolled through the reports, frowning as she examined them in more detail. ?Looks like no-one recognised her, though. Everyone gives more or less the same physical description, but we don?t have a name or an address or anything.?

The two youkai looked through the files intently for a few minutes, getting nowhere. Koishi joined in, but found nothing that the youkai hadn?t already noticed.

But she did have an idea.

?Kawashiro-sensei. Is there a map of Gensouto on your computer??

Nitori swiveled around in her chair. ?Of course there is. Why do you ask??

Koishi put a finger to her lip. She was starting to wonder if this idea was too convenient. She?d got it from TV shows rather than real-life experience. Still, now she?d started she had to follow through.

?Maybe we should try plotting the locations of the crimes on the map. There might be a pattern to where they happen.?

Nitori raised an eyebrow. She turned around, fiddling with the keyboard and making wide swivel motions with her hands. Monitors jumped in and out, forwards and backwards, as a map of Gensouto came into view.

?OK, plotting...now.?

With a satisfied smack of the enter key, Nitori folded her arms as she watched a series of Xs appear across the map. Each of them represented a crime, and they?d been marked with their respective dates to give a sense of time.

It wasn?t hard to see the pattern. Sango was the first to speak up.

?Hey, it?s a circle!?

It was less intuitive on a list, but with a picture it was easy enough to see the pattern. The incidents all revolved around a central point, with the later crimes taking place further out from it.

?Heh.? Nitori tipped her hat to Koishi. ?Nice catch.?

?Don?t mention it,? Koishi said. Apparently procedural cop shows were good for something after all.

?And in the middle of it all is...?

Nitori zoomed in on the blocks in the middle of the circle. It clipped one corner of a local zoo, but the remainder of the area mainly consisted of temples and shrines. Most of them were old Shinto shrines that barely saw use, but one building stood out among the others.

?The Myouren Institute.? Nitori pumped her fist. ?Direct hit!?

Koishi gasped. She?d heard of the Myouren Institute. It was a local charity that attempted to, in its own words, ?cultivate the seeds of enlightenment in the populace?. They were part orphanage, part religious foundation, and they were kept afloat through generous donations from the public.

But the Institute wasn?t without its share of scandals. Some said that the current director, Byakuren Hijiri, had made some questionable life choices before her rise to power. Others noted that the children the Institute took in typically didn?t come back into society until they?d come of age, and that their world views were heavily restricted as a result. Still, it was better than not having an orphanage at all.

A girl who wasn?t supposed to be out in public, who they wouldn?t bump into normally, and who no-one recognised. It all fit together. At the very least, it was worth taking a good look.

?Alright, your school work tomorrow is canceled.? Nitori cracked her knuckles as she stepped out of the chair. ?Koishi-san, Sango-san, you?re going to look around the Myouren Institute and see if you can find any trace of our Siren.

?But how are we gonna get in?? Sango asked. ?If they?re so secluded that they don?t let their kids out, how are we gonna find her??

Nitori tutted at the dolphin with a wave of a finger. ?That?s easier than you think, my dear. Tell me...have you ever wanted to adopt a little sister??

?Uh...no??

The kappa smirked. ?Well, you do now.?

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The secrecy was growing on her.

Shou had been nervous about her trips when she?d started, never going very far with it. If grandma had caught her, it would have made her situation even worse. But old lady Hijiri never left the Institute anyway, so her fears had been more or less unfounded.

Still, it?d be bad for a police report to put her on the scene. She?d become a master of the quick getaway, disappearing from sight before anyone could pin her down. It meant no praise from her peers, but that had never been a problem for her. She crept around to the rear end of the Institute as always, ducking under the windows so no-one saw her pass.

This must be how it feels to be a ninja, she thought to herself.

The window was slightly open, just as she?d left it. There was just enough room for her to slip her hand through the crack, grabbing at the latch inside and pulling it up. The window rose with ease, and with a vault she leaped back into her own room.

Expedition complete! She gave a bow to no-one in particular. No, it?s alright. Spare your applause.

The room was untouched. None of the cleaning staff visited her anymore, probably on grandma?s orders. Shou had long since been considered a bad influence on the other children, so she didn?t even get to take part in the normal sutra sessions anymore. A barely-touched copy of the Pali Canon was gathering dust in the corner, and she only ever picked it up when she needed a doorstop.

From the other side of the room, there was a frustrated squeak. Tiny hands rattled at metal bars. Shou sighed as she looked at her mouse cage.

?Good to see you too, Nazrin.?

She reached under her bed, pulling out a small packet of pellets and holding them out. Nazrin poked her head between the bars, nibbling greedily at the food. In spite of her hunger, the mouse took care not to bite her master?s hand by accident. She wouldn?t take that sort of care if anyone else tried to feed her, as a member of the cleaning staff had found out the hard way.

After a few minutes, the mouse had finished her meal. She took a few gulps from the water bottle attached to her cage, before sitting upright and looking through the bars at her master. She tilted her head, her tail flapping about behind her.

?Yeah, I had a good time today,? Shou said in response. She had interpreted Nazrin?s behaviour as a question, though in truth the mouse might have been wondering when her next feeding time was. ?Bumped into another incident on the way back. Sometimes it feels like I?m attracting these thugs, y?know??

She had run into crimes almost unnaturally often. Each time she had done what she could before vanishing into the crowd, but it was something she encountered almost every other day. Maybe she?d been born under a bad star as a child, and everything had gone downhill from there.

?...Well, whatever. I have my other things to worry about now.?

She slumped onto her bed, eyeing the clock on the opposite wall. She counted the time until grandma?s arrival. Ten minutes. Five. Two. One.

Knock, knock. ?Shou, are you in there??

Byakuren?s voice was frozen over with fear. She made no attempt to open the door, or even grab at the doorknob.

?Yes, Hijiri-san,? Shou replied, trying to keep her voice as neutral as possible. ?I?m here.?

Silence. This was the part Shou hated the most. Grandma chose every word with clinical care, sometimes taking two or three minutes just to speak a single sentence. She seemed afraid that one syllable in the wrong place would unleash some sort of monster.

?Where have you been today?? she asked at last.

Now it was Shou?s turn to stay silent. The question was impossible for her to answer, whatever she said. Grandma knew she had left the Institute - she always did, during the hours everyone else spent reciting prayers together. Shou had been honest about it first, telling Byakuren plainly that she?d been out for a walk to explore the city.

Of course, that had never worked. One of the quacks had told Byakuren that Shou was a compulsive liar, and since then she had never taken any of her stories at face value. In the end she?d decided answering her was a waste of breath, and simply let the question hang.

The air itself was frigid up until Byakuren?s footsteps faded into the distance. She hadn?t even offered Shou so much as a ?goodnight?. Shou wished this was a new experience, but it had become part of her daily regimen by now.

She looked out of the window, the crisp night air seeping into her room as the moon came into view. There was a whole world out there, she thought to herself. Yet she?d seen so little of it, and in the end she had never been able to make it away from the Institute.

She turned to Nazrin. The mouse was fiddling with the door to her cage, a tiny growl echoing in her throat. She could do with a walk around the Institute tomorrow, Shou thought to herself. It wouldn?t do her any good to be trapped in that little box forever, after all.

I know that better than anyone, Shou thought as she kicked her shoes off. Squirming under her covers without even changing out of her clothes, she let herself drift into a peaceful slumber.

In her dreams, she was more free than she would ever be in reality.

-----

NEXT TIME:

Did you walk out of some little girl?s colouring book? You look like you?re seven years old!

I?d like to be the good guy, but when good doesn?t pay well enough...


We?re pretty similar. We?re both stuck in a cage at the end of the day.


Next time, I won?t hold back. I?ll kill you if I have to.

I want you to explain everything to her. We can?t lie like this any more.

I never meant to hurt anyone, I swear...

For the sake of Gensouto, I?ll banish you forever!


DOLPHIN RIDER KOISHI, ARC 6: THE ILL-FATED STAR

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #458 on: August 22, 2012, 07:02:15 PM »
And thus, the tiger gets her chance to roar.
World Domination, Baby!

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #459 on: August 22, 2012, 10:37:58 PM »
Oh yeah, I forgot about UFO.

Huh. This arc seems a little off of the norm. It's probably because they found the next Siren so easily.

Spoiler:
Calling it right now, Hina's the MoF Siren. No evidence to back my claim up, but I've got as good of a chance as any.
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #460 on: August 23, 2012, 12:16:32 AM »
:O

Yes, the Myouren get their time to shine.
Spoiler:
and the taoists i guess since im assuming that their going to be a negative influence in this arc.
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #461 on: August 23, 2012, 04:30:23 AM »
By the way the teaser's setting up, I can completely SMELL the Hokuto Shinken leaking from this chapter.  Let's hope I actually get something right with this...

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #462 on: August 23, 2012, 07:39:45 AM »
The thing that just would not leave my mind through that whole passage was this
Naked expression; purple raspberry flavour

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #463 on: August 23, 2012, 09:30:44 AM »
Ha, I was thinking Ten Desires what with the cemetery and all.
Spoiler:
Calling it right now, Hina's the MoF Siren. No evidence to back my claim up, but I've got as good of a chance as any.
Spoiler:
I'm actually not sure if there's going to be a MoF siren at this rate ;-;

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #464 on: August 23, 2012, 10:27:40 PM »
Spoiler:
I'm actually not sure if there's going to be a MoF siren at this rate ;-;

There's seven of them right? We've still got another chance!

Spoiler:
Unless the Ten Desires crew steals the spotlight. ;_;
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #465 on: August 24, 2012, 12:31:27 AM »
Spoiler:
Unless the Ten Desires crew steals the spotlight. ;_;

I actually wouldn't mind this.

Magical girl Yoshika  :3

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #466 on: August 24, 2012, 01:05:01 AM »
Didn't this story start before TD was out? We may well see some of them, but unless Rou made some changes to his plans, I don't think we'll see a siren among that crew.

That said, I'd love to see Kyokou as a siren.

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #467 on: August 27, 2012, 11:36:01 AM »
I stayed up until 5:31 am reading this-- or rather, re-reading it from the beginning and picking up where I left off. Time well spent, I say.

This is the sort of mahou shoujo story I would run home from school to watch every day, because of how absorbing the storytelling is. In particular I love the intricacies of your plots and how you play with canon and weave these complex tales that are so much fun to unravel. Keep up the fantastic work so far. :)

Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #468 on: August 27, 2012, 12:12:04 PM »
make this into an anime

or a comic


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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #469 on: August 27, 2012, 02:55:55 PM »
make this into an anime

or a comic
If I had the time, and the money, and the focus, and the energy, and the ability, and ZUN's permission, I would be doing this.

Anyway, I'm going to be away for the most of the week, so enjoy your early update!

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?This is not what I signed up for.?

Komachi scratched her head as she looked up at the overpowering decor of the Myouren Institute. Every wall and window was plastered with tacky motivational messages and posters. Most had the Institute?s logo - a wooden ship taking ?The Voyage To Enlightenment? - in the corner. None of them were remotely original.

?Sorry, Komachi-san.? Koishi reached up and put a hand on Komachi?s shoulder for support. ?But neither of us are old enough to really be involved with adoption, so...?

?Yeah, yeah. Pick on the old lady, why don?t ya?? Komachi?s eyes were locked on the floor, refusing to take another look at the nonsense staining the walls. ?Who knows? Maybe the break?ll do me some good. Sumire said I needed to step away from the case for a bit, anyway.?

With a hung head and a pale face, the lawyer stumbled towards the front entrance. Koishi and Sango followed behind, holding hands and doing their best to act like siblings. Sharing a hair colour helped a lot on that front.

They were only a few steps into the room when they heard the shout.

?GOOD MORNING!?

Komachi almost fell over as a young girl screamed into her ear. She twirled about as if she?d been attacked, raising a fist.

?You little-? Koishi saw the first syllable of a profanity form on Komachi?s lips. The girl looked terrified, clutching her broom to shield herself. A second later, Komachi remembered the role she was meant to play.

?...angel. Little angel.? She reached out and gave the girl a little pat on the head. The child stared up at the hand in wonder before nuzzling at it like a cat.

?Little angel! Kyouko-chan?s an angel!? she said to herself. Komachi gave her companions another glare when the girl wasn?t looking.

?Oh, someone?s here?? At the sound of the girl?s yelling, an older woman stepped out of a side corridor. She had a cell phone to her ear, which she was constantly speaking into. ?Look, Unzan, I need to hang up on you right now. ...No, it?s a visitor. That?s my job, remember?? She grabbed at her pale brown hair, tucked beneath the hood of her jacket. ?No, I can?t put you on hold. I?m paying for this call, and I?m not going to-well, fine! YOU hang up!?

She pocketed the cell phone, taking a deep breath before approaching the trio of newcomers. ?Sorry about that. My boyfriend is...dense.? She bowed towards Komachi, quickly deciding she was the senior member of the group. ?My name is Ichirin. I?m the receptionist of the Myouren Institute. Is there anything I can help you with??

Komachi smiled, probably at the sight of someone her own size. ?Well, I heard ya had an adoption system around here, and I wanted to take a look around.? She wrapped her arms around Koishi and Sango, pulling them in as tightly as she could. ?My two girls were asking me about getting a little sister, and I felt our house needed a few more heads, if y?know what I mean.?

Koishi would have been impressed by Komachi?s acting if she wasn?t having the life squeezed out of her by her ?embrace?. Komachi let go just in time to avoid breaking something.

?Ah, so you want to meet the children?? Ichirin nodded, giving the broom-holder another pat on the head. ?Kyouko-chan, go to your room, okay??

Kyouko offered Ichirin a salute. ?Yes, ma?am!? She scurried off down the corridor, taking her broom with her. Ichirin sighed as she watched her go.

?I apologise if she was difficult. Some of our children are a little unruly. We try to cultivate mindfulness in them, but there?s only so far we can help someone who doesn?t want our help.? Her expression sank as she put her hands in her pockets. Was she thinking of someone in particular? ?Anyway, if you want to look around the premises, you?ll need to be supervised by a senior official. I think Hijiri-san is free right now, actually...?

She pulled out her phone again, hammering in another number and putting it to her ear. ?Hi, Hijiri-san? There?s a woman here who?s considering an adoption, and she wants to take a look around. ...OK, that?s great. Thanks.? She closed the phone over. ?She?ll be here in a few minutes, so if you could just take a seat?? She motioned to a corner of the room flooded with chairs. Komachi nodded, motioning for her ?kids? to sit alongside her.

?Now, if you?ll excuse me, I?ll-? Ichirin?s departure was interrupted by her phone ringing again. She looked at the caller ID with a groan before putting it back to her ear. ?Unzan, it?s been two minutes. Of course I?m still busy.? Koishi heard her muttering to her boyfriend all the way down the corridor until she was out of sight.

?Strange girl,? Sango said. Koishi shrugged. She?d seen a lot stranger in the last few months.

With the receptionist gone, Koishi had a chance to look around while they waited on Byakuren. It turned out not to be worth the effort, as once again the walls were plastered with ?YOU CAN DO ANYTHING? and ?REACH FOR THE STARS?. It was well-intended, undoubtedly, but even Koishi had to admit it was rather corny.

A few minutes later, footsteps echoed down the corridor, and the director of the Institute stepped in.

?Good morning! I assume you?re the prospective parent I was hearing about?? She bowed towards Komachi. ?I?m Byakuren Hijiri. It?s a pleasure to meet you.?

Byakuren was the sort of woman that definitely left an impression. Her light brown hair bounced about as if it had a life of its own, and she swirled her hands about in all directions as she spoke. She smiled perpetually, and never seemed quite capable of standing still. Koishi worried that the woman would burst out of her skin if she didn?t calm down.

?I?d like to say before anything else that you?re doing a great thing.? Byakuren took Komachi?s hands and looked into her eyes. ?These kids need love and affection desperately, and while the Institute does its best we can?t fill in for a real parental figure. There aren?t enough of us to go around, sadly, so it?s people like you that deserve the real praise.?

Komachi visibly shivered. It had to be hard to receive praise like that when she had no intention of actually adopting anyone. That said, if they did find a Siren here, they?d have to arrange some sort of housing for her. Koishi figured the professor would have a plan ready for that.

?Anyway, would you like me to show you around?? Byakuren stepped back into the corridor, beckoning Komachi in with one finger. ?You can bring your little girls in too, if you?d like.?

Komachi stepped out of the chair and followed, with Koishi and Sango right behind her. They passed through a few more corridors of cliches and business mottos before the decor shifted away from tacky posters into a much more subdued wooden framework. The posters grew less and less common until there was almost nothing to differentiate one wall from another. The change made Koishi even less willing to look around.

?Bit bleak in here,? Komachi said to break the awkward silence that ensued. ?Where did all the confidence boosters go??

?We don?t do much in the way of decoration,? Byakuren answered, still beaming. ?We have to give off a very different outlook for the outside world - they think we?re a little box of sunshine and rainbows.?

?Then what are you??

?We?re something much greater than that. Look at all the children nowadays who are told how special and valuable they are. Where does it lead them? More often than not, into a life of misery and mediocrity.? Byakuren spoke with the quiet confidence of faith. ?We believe it?s best that children truly understand the way of life. We teach them Buddhist practices, offer an education system, and generally try to cultivate mindfulness. Many of our children go on to take up the cloth at a local monastery, but some are taken in by loving families like your own.?

It was a nice idea on paper, but something about it rubbed Koishi the wrong way. She kept the feeling to herself - after all, that Kyouko girl had seemed rather happy. Maybe she was just being judgmental.

?Right! I?ll give you a few minutes with each of the kids.? Byakuren turned into a corridor with a dozen doors at each side, each with a little name plate above the doorknob. ?They?re all lovely, really. You?ll get on great with them.?

Sure enough, the boys and girls of the Institute were well-mannered children all around. None of them were older than twelve or thirteen, and each of them had the same bright smile as Byakuren. Many of them spoke highly of Byakuren for being a wonderful teacher, and the Institute in general for being a great place to be brought up. They ranged from shy to proud and from calm to energetic, but a couple stood out among the rest. Kyouko, the girl from earlier, could recite Buddhist sutras with her eyes closed, and took great pride in that fact. Another girl seemed convinced she was a navy captain and refused to eat anything other than curry rice at dinner time.

As eye-opening as the experience was, the team didn?t find what they were looking for. The blonde-haired Siren was nowhere to be found. There wasn?t even anyone close to her age.

Koishi sighed to herself. And the lead had looked so promising, too.

?Well, that?s everyone,? Byakuren said as she led the trio out of the last room. ?Did anyone catch your eye??

Komachi pulled a straight face. ?I?ll have to think about it. They?re all great kids, though...if you ask me, most of ?em don?t look like they really wanna leave. You mighta done too good a job there.?

?Is that a compliment?? Byakuren brushed it off with a small giggle. ?I made a point of teaching them that they couldn?t stay here forever. One day, they?ll all have to-?

She stopped mid-sentence as her head jerked about. ?Ah-!? She stepped to the side, her smile suddenly looking much less genuine. ?A-Anyway, I?m hoping that you choose to spend some more time with our girls and-hyaah!? she stopped again as something scurried between her legs. By the time Koishi noticed it, it was already behind her.

Turning around, Koishi saw a mouse running down the hallway. It cut a strangely-precise path down the corridor, and seemed too well-groomed to be feral - but none of the kids they?d met kept any pets at all. It was curious enough that Koishi couldn?t help but follow after it.

?Where are you going?!? Byakuren yelled from behind, her cheer forgotten. ?That area?s not open to visitors!?

Koishi ignored her. Somewhere in her gut a voice told her this was the way to go. It was like Alice and the white rabbit, though a great deal less hygienic. She found it easy to keep up with the mouse as it took her far away from the kids? living quarters, into a whole new area of the Institute.

The mouse turned into another corridor of bedrooms, but this one was almost uninhabited. Most of the doors had no nameplate, and some hung open to show empty rooms. The animal ran to the end of the corridor, slinking into a hole at the bottom of the last door and creeping inside. The name ?SHOU? was written in big bold letters above the doorknob.

Found you. Koishi felt a surge of accomplishment charge through her. Sango was the first to catch up, her youkai physique winning out over the two humans.

?Eh?? Sango stared in astonishment at the nameplate. ?There?s another one??

Koishi didn?t answer. She just motioned towards the door. Sango took that as her cue to make her usual check.

?Uh...phwee!?

It only took a second for the echo to return to the dolphin. She jerked upright and nodded.

Just as Koishi had suspected.

?Wait, don?t-? Byakuren called out from the other side of the corridor, but as she saw Koishi standing in front of the door her vigor faded away. Komachi followed behind, looking unwilling to add physical exertion to her list of duties today.

?Uh, Hijiri-san?? Koishi said as she pointed at the door. ?I think you forgot about someone.?

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?...I see.?

Byakuren?s expression went sour as she came up to Koishi. She stared at the door with and trembled, looking ready to run at any moment. ?You should leave that girl alone.?

?Huh?? Komachi glowered at Byakuren. ?What?s that supposed to mean? You?re not playin? favourites, are ya??

?Shou is...I?d like to say she?s a work in progress, but it?d be more accurate to say she?s the Institute?s greatest failure.? The director sighed. ?We took her in when she was barely old enough to walk, and she?s gone nowhere since then. She?s never been willing to go along with her elders, and I think she?s been sneaking out and getting into fights. I?ve called in every professional I can to examine her, but all I hear are darker and darker diagnoses. If we can?t help her, what sort of damage could she do to an actual family??

Koishi?s brow furrowed. Something about Byakuren?s argument sounded off. Did she not know about all the work Shou had been doing around the city? Her despair sounded genuine enough, but why would Shou lie about something like that?

?Hijiri-san...is it okay if we talk to her?? Koishi clasped her hands together and bowed her head. ?Just for a few minutes, that?s all.?

Byakuren raised an eyebrow. ?Why would you insist on working with a problem child? Honestly, you should leave her to us-?

?Please!? Koishi couldn?t hide her desperation. She couldn?t rely on Sango running into Shou by chance again. This was their best chance to make real contact with the Siren.

Byakuren sank into contemplation for a few seconds. Eventually, she nodded. ?Very well. I?ll make myself scarce, then. Let me know if she does anything unruly.? She moved further down the corridor to give the ?family? some distance.

Koishi cracked her neck. She probably wouldn?t have long, so she?d have to make a good first impression. She took a deep breath as she knocked on the door.

?Yeah, I heard all of that,? said the voice on the other side. ?Come in already.?

Koishi frowned. That wasn?t the best start. She was slow and gentle as she pulled the door open.

Shou?s room was in a whole other league from the rest of the institute. For one, she had the gall to put a poster up on her wall, an old pinup from The Gate To Makai. The lead singer winked as she gave the camera a nice angle on her chest. A guitar sat in the corner of the room gathering dust, and a pile of dirty clothing was building up in front of the wardrobe. Koishi could see plenty of tank-tops, vests, skirts, and other outfits you wouldn?t imagine on a Buddhist monk.

Shou herself was sitting on the bed, tending to the cage on the nearby chest of drawers. She carefully nudged her mouse through the doorway before closing the latch. The mouse glowered at her.

?Sorry, Nazrin, but I really don?t get a lot of visitors. Be good, okay??

The mouse, unsurprisingly, didn?t respond. It walked off into a corner of its cage and munched at a food pellet. That was sufficiently good behaviour for Shou.

?Anyway, who are you to be so interested in-? As Shou turned towards the door, her eyes locked on Sango immediately. The penny dropped. ?Huh. This is a first.?

Sango waved as she followed Koishi inside. ?Hi! Sorry we didn?t call in advance or anything, but you?re a really hard girl to find.?

Shou fell backwards onto the bed. ?Well, grandma tells me not to bring anyone home with me, so my hands are tied there.?

?Grandma??

?Byakuren-san, obviously.? She stuck her tongue out at Sango. ?Have you seen that woman? She?s like fifty or something, but she does everything she can to hide it. Besides, by now she?s the closest thing to a grandma I have.?

She seemed bright enough, if maybe a bit unruly for her surroundings. Perhaps this wouldn?t be so hard.

Koishi took a seat next to Shou on the bed. ?Uh, Shou-san...is it okay if we ask you a few questions about where you?ve been recently??

She?d chosen her words poorly. The girl tensed. ?Oh, for the love of-you?re one of those counselors, are you? Jeez, I told her I was sick of you people trying to fix me.? Shou rolled about on the bed, growling as if she was ready to roar. ?No, I don?t have abandonment issues, and no, I?m not acting for the attention of some absent father figure. I?ve heard all of these theories before, and I?m sick of ?em.?

The burst of aggression caught Koishi off guard. She shuffled down the bed slightly to move a few inches away.

?I?m not a counselor,? she said. ?I just want to get to know you.?

Shou rolled her eyes. ?Yeah, that?s what they all say. They talk to me for an hour, they smile and nod a lot, and then they go tell grandma I?m messed up in the head. Which of course means they want her to fork out for another set of ?therapy? sessions...?

She sat up, looking towards Nazrin rather than her guests. ?Anyway, I know how you guys work. You just take everything I say and bend it so it means what you want it to. I?m not playing along with your crap anymore, alright??

The mouse seemed to share in her frustration, pressing against the walls of the cage and hissing at Koishi. The Siren gulped.

?Look, Shou-san...? She thought for a moment, trying to find a lighter way to open Shou up. She looked for something heartfelt that wouldn?t be misinterpreted, that?d win the new Siren over without falling prey to suspicion.

Nothing came to her. Whatever Shou had been through, it had left her without any semblance of trust. There were no words that could bridge the gap between them.

Then again, there is that thing they say about words and actions.

Koishi nodded to Sango. The dolphin nodded back and closed the door behind her. Komachi looked out of the loop as Sango motioned for her to step away.

Time to skip the pleasantries.

?Shou-san, I want to show you something.? Koishi reached into the usual pocket and pulled out her Teardrop. She held it out on her palm and showed it to Shou.

?Eh? This isn?t bribery, is it?? Shou looked even more disgusted by the idea, sticking up her nose at it.

Koishi grinned. This was her favourite part. She squeezed the Teardrop and began to chant.

?Wherever evil forces be,
On the land or in the sea,
All who sin should cower and flee
From Dolphin Rider Koishi!?


Shou just about fell off of the bed in awe as Koishi transformed right before her eyes. Even the mouse cowered into the back of its cage at the sight of her. She added a little twirl of her trident for effect, winking at Shou as she took on her Siren form.

Her pride was deflated rapidly when Shou started to laugh.

?Ah...hahahaa!? Shou pointed with one hand, covering her eyes with the other. ?Holy shit, really? Did you walk out of some little girl?s colouring book? You look like you?re seven years old!?

Koishi wanted to bop her over the head, but she resisted the urge. She settled for tapping the bottom of the trident against the floor with a satisfying thump.

?Shou-san, we have a reason to believe you?re part of something very important. You might be...well, one of us.?

This time Shou had no witty comeback. She stood in silence, looking up and down Koishi?s body for a moment.

?...You?re serious, aren?t you?? Shou sounded like she was expecting a punchline any minute now. Koishi looked back at her without a hint of humour.

Finally, Shou asked the most important question of all. ?Do I have to wear something as corny as that??

?Probably not,? Komachi interjected. Koishi smacked her trident against the floor again.

?Then you?ve got my interest. Even if you?re making this all up, it sounds like a fun way to waste my afternoon.? Shou jumped to her feet, cracking her neck as she did. ?But, uh, can we talk about this later? Grandma will probably kick you out in a few minutes if you?re not one of those ?professionals?.?

?Sounds good.? Koishi put a hand over the Teardrop on her chest, and the transformation played out again in reverse. Within seconds she was back to being an everyday high-schooler. ?I figure you?re going to sneak out again??

?Whatever gave you that idea?? Shou said with a smirk. ?Grandma doesn?t try to stop me anymore, so I can meet you wherever.?

?How does Lorelei?s at noon sound??

Shou patted at her stomach. ?Great, as long as you?re paying for it.?

?It?s a date, then.? Koishi bowed. ?And, um...thanks for hearing us out.?

Shou rubbed at her nose. ?Hey, don?t mention it. Looking at your crummy getup has already made my morning.?

Deep breaths, Koishi. Deep breaths.

The trio shuffled out of the room, with Koishi being the last to leave. All in all, it had gone as well as she could have asked for. She could only hope that Shou would be receptive and willing to take on the role of a Siren.

And yet, as she stepped out into the corridor, she couldn?t help but feel two tiny eyes glaring at her.

-----

?So how was she??

Byakuren jumped to Komachi?s side as they turned out of the corridor. The lawyer grumbled out a response.

?She seemed okay enough. Rebellious, maybe, but lively.?

Byakuren frowned. If Shou had been telling the truth, the director probably had a very different view of her. They may as well have been discussing two different people.

?Anyway, I hope you?re satisfied now.? Byakuren made sure to work a smile back onto her face as she led the ?family? to the door. ?Get in touch with us if you make a decision, alright??

It was hard to keep a straight face as she lied, but her time in court had given Komachi plenty of practice. ?Sure thing. Thanks for the tour.?

Byakuren gave them one final wave before returning to her duties. Komachi led her supposed children out of the Institute, never looking back for fear of seeing those goddamn posters again. It took a block?s distance for her to muster up the courage to turn around.

?So what the hell was that?? she said to Koishi. ?I thought we were meant to be subtle about this stuff.?

Koishi answered with a surprising amount of confidence. ?She?s a Siren, isn?t she? We?ve got no reason to hide it from her, and it?s not like she?s going to tell anyone.?

That...made a decent amount of sense. If Shou was sick of being psychoanalysed, the last thing she?d want is to mention something that would really make her look crazy. Maybe Koishi was better at planning this stuff than Komachi gave her credit for.

?Anyway, what?s our next move?? Komachi asked. ?Are we just gonna wait on her like we said, or are we doing some snooping??

Koishi shook her head. ?We?re sticking to the straight and narrow, Komachi-san. The surveillance is their job.?

She pointed across the road at a nearby van, proclaiming itself to belong to Riverfort Carpenters. On her cue, the back grate was pulled up, and three figures in blue jumpsuits stepped out from within.

?Morning.? Mokou gave Koishi a quick wave as she stepped out of the van. She carried a roll of carpet beneath one arm to give the illusion of actually working. Behind her, Sakuya and Youmu were chattering like schoolgirls.

?I told you, I?m not doing it again,? Youmu said. ?Once was bad enough, alright??

Sakuya prodded her sister?s shoulder. ?All I?m asking is that you act more like a woman. I?m still wrapping my head around the whole ?sister? thing, and your habit of dressing as a man is getting me confused.?

Youmu began to blush. ?It?s embarrassing! I feel so vulnerable in a skir-? She was stopped mid-sentence when she walked into Mokou?s back. ?Oof!?

Koishi craned her head around to see the swordsman. ?Youmu-san? I thought you were busy today.?

Youmu stepped out from behind Mokou, rubbing at her nose and pulling her cap down over her face. ?Mother is away for a few days. She?s meeting the shareholders to explain her absence. She?s been looking a lot brighter recently, so hopefully she?ll maintain their trust.?

As the conversation drifted to Yuyuko, Komachi noticed Sakuya?s eyes growing distant, like she?d mentally stepped out of the conversation. She gave the maid a little nudge to restore her focus.

?You guys know your side of the operation, right?? Koishi asked.

?You betcha,? Mokou answered.

?We?re to watch out for any questionable goings on in the Institute,? Sakuya said.

?And if the Claw catches on, it?s our duty to make sure no-one gets hurt,? Youmu chimed in.

Koishi nodded along in acceptance. ?Alright, I?m counting on you three. Let me know if anything comes up.?

The three Sirens nodded back, doing their best to look official as they stepped towards the Institute. They had all the paperwork to prove they were there for a carpeting job. Whether or not anyone in the Institute had actually wanted a carpeting job was a matter of little concern, as long as no-one asked too many questions.

Komachi gave Koishi a pat on the back. ?You handled that pretty well.?

?Eh?? Koishi looked up at her, puzzled.

?Just sayin? that I didn?t think of you as the sort to lead when I met ya.?

Koishi smiled weakly as she brushed away Komachi?s hand. ?Well, there?s a lot riding on me being a good leader. I can?t let all those people down, can I??

She acted humble, but there was a grain of pride in her smile. Komachi wondered what sort of woman Koishi would become with a few more years of growth.

?So are we going, or what?? Sango asked, rubbing at her stomach. ?There?s a grilled mackerel with my name on it.?

?Sango-san, it?s eleven,? Koishi replied. ?We?ll be half an hour early if we show up now.?

?I can eat two helpings. What?s your point??

Komachi felt a smirk rise to her face. Their banter these two shared made her feel a few years younger than she really was. And as gluttonous as she was being about it, Sango had a point. It was worth showing up early, just in case-

?Ah.?

Komachi never finished that thought. Her eyes happened to stop on someone walking down the other side of the road, passing one broken-down shrine after another. She recognised that crimson suit, that perfectly-preened brown hair, and that casual gait that seemed out of place alongside both of them.

Reimu Hakurei. Morichika?s defense attorney.

Hakurei was a source Komachi had been trying to get her hands on for weeks, but she?d been unusually hard to find. She was rarely at her place of residence, and even when she was around she made a point of not answering calls.

?...Hey. You two go on ahead.?

Komachi let Hakurei walk on for a bit before she started to follow her. She kept to the other side of the road, hoping that Reimu wouldn?t remember her face.

?Komachi-san? Where are you going?? Koishi asked.

She shouldn?t have followed. Sumire told her to step away from the case for some clarity. But right now she didn?t give a damn what Sumire thought. This chance wasn?t going to come up again.

?I?ve got business. You two can deal with the kid, right??

Koishi looked ready to complain, but she caught the glint of determination in Komachi?s eyes. She gave up on resisting soon afterwards.

?Well, if it?s that important to you, Sango-san and I will be fine on our own.?

?Here?s hopin?.? Komachi gave her another pat on the back. ?Knock her dead for me, alright??

Koishi returned a weak nod. Sango began tugging at her arm in the direction of Lorelei?s, and Koishi let the dolphin pull her along. Komachi turned the other direction, towards the slowly-shrinking figure of Reimu Hakurei.

You never struck me as the pious sort. What are you doing out here?

Reimu was surprisingly easy to follow. The woman made no attempt to look backwards. In fact, she was barely paying attention to what was in front of her. She sauntered down the street without a care, barely avoiding a collision with a passerby on more than one occasion.

Komachi let herself relax, simply matching Reimu?s pace from a safe distance. The attorney cut a straight path down the street. Now and then she?d look at a broken-down shrine and let out a sigh so loud that Komachi could hear it from almost a block away. Many of the smaller institutions had come apart in the last few years, for reasons Komachi had never bothered to read up on.

At last Reimu turned to the side, walking up a staircase hidden between two of the fallen shrines. It ran up the length of a small hill, and Reimu?s steps echoed through the block as she climbed upwards. Komachi gave her more distance just in case, before following behind her with the quietest steps she could manage.

It took her two minutes to climb the staircase, and she had to lean on the shrine?s torii gate for support. At the top of the hill was the largest shrine of them all, though it was still no larger than an ordinary household. Maybe at some point the smaller shrines had been built around it; now it was a shadow of its former self, with the roof caving in and the walls looking brittle. As Komachi stepped through the courtyard she worried her footsteps would be heavy enough to bring the whole shrine down.

In spite of the disrepair, it wasn?t abandoned. Komachi noted the orderly piles of leaves on both sides of the courtyard. This place had been tended to recently. Reimu herself was nowhere to be seen, though the front door of the shrine hung slightly ajar. A donation box sat in front of the door. Peering down into it Komachi saw nothing more valuable than a 50-yen coin, and even that was gathering dust.

Must be hard to make a living like that.

Still, why would Reimu come all the way out here? Maybe she had affairs with the local shrine maiden. Unable to contain her curiosity, Komachi cautiously pulled the door open and let herself in.

She found Reimu?s shoes at the door, with her suit lying on the floor a few paces further in. Her pants lay a few steps further again, as if Reimu had been undressing herself as she went. Komachi was suddenly much less comfortable with her intrusion. She was about to step out when the voice echoed from across the hall.

?Come in, Komachi-san.?

So she had been paying attention. Komachi sighed. She could hardly leave now. After taking her shoes off she stepped into the shrine properly, tip-toeing around the fallen clothes as she followed the voice. It led her to a small sitting room, with a kotatsu barely large enough for two people.

Already seated at the kotatsu was Reimu Hakurei. She had changed into the garb of a shrine maiden, mostly a bright red with white sleeves detached from the rest of the outfit. She was sipping at a cup of green tea, with another sitting on the other side of the table. She looked up at Komachi, beckoning her to sit down with one hand. Komachi complied, the floor creaking with a painful whine.

?You were the last person I expected to find me,? Reimu said. She seemed like another woman now, Komachi thought to herself. There was a calmness, a solemnity that she?d never had before. It almost made Komachi forget about Reimu?s questionable reputation.

Almost, but not entirely.

?I?ve gotta admit, it?s pretty clever,? Komachi said as she picked up her own cup. She wasn?t a big fan of green tea, but she could force it down. ?I?d never think you?d use some old shrine as a hideaway.?

?It?s not a hideaway. I live here. I just keep it to myself because my clients might find me too eccentric.?

Komachi almost spilled her drink down her chest. Reimu?s face didn?t shift in the slightest. Either she was the best liar Komachi had ever met, or she actually was telling the truth. The girl had seemed awfully straightforward up until now, so Komachi doubted it was the former.

?A defense attorney...and a shrine maiden? That?s a strange set of jobs to be juggling.?

?I didn?t have much say in it.? Reimu?s voice held a faint trace of scorn. ?My family were very insistent that I make something of myself outside of the faith. Law was the most obvious option, I guess.?

Komachi rolled her eyes. ?I?m not much of a believer, but I don?t think the Shinto faith approves of getting criminals out of their convictions.?

The accusation flew straight over Reimu?s head. She finished her tea, placing the cup on the kotatsu with a sigh.

?Komachi-san, how much do you think it costs to maintain a shrine of this size??

The question came out of nowhere. Komachi thought for a moment, but before she could answer Reimu continued.

?The Hakurei Shrine has been passed from generation to generation for the last three-hundred years. Sadly, it wasn?t built to survive that long, and as you?ve probably noticed the place is starting to come apart. The repairs are costly, and the rent keeps getting higher. That?s thanks to the local councils pushing for it to be declared a ?cultural heritage? - which means they?re going to kick me out of the home my family?s owned for centuries.?

She wasn?t angry - at least, she didn?t sound angry. It was hard to make out any sort of emotion at all from Reimu. Perhaps her anger on the matter was already spent.

?If we?d been getting the usual stream of donations, things would be easier. But I?m assuming you saw the donation box on the way in. Ever since the Myouren Institute came into the public eye, the flow of power has gradually shifted from us to them. There used to be dozens of active shrines in this area, each praying to their own native god. Now the Hakurei Shrine is all that?s left.?

Was this meant to be a sob story? If so, Komachi was unimpressed. She left her tea on the kotatsu, unfinished.

?I?m missin? something here. You needed money, I get that much. But why does that mean you have to work with assholes by default??

Reimu snorted. Maybe she was forcing back a laugh, or maybe she was concealing her disdain. It was hard to tell.

?Plenty of reasons. One, they?re returning customers. These folks get in trouble more often than your average do-gooder. That means more work for me, and they?re usually willing to pay extra if I make the most of my skills. Two...? Now Reimu let a frown slide onto her face. ?Well, I have a very specific skill set.?

?And what?s that?? Komachi wasn?t sure why she asked. She already knew what Reimu?s specialty was.

?Well, when it came to law school, I wasn?t the most...studious of applicants. I scraped out of the bar exam by the skin of my teeth, and I?m honestly not the best when it comes to a coherent case. What I could do, though, was find the loopholes and get-out clauses in legislation. It?s not the nicest job, but it pays better than the alternatives.? She looked up at a hole in the roof where the tiling was starting to come apart. ?And right now, good pay overrides everything else.?

Komachi was torn. She couldn?t condone Reimu?s actions, but in a way she could sort of understand. This shrine had been everything to her family, and she was holding onto it in the only way she could.

Komachi remembered another woman who had gone against the law for the sake of what was important to her. She almost cringed at the irony.

?So, once again, I don?t have a choice in it,? Reimu said. She stared down into the empty cup in front of her. ?I?d like to be the good guy, but when good doesn?t pay well enough you have to go with what you can get, don?t you??

There was silence for almost a minute. Reimu didn?t look up, and Komachi didn?t look away. Eventually it was the shrine maiden who broke the silence.

?Now what do you want? I assume you came here for a reason beyond listening to my life story. Looking to sell me out to a gossip rag, perhaps??

Komachi wasn?t sure what to say. She?d been planning to grill Reimu on Morichika, in the most aggressive manner she could think of. Now she?d seen some context, going for an all-out assault seemed almost too much.

But that didn?t mean she was going to give up.

?Reimu-san, I need you to tell me everything you know about Rinnosuke Morichika.?

Reimu blinked. ?Really? You?re asking me to sell out one of my own clients?? She shook her head. ?I?m sorry, but I can?t help you. Secrecy is something my employers value highly. If they find out I?ve started playing fair, my business is going to dry up.?

?I don?t have to say I got it from you.? Komachi thought of the heaving pile of paperwork sitting back in her office. ?I?ve already got a dozen leads to work on, but I need someone to point out where to go. I can put you down as a protected source - with the rest of the case as strong as it is, we?ll probably get away with it.?

The shrine maiden didn?t answer. She traced along the tip of her cup with one finger as she looked to the side. Komachi could almost see the two possibilities bouncing about in her eyes. She had to push harder.

?Look, Reimu-san. You knew I was following you here, but you didn?t even try to lose me. If you really weren?t willing to help me you?d have at least tried to cover your tracks.?

Reimu gasped. It was the largest display of emotion she?d shown so far.

?I?m guessing you?re scared,? Komachi continued. ?If anyone found out about this, you wouldn?t just lose business; hell, I?m willing to bet there?d be people willing to kill you off in case you spill their secrets. I understand that. Of course it?s scary.?

Komachi slammed a fist into the kotatsu, shaking the cup at her side. ?But I?m giving you a chance here. You kept on saying that you never had a choice in anything. I?m giving you the choice right now. You can keep on doing what the men with money tell you to do, or you can go to bed tonight knowing that for the first time in years you chose to do the right thing.?

Reimu bit her lip. She tapped her fingers against the kotatsu, taking deep breaths as she weighed up the options in her mind. Komachi could only watch her think. She?d made her point.

Finally, the shrine maiden rose to her feet with a sigh.

?If this guy wasn?t the meanest son of a bitch I?ve ever met, I?d be shoving you out the door right now. Let me get you a pen and paper.?

Komachi felt the unease seep out of her system. She picked up her cup again, finishing what was left of her tea. It was bitter as hell, but as she swallowed the last drop she couldn?t help but feel like the victor.

?You might wanna get a few sheets while you?re at it. I get the feeling you?ve got a lot to tell me.?

Esifex

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #470 on: August 27, 2012, 07:01:20 PM »
rou y u so good ;-;

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #471 on: August 27, 2012, 07:08:36 PM »
So many "YES" moments in this one.
Quote from: =D
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #472 on: August 27, 2012, 10:36:50 PM »
Quote from: Ichirin Kumoi
"Sorry about that. My boyfriend is...
Quote from: Ichirin Kumoi
"...dense.”

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #473 on: August 27, 2012, 11:21:58 PM »
Friggin' Buddhists, taking all the faith.

Does that mean Sanae is in a similar position?

Holy cow pun intended if you want it to be, I just realized this might happen.
Spoiler:
What if Sanae is mindcoiled into attacking Shou for stealing the faith/donations from the Moriya shrine?
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #474 on: August 28, 2012, 02:14:03 AM »
Quote from: Reimu
Well, I have a very specific skill set.

The first thing that came to my mind was Taken.

I really want to put up other words in this post and see if there's anything to improve on, but I can't. :fail: Not unless there's something you yourself would point out, Rou.

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #475 on: September 02, 2012, 09:41:31 PM »
Things are looking pretty direct here. All they have to do is meet up with Shou, and Komachi is getting her information on Rinnosuke from Reimu.


Those things happening makes me feel something is gonna happen. Something that would complicate matters I guess


Anyway another great chapter. I doubt there's anything else to improve on here. The writing quality here is high
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #476 on: September 05, 2012, 11:04:32 AM »
Sango was true to her word. Even as she picked the last few traces of mackerel off of her plate, Koishi could hear her stomach rumble in anticipation of its second helping. The dolphin wiped at her face with her sleeve.

?It really is a good thing I got my wallet back, or else I?d never be able to treat myself like this.? She sat up in her chair, raising an arm to get the attention of the staff. ?Hey, can I get a-?

?No, Sango-san.? Koishi sighed. ?At least wait until Shou-san gets here, alright??

Sango hesitated, her arm hanging in place for a moment. With a pout, she pulled it back down to her side. ?Spoilsport.?

Koishi smiled. ?You?ll get fat if you eat too much. I thought dolphins were meant to be aerodynamic??

The dolphin had no answer to that. She just glared at Koishi, her eyes turning to the door every so often. They?d taken a table in the far corner of Lorelei?s, well away from the rest of the patrons. No-one would hear their discussion too clearly, and it was as close to privacy as they could hope to manage.

Koishi was starting to worry Shou would never arrive when the front door jingled. The Siren stumbled through the doorway, her expression pale. She?d hastily changed into a black tank-top and matching pants, and two spiked bracelets hung to her wrists. She was still trying to fix her hair as she tip-toed around the tables towards the back.

?Uh, hey.? She gave Koishi a thumbs up as she seated herself across from her. She looked around the room, biting her lip. ?Question. Did you slip me something, or did everyone?s hair just go technicolour??

?Oh, right,? Koishi said. She?d forgotten to warn Shou about the changes accepting magic would have on her. She pulled out a pair of glasses and slipped them across the table. ?Wear these.?

Shou raised an eyebrow. ?Won?t I look really nerdy in glasses??

?There are contact lenses, but I didn?t have any on short notice.?

Shou begrudgingly picked up the glasses and slipped them on. She sighed with relief as the blue and pink hues in the crowd gave way to the typical brown and black.

?Sorry I took so long to get here. I spent ten minutes asking Grandma why she?d dyed her hair purple.? She let out a stilted laugh. ?Bet she thinks I?m even crazier now.?

Koishi did her best to smile back. She took care not to push too quickly - pressing too hard could cause Shou to close herself off. It was best to gradually move towards the serious matters, she decided.

The usual waitress came to take their order. She?d made a point of emphasising her femininity since their misunderstanding, Koishi noticed - the pants had been replaced with a long skirt, and her hair was tied into a neat ponytail. She seemed uncomfortable in the new getup, walking clumsily in high-heels that didn?t really fit her.

?I?ll have the Jumbo Ocean Feast,? Shou declared with a regal grin. She pointed to the picture on the menu, next to a price tag with too many zeroes for Koishi?s liking. Sango almost jolted out of her chair.

?What? Koishi-san never lets me have that!? She looked towards Koishi, then towards the waitress with a brilliant fire in her eyes. ?Make that two Jumbo Feasts. With all the sides!?

The waitress jotted down the order, looking unnerved in the presence of two almighty gluttons. She managed a small bow before scurrying off to the kitchen. Shou and Sango shared a knowing look with one another. Koishi kept the inevitable bill out of her mind as she looked towards the sixth Siren.

?I?m guessing you don?t eat out often.?

Shou beamed. ?Grandma makes me live on rice and gruel, and I can only afford to feed Nazrin on my allowance. I?d be here even if I thought you were talking crap as long as you were offering me a free meal.?

She picked up a nearby fork and started to twirl it around in her hand. She seemed perpetually amazed by her surroundings, like she?d stepped out of the wilderness into modern society for the first time. It was a simple pleasure that Koishi couldn?t quite relate to - the things that stunned Shou seemed utterly ordinary to her.

?So, let?s talk business.? Shou leaned forward in her chair, grinning like a child. ?Do we get cool powers? Is there a secret hideout? Do we have some sorta team catchphrase I have to learn??

Her sheer zeal stunned Koishi. The punkish outfit didn?t mesh well with this sort of enthusiasm. Shou seemed to realise the fact, pulling back and taking a deep breath.

?Sorry. The little kids watch the latest anime in the half hour of TV-time grandma gives us, and I sorta sneak in and watch it along with them. Would saying I was a fan make me a lot less cool in your eyes??

Koishi shook her head immediately. She?d reignited her passion for the genre ever since she?d become a Siren. There was no shame in having an interest like that.

?And to answer your question...? Koishi put a finger to her lips. ?It?s complicated. I?ll try to summarise it.?

She did her best to explain the situation to Shou in time for their meals to arrive. She explained the Sirens, why they existed, and what Shou had to do to become one. Shou took the whole thing with a surprisingly open mind - then again, the hair fiasco she?d gone through on the way here would have shattered any doubt she had left.

The meals arrived almost immediately after Koishi?s explanation had ended. It took two waiters to bring all of the food to the table, as two full-to-bursting dishes were laid in front of Shou and Sango. Their eyes lit up in sync, and they both started to dissect their meals without bothering with minor issues like swallowing. Koishi?s relatively modest plate followed behind, and she was much more careful and refined in her dining. She did her best to ignore the unpleasant looks her companions were getting.

Two minutes later, Shou pulled away from her meal long enough to start talking again. ?Sho Ib gaaha-? She flinched, swallowed, and started again. ?So I?ve got to grow up before I get my superpowers, basically??

Koishi nodded. ?Not quite as simple as that, but you?re close. You have to make a wish from the bottom of your heart, so it pretty much has to be something personal and powerful. Something lifechanging.?

Shou?s lips twisted. She placed her fork on the table, taking a swig from her glass of water. She looked up at the wallpaper with a sudden interest.

?Shou-san, can you tell me a bit about yourself?? Koishi reached over the table and put her hand on top of Shou?s. Shou looked back with surprise, but her face warmed up a few moments later. She took a deep breath before she started to speak.

?Well, there?s not much to say. I was a kid when I ended up at the Institute. Didn?t know my folks. Think they were a young family who couldn?t afford a kid, so they sent me somewhere I?d be able to live well. For the first few years it was great - I got on with everyone, and even grandma was on good terms with me.? She smiled, eyes glimmering with nostalgia. ?I couldn?t have asked for a better childhood, really. They taught me everything I know, and gave me a place to live. It was like a family and a school rolled into one.?

She leaned back in her chair again, staring at the ceiling. Her eyes followed a fan lazily twirling above her.

?When I was thirteen or so, things changed. We?d been learning sutras and mantras our whole lives as part of our education. I got the general idea - wanting stuff is bad, rejecting desire is good, blah blah blah - but it never really hit home with me. All the other kids were sold on it, and most of them are working as monks at the local monastery. But I just didn?t feel it, if you know what I mean.?

Koishi recalled the guitar gathering dust in Shou?s room, the rock poster peeling off her wall, the pile of vests and shirts dominating the floor space. None of it had any place in the Institute.

Maybe Shou didn?t have a place there either.

?Don?t get me wrong. I don?t hate grandma for what she does. I?d probably be out on the streets without her.? She scratched at her head, trying to scrape the words off her skull. ?But her course...it?s not for everyone. I never stepped foot outside of the Institute, other than the hour of exercise we got every day. I saw glimpses of the rest of Gensouto, but I never got to experience it for myself.?

Koishi tried to imagine that sort of life, longing for a world that was always just out of reach. It was a painful thought.

?So that?s why you started sneaking out?? she asked.

Shou nodded. ?I didn?t go far to start off. Just local shops and such. I thought I?d get away with it, but one day grandma saw me coming in the window. She started freaking out, thinking that I was getting wrapped up in gang warfare or something.? She grabbed at the fork again, her hand clamping at it as she bared her teeth. ?And of course, the men in the coats told her everything she didn?t want to hear, in the name of getting me some ?professional help?. I?ve been in and out of clinics ever since.?

Koishi felt a little hole open in her chest. She couldn?t imagine how many times Shou had tried to explain, only to be silenced by a man who apparently knew her better than she knew herself. Shou pulled a brave face.

?She didn?t try to stop me after that. I think she?s scared of me now. I couldn?t bear to be around her like that, so I started leaving more and more often. I tried to do what other kids my age did. I got into music, picked up a dirt-cheap guitar with the change I found lying around. And eventually, I met Naz.?

?You mean Nazrin, right?? Koishi asked.

?Yeah, that?s right. I bumped into her on one of my first trips out. I hadn?t really seen a mouse before - at least, not one that grandma didn?t call the exterminator on. I found her with her tail stuck in a door hinge.? She frowned, her eyes darkening. ?I couldn?t bear to leave her like that, but when I brought her back grandma said she?d just pass her diseases onto me. By that point, she?d found something to criticise about everything I did, so it didn?t mean much to me anymore.?

By now, Shou seemed like a totally different girl from the one who?d barged through the door. The life had been draining out of her with every word, to the point where her expression was almost devoid of emotion.

?It was just helping out to start, but after a few weeks I started getting attached to her. The more I looked after Naz, the more she reminded me of myself. We?re pretty similar, in a lot of ways.? She looked away in resignation. ?We?re both stuck in a cage at the end of the day.?

That was it, Koishi thought to herself. Shou was looking at the world beyond the Institute, desperately wanting to be a part of it. Until she was considered ?ready? she wouldn?t be allowed to leave, but to be ?ready? she?d have to kill off the urge to leave in the first place. It was a paradox.

All she wants is to be normal, Koishi thought to herself. She pondered for a moment to think of how she could help.

After some consideration, she found a lead to work with.

?Shou-san. Why did you save Nazrin again??

Shou blinked. ?Well...no reason, I guess. I just thought it was a shame to see an animal suffer like that.?

?That?s not what most people would do,? Koishi said. ?They?d think it wasn?t their problem, and they?d leave the animal to die.?

Shou stammered. ?Well-?

?Not just that,? Koishi continued. ?I know you?ve been helping out with all sorts of crimes you?ve been running into. Not just Sango-san-? Koishi pointed to the dolphin currently submerged in her food - ?but every crime you seem to have come across. Just one of those would have been brave, but to help out in dozens without even taking a reward...that takes something very special.?

The Siren began to blush. ?R-Really? It?s not really anything that big. I mean, it?s just doing what it takes to help people. That?s the least I should be doing, isn?t it??

Koishi shook her head. ?Shou-san, you?re a lot stronger than you give yourself credit for. Most girls your age would run away from a pickpocket, not try to hold him down.? She leaned forward over the table, touching Shou?s hand again. ?How old are you??

?Seventeen this year.?

?Then you should be old enough to live your own life.? She squeezed at Shou?s hand. ?If you want to see the world, you need to tell that to Byakuren-san. She?ll be concerned, but there?s nothing she can legally do to stop you. You can even live with me for a few months while you get things together. But you?ll have to take the first step.?

Shou had to feel strong enough to make her wish, Koishi thought to herself. There was no need to push her too hard when the Claw was nowhere to be found. The rest would be up to Shou, and whether she could find the strength to step away from the Institute.

It was a few seconds before Shou managed to smile. ?You know, none of the therapists ever told me that. They all said I had to stay in a safe environment for my own protection.?

?Maybe all you needed was a second opinion.? Koishi returned the smile as she pointed to Shou?s dish. ?By the way, isn?t that getting cold??

Shou looked down at her plate, flinching like she?d just remembered it existed. ?Oh, crap!? She went right back to eating, and if anything she was faster than she was before. Every bite seemed to fill her with glee, like she was swallowing pure ambrosia.

Koishi almost forgot that someone else had been sitting at the table.

?Uuu, Koishi-san...? Sango gulped down the last morsel of food on her plate, both hands rubbing at her stomach as it grumbled. ?Can I go to the little dolphin?s room??

Koishi had to keep herself from laughing. ?They don?t have one of those, but there?s a little girl?s room.?

?Yeah, that?ll do.? Sango rose to her feet, one hand over her mouth as she ran to the bathroom. Koishi watched her with a doting gaze before turning back to Shou.

?And that?s why you should stop to chew once in a while.?

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Mokou had struggled to build the nerve to snoop around the office. She?d done her fair share of investigations, but this was her first time actually poking around where she didn?t belong. It was Sakuya who?d managed to talk her into doing her job.

?What are the stories about this woman, anyway??

Mokou gulped as she skimmed through the cabinets, trying to commit as little personal information to memory as possible. Byakuren herself was away tending to the children, and she?d been unwise enough to leave her door unlocked. Sakuya refused to let them pass the chance up.

The office was immaculate, every file and folder in its proper place. Even the memos on the wall were sorted in alphabetical order. It was a neatness that verged on OCD - or perhaps it was doing its best to hide something.

?Kawashiro gave her a background check last night,? Sakuya said as she pulled out a desk drawer and skimmed its contents. ?Her life before the institute was quite colourful.?

?Colourful??

Sakuya nodded. ?Simple childhood, born into a middle-class family. She was fourteen when her older brother died in an accident, and it had a profound and catastrophic effect on her behaviour. She turned into a problem child almost overnight, with a history of thefts, assaults, and drug abuse. Apparently the professor found her criminal record to be rather unpleasant reading.?

Mokou furrowed her brow. ?And they let a woman with a history like that look after an orphanage??

?Well, it was thirty years ago. She was in prison for a few years in her late teens, and it seems that was where she found religion. She became a devout Buddhist, and since then she?s been working as a force of good in the local community.?

Sakuya grumbled out the last sentence as if it was a complaint. Mokou turned around, stopping the search for a moment.

?You don?t sound like you approve of that. What?s up??

Sakuya sighed. ?It?s too simple, if you ask me. I don?t like the idea that becoming a Buddhist magically fixed all of her problems.?

?Maybe it didn?t,? Mokou answered. ?Maybe she?s just learned how to bottle ?em up.?

The maid glared at Mokou for a moment, but she had no answer. She returned to her search, still looking frustrated at the lack of evidence they?d found on Byakuren so far.

Ten minutes later, they had searched the whole room to no avail. Mokou and Sakuya were careful to put everything back where it had been - any sort of change in the room?s layout could attract Byakuren?s attention.

?Are you finished?? Youmu asked from out in the corridor. She?d opted to stand guard for the pair as they looked around the room, but it turned out to be unnecessary. The corridors had been deathly quiet, like the whole building was abandoned.

?Yeah, we?re done.? Mokou stepped out of the room first, with Sakuya right behind her. They left the door barely open like they?d found it, heading deeper into the facility for any secrets Byakuren happened to be hiding.

?Please tell me you don?t make a habit of raiding people?s offices, Miyo,? Youmu said, glancing at her sister with disdain. There was no response.

Again, there was little to find. Not only was there nothing hidden or suspicious, but there was nothing of interest at all. At several points Mokou had to double-check she wasn?t walking through the same featureless corridor over and over again. It was like everything noteworthy or eye-catching had been deliberately torn from the walls.

The inner workings of the Institute were bland, almost featureless. There were corridors filled with living quarters, but every single child was locked away in total silence. Supposedly it was Introspection Hour, a time for all the children to reside in their rooms and ponder whatever sutra they?d been taught today.

?Sakuya-san, was your orphanage anything like this?? Mokou asked.

Sakuya shook her head. ?I was at the Shoutoku Foundation on the other side of the city. It was a lot more mainstream than this.? She bit her lip. ?To be honest, I?m glad I didn?t end up here. This atmosphere would have driven me mad.?

?Likewise,? Youmu added. She had taken Sakuya?s hand without Mokou even noticing. ?If Mother hadn?t taken me in, I?d have ended up here as well.? She tensed visibly. ?It seems...how do I word this...?

?Lifeless?? Mokou offered.

?No, not that.? Youmu put a hand on her chin. ?It seems too...serene.? She nodded in agreement with her own choice of words. ?These children should be more lively, more energetic, yet they lock themselves away in their rooms to meditate for most of the day. That doesn?t feel like the sort of lifestyle you should force on a child.?

Mokou nodded in agreement. She wouldn?t have lasted any longer than the other Sirens in this institute. She was the sort of girl who struggled to sit in place for half an hour. Meditation would have destroyed her. Being forced into that sort of routine for years was something she didn?t want to think about.

?I can?t deny there are good intentions, but-?

Mokou stopped mid-sentence. She looked about the corridor, finding no-one but her fellow Sirens.

?Mokou-san, what are you doing?? Youmu asked.

?Quiet.? Mokou held out a hand to silence Youmu, then cupped it around her ear. ?Do you hear that??

Youmu looked bewildered for a moment, but copied Mokou?s movements with Sakuya following suit. All three moved towards the wall on their right, the rear wall of the Institute.

Glug, glug, glug...

Something was being poured on the other side of the wall. Mokou heard the grinding sound of metal running across earth. She tried to peek out of a porthole, but the windows were too high and small to be of any use. All she could see was the small forest growing behind the Institute.

?The hell is going on out there?? Mokou said.

Sakuya gulped. That alone was enough to get Mokou worried.

?Let?s go,? the maid said. She darted down the corridor, back around towards the entrance. Mokou and Youmu followed behind her, easily keeping up with her pace.

By sheer bad luck, they ran into the one person still roaming the Institute at this hour.

?You three?? Byakuren?s mouth formed a tiny o as she saw the three carpenters running towards her. ?What?s got you in such a rush??

Crap. Mokou cursed beneath her breath. There were no words for how suspicious they looked right now. Sakuya was still leading the pack, so if anyone was going to be explaining it was her.

She didn?t, and instead she blazed past Byakuren like she wasn?t even there.

?H-Hey! What are you doing?!?

Byakuren stammered as the other two carpenters charged at her. Mokou broke to her left, while Youmu slipped to her right.

?Sorry! Official business!? Mokou yelled. It was a horrendous excuse, but it was all she could come up with on short notice. Moments later, Mokou heard Byakuren?s own footsteps move in tandem with their own.

?What was that for?? Mokou yelled to Sakuya as she caught up. ?Why didn?t you come up with something? We just totally blew our cover!?

Sakuya?s answer was hesitant. The severity of her expression sent chills down Mokou?s spine.

?There wasn?t just a sound, Mokou-san,? Sakuya said. ?There was a smell too.?

They charged past the reception desk, almost knocking the cell phone from Ichirin?s hand. Even then, the trip was only half-done - now they had to run all the way around the building to get to the rear wall.

?A smell?? Youmu said.

Sakuya nodded. ?It?ll be stronger out in the open. Take a sniff.?

The suggestion puzzled Mokou for a moment, but on Sakuya?s orders she took a breath through her nose. She caught a hint of something foul in the air, a smell that burned at her nostrils.

It was the smell of gasoline.

Oh, shit.

Mokou put two and two together, and started to push ahead of the other Sirens. She was faster on her feet than Sakuya by a long shot, and Youmu wouldn?t leave her sister behind. She made it to the rear end of the building a few seconds before the other Sirens.

Her eyes quickly fell on the now-drained barrel of gasoline, and the woman standing beside it.

?Ah.?

Keine Kamishirasawa did not offer the most grandiose of entrances. She stepped backwards from the Siren, terror rising to her face. She stepped away from the wall, out of the puddle of gasoline she had poured along its length.

?I?m sorry,? she whispered as she looked towards the forest. Mokou followed her gaze, seeing a wave of fishmen emerge from between the trees. Then another wave behind that. And another. And another.

She almost missed the lighter in Keine?s hand.

?No!?

Time slowed down for Mokou. The lighter left Keine?s hands. Mokou was running, faster than she?d ever ran before. She dived forwards, holding a hand out to grab at the lighter before it touched the ground.

As her body slammed into the earth, the lighter tapped against her fingertips.

Then all she saw was a brilliant pillar of flame.

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #477 on: September 05, 2012, 12:43:10 PM »
Well I knew it wouldn't be easy, but I wasn't exactly expecting that.

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #478 on: September 05, 2012, 12:52:35 PM »
I...Uh....Vhat just happen here?!
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Re: Dolphin Rider Koishi - Arc 6
« Reply #479 on: September 05, 2012, 03:21:12 PM »
Keine is an arsonist now. That's unexpected.

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