First of all, apologies for the large delay, busy times struck all of our judges, accompanied with a healthy dose of laziness. You'd think only three entries would make it easier, but alas. However, now it's done and over with, so here we go:
~JUDGEMENT~Three different approaches, three nice entries. SMS, Rou, Logos, you all did well. Only one can win though, and the conclusion was reached that it shall be
Roukanken. Congratulations.
When I read your scene I had to double-check if you didn't just exchange some words and names from the original text. But nope, it's an almost complete rewrite while keeping all the main points of the original. It's well adjusted to the characters. And it's done in (I quote another judge)
~*~perfect iambic pentameter~*~.
Enjoy your Wordsmith, Rou, you have earned it.
Now for the new challenge~
Sweet DreamsDreams are an intriguing thing. They can be good or bad, they can show you things you have never seen in reality, or can just as well be so realistic that they leave you utterly confused as you wake up.
Now if dreams are such a weird thing in reality, just how much more stranger will they be in a land of fantasy? In a world where some may only exist in dream worlds in the first place? Where magic and creatures of mythology are an everyday thing?
This is for you to find out about, and write it down for this challenge.
The requirement is to use dreams as either a framing device (yes, this means "it was all a dream" is acceptable here), a narrative device (a dream that reveals something about a character), or simply a plot element (a character has a dream). Apart from that, everything goes.
The Deadline is May 1st, two weeks from now. Have fun writing~