Author Topic: Parsee Quest (Part 2)  (Read 72064 times)

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #420 on: January 26, 2011, 01:41:41 AM »
>Huggle on Yuugi's leg.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #421 on: January 26, 2011, 01:45:47 AM »
> "Yuu~gi~... I feel sick..."

> "Wha--"
> Mokou is set down near the grey-haired girl.  "Watch her for a sec."  Then to you: "Wait there, I'm gonna get a bucket--"
> Yuugi leaps off the roof.  She comes back after two minutes with a metal bucket, and helps you sit up.

>Huggle on Yuugi's leg.

> You cling to Yuugi's leg.  She carefully pries you off and starts to rub your back.  "If you're gonna be sick, it's better to just let it all out."

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #422 on: January 26, 2011, 01:51:06 AM »
>"But I alrea*hic*dy let some out~"

Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #423 on: January 26, 2011, 01:51:49 AM »
> "Ugh... don't worry, I'm not going to-" Okay, yes we are.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #424 on: January 26, 2011, 02:01:47 AM »
>"But I alrea*hic*dy let some out~"

> "It looks like you're about to let out more."
> The grey-haired girl takes a look at Mokou, and her eyes bug out of her head.  "I-it's Fujiwara?!"

> "Ugh... don't worry, I'm not going to-" Okay, yes we are.

> Okay you can't hold it in anymore.  You start puking out the contents of your stomach into the bucket.  Yuugi continues to rub your back as you vomit, and soon enough you completely exhaust yourself.  At least it's out of your system now...

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #425 on: January 26, 2011, 02:07:17 AM »
> Sniffle. Vomiting sucks.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #426 on: January 26, 2011, 02:16:04 AM »
> Sniffle. Vomiting sucks.

> You sniffle.  How are oni able to take so much alcohol?

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #427 on: January 26, 2011, 02:20:50 AM »
> "Ugh... can we go home...?"
> Now that we're less bleary, who the hell have we been talking to, anyways?

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #428 on: January 26, 2011, 02:28:53 AM »
> "Ugh... can we go home...?"
> Now that we're less bleary, who the hell have we been talking to, anyways?

> "Yeah, better get outta here Komeiji-san flips her shit 'n sends someone out here.  Wouldn't be surprised if she saw all that danmaku all the way from the Palace," Yuugi says as she hoists you onto her back.  "Hold on."  She picks up Mokou and holds her under her arm.
> You've been talking to a small girl with mouse ears and tail.  An absolutely terrified mouse scurries from Mokou's pocket and flies into the mouse girl's dress.
> "Hmm, you don't look like you're from 'round here.  Wanna come with us?" Yuugi asks the mouse girl.  "Nothin' stopping you from getting into a fight down there."  She nods her head towards the streets.  The girl quakes where she stands and nods.

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[17:42] <Amra> Himiko's one of the people that's really cute but sometimes art shifts into like hard jojo-style
[17:42] <Amra> as she does something out of character

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #429 on: January 26, 2011, 02:34:09 AM »
>Hug Yuugi. But not too tight.

>Tell Yuugi about our reward?

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #430 on: January 26, 2011, 02:42:09 AM »
>Hug Yuugi. But not too tight.

>Tell Yuugi about our reward?

> As Yuugi starts hovering away from the roof, you let your head rest against her shoulder.
> You consider telling Yuugi about what Satori gave you, and if she'd know anything about the orb.

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[17:42] <Amra> Himiko's one of the people that's really cute but sometimes art shifts into like hard jojo-style
[17:42] <Amra> as she does something out of character

Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #431 on: January 26, 2011, 02:44:20 AM »
> Eh, go to sleep for now, instead. We can tell Yuugi about that stuff, and bitch at mousegirl about stealing our "reward", later.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #432 on: January 26, 2011, 02:49:28 AM »
>Well, we can try.
>"Gimme back my mouse, jerk..."
>Cling to Yuugi.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #433 on: January 26, 2011, 02:55:10 AM »
> Eh, go to sleep for now, instead. We can tell Yuugi about that stuff, and bitch at mousegirl about stealing our "reward", later.

>Well, we can try.
>"Gimme back my mouse, jerk..."
>Cling to Yuugi.

> You let yourself fall asleep, but you try to complain about your lack of mouse first while clinging to Yuugi.  You're already out before you can hear the mouse girl's reply.
> Maybe it's from exhaustion or something, but you can't remember any of your dreams this time. 
> When you wake up, you're in Yuugi's house with a wet washcloth over your forehead.  You shift around a bit and notice that you're on a spare futon.  Mokou is curled up next to you, drooling on her sleeve.  You hear the mouse girl talking to Yuugi nearby.

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[17:42] <Amra> Himiko's one of the people that's really cute but sometimes art shifts into like hard jojo-style
[17:42] <Amra> as she does something out of character

Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #434 on: January 26, 2011, 02:58:04 AM »
> Shift washcloth over eyes so that we don't have to look at evil lights.
> Try to listen to the conversation.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #435 on: January 26, 2011, 02:59:03 AM »
>Take a look at Mokou's sleeping face afterwards.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #436 on: January 26, 2011, 02:59:37 AM »
>Try to remember what happened.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #437 on: January 26, 2011, 03:12:00 AM »
> Shift washcloth over eyes so that we don't have to look at evil lights.
> Try to listen to the conversation.

> Evil, evil lights.  You move the washcloth over your eyes, which makes things much better.
> You try listening in on the conversation.  So far, it's mostly mouse girl talking.
> "--my dowsing rods, too, and she took me along every time she went to go burn corpses.  That creepy satori only interfered if those horrid snakes were involved--"
> "Komeiji-san's not so bad."
> "That's easy for you to say!  Anyway, I hate those snakes!"
> "Snakes, huh..."

>Take a look at Mokou's sleeping face afterwards.

> You move the washcloth away again so you can see Mokou's sleeping face.  She looks so peaceful and off-guard.

>Try to remember what happened.

> You left the Silent Shrine with Yuugi and Mokou to go find some musicians, Mokou got drunk, you got drunk and threw up, there was some girl with mouse ears, if you recall correctly.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #438 on: January 26, 2011, 03:14:18 AM »
> That sleeping face of Mokou's so adorable... wonder if we look as cute when asleep.
> Doubt it. Paru paru...

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #439 on: January 26, 2011, 03:14:39 AM »
>And...Oh right!
>Sit up!
>Point at mouse youkai
>"You took my mouse, asshole!"
>Deal with physical repercussions of this action.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #440 on: January 26, 2011, 03:31:37 AM »
>...Have we ever saw Yuugi's sleeping face?

Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #441 on: January 26, 2011, 03:34:01 AM »
> ... Add quest: "See Yuugi's Sleeping Face".

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #442 on: January 26, 2011, 04:41:17 AM »
> Wait, they don't know we're awake yet. Perhaps we should stealthily reclaim our mouse before drawing attention to ourself.
Edit: > Actually, have we sobered up enough to realize that the mouse she took was Mokou's, not ours?
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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #443 on: January 26, 2011, 05:01:03 AM »
Evidently not, since I didn't realize until you mentioned it. Let's keep rolling with that, though.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #444 on: January 26, 2011, 05:03:10 AM »
Yeah, I didn't notice any mention that it was Mokou's at all. Ah well.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #445 on: January 26, 2011, 07:37:36 AM »
Eh we were drunk we don't need an excuse
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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #446 on: January 26, 2011, 11:32:46 AM »
> That sleeping face of Mokou's so adorable... wonder if we look as cute when asleep.
> Doubt it. Paru paru...

> Mokou's sleeping face is so cute...there's no way you look that cute asleep. paruparuparu

>And...Oh right!
>Sit up!
>Point at mouse youkai
>"You took my mouse, asshole!"
>Deal with physical repercussions of this action.

> ...Ah!
> You sit up, point to the mouse youkai, and express your anger for her stealing your mouse.  You immediately regret this once everything starts spinning.  You let yourself flop back onto the futon.

>...Have we ever saw Yuugi's sleeping face?

> ...No.

> ... Add quest: "See Yuugi's Sleeping Face".

> Quest Added: See Yuugi's Sleeping Face

> Wait, they don't know we're awake yet. Perhaps we should stealthily reclaim our mouse before drawing attention to ourself.
Edit: > Actually, have we sobered up enough to realize that the mouse she took was Mokou's, not ours?

> Oh no, maybe you should've tried being stealthy instead!  Too late, it looks like they already know you're awake.
> "Do you want some water or something?" Yuugi asks.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #447 on: January 26, 2011, 11:38:02 AM »
>"I'd like to have my head cut off, please. Well... Water may be fine too"
>Looks like Mokou fitted in here perfectly. Success! Now to get Cirno here... Someday.


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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #448 on: January 26, 2011, 11:45:39 AM »
>"I'd like to have my head cut off, please. Well... Water may be fine too"
>Looks like Mokou fitted in here perfectly. Success! Now to get Cirno here... Someday.

>  "Huh?  'Kay, water, then."  You hear Yuugi get up and walk out of the room.
> Cirno's a fairy(?), isn't she?  Those don't tend to last long down here...but Mokou sure lasted.
> "..Fujiwara was the last person I was expecting to see down here," the mouse girl says.

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Re: Parsee Quest (Part 2)
« Reply #449 on: January 26, 2011, 02:35:32 PM »
>When Yuugi comes back, take a sip of the water; nice and refreshing.

>If Yuugi knelt down beside us when giving us our drink, rest head against her.

>"Well, I guess that was my fa... Wait! You know her? How?"

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>Cirno may be a fairy, but I'd love to see her get drunk, p*ss off an oni, get blasted, respawn and then repeat.

>That would be awesome! XD